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This is good novel with fast paced, highly recommend..............,...,.....................................................................
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Axteria
hey author, there are some confusing words after you edited the chapter where they had 3sum. If I didn't look on the comments and read the unedited chapter, some paragraphs doesn't make sense.
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ExPandaLord
Great book. The story is really interesting and actually makes sense. The mc actually has a brain and plans stuff ahead. The side characters are also well fleshed out, to the point that some of them feel like the mc. The world building is also really good and the update stability is consistent with 1 chapter a day.
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HeartRend
Absolutely amazing novel. The characters are more fleshed out than many other novels on this site, and the grammer and readability are phenomenal. I wouldn't say this is the best novel ever, but its a great read, and although there are some cliche's, they are handled pretty well that you don't feel upset when they appear.
I absolutely loved the story so far (ch 32), and look forward to reading more chapters in the future.
The MC, while not the smartest cookie, uses his past knowledge semi-wisely and works for his success. He also realizes the mistakes he made in the past and has pretty good character development.
I would definitly reccomend this to anyone interested in the following genre's:
Action, Virtual Reality, Romance, Harem, Reincarnation/Do-Over, Fantasy, Martial Arts, Etc... (story just started, so can't say much)
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Aron_Rodrigues
Me gusta pero estas mucho tiempo en la realidad en ves de en el juego llevas muchos capítulos y aún no se casi nada del juego ni lo he ara el personaje en el.
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Giovane_Martins
now that i have become addicted to the novel, i will have to wait for the release ... sad the life of a reader waiting for the author to release chapters .... sigh.
The novel is incredible with good potency, but I hope the author is not discouraged as many do
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Mel_Aniv
The start has many info for my small brain to process but I get the hang of it later on. 😉 Nice nice nice.....And your grammar was okay. The plot was hooking and the narration was smooth and fluent. Nice it going and I enjoyed the reading experience that you gave. Kudos and Peace ✌️
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Spicybuun
Hello! Good job so far on the story. I liked reading about him building his strength up, and it's nice to see him put in the effort. A suggestion I have for you is to describe how the characters look like. They have personality but lack description. You could also improve your writing if you emphasize how he feels after running to build up his strength. I noticed you put what his reaction was, but you could also use "He brushed off the sweat on his forehead as he leaned heavily against the wall, his breath coming out in short puffs. Sweat had soaked through his shirt when he was running and he barely had the energy to stay upright". Overall, pretty interesting story. Keep up the good work! [img=recommend][img=recommend]
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AlternateEg0
I have stopped webnovel for awhile but this book got me back.
Story is hard to judge as at 20 plus chapter mc still have not started the game.
The slow build up is nice as it concentrates on the relationship build up rather than op mc gets girl, ***, op wins the world storyline.
The nsfw scene is pretty well written and is the main reason i am supporting the writer :)
The Low Score i gave is becausenof world background which writer have not gone into yet. High marks for character development.
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resterconcentre
Thank you! here for the ahem....research. So far so good. Hope to read more of your ahem, research.
As for the rest of the story, it is a little more or less the same as others in this genre. The main difference would be the plot line seems a bit slower as the author does not rush into the gaming portion right after reincarnation.
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