Chapter comments on the chapter Flame Power Coupled With the Firestorm Saber! of the book Digging to Survive: I Can See Hints

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19SARD99

to author this chapter is correct as the original but for previous chapter some of them did not make any sane because you skip to many important part of the story and it wrong from sand troll fight to mysterious chest with fire power. In sand troll fight to many skipped details as reward after defeat the sand troll and usefullness of sand troll blood, also in previous chapters that klein got golden chest but from where ?! it because you skip the mutated swarm worm and add your own story (an encounter with another survivor and ceberus, that thing did not in the source). If you want to add that you need something like a "what if" momment or you can add some of your explain about "why you adding your story that not related with the source". ok that all that i want to say to you.

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courting_death

there is no such thing as chapter 41(or 53 if you insist) onward for those confused,qidian is literally stole the story and adding the garbage writing after by a garbage paid writer.