Id recommend making a shameless word count so it'd reach the 15000 requirement that way it will get more attention anywho I really like the characters you've added for the crossover also if I'm not wrong isn't that ryuuga guy actually a girl?
Good job so far! As you have stated, you do need to improve your grammar, but it's great nevertheless. Quick question, will the original characters from The Disastrous Life Of Saiki K, Is It Tough Being A Friend and To Love-Ru also be in this novel? Also, will this novel be a Harem? If it is, YEEEEEAAAAAAHHHHHH BABY!!
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