I’m sure this has the potential to be very good but it’s very difficult to read for native English speakers. I’m used to incorrect pronouns on this app but some sentences are incomplete and trying to guess what the author meant or what scene they’re trying to set can take you out of the story. I assume this hasn’t been proofread and edited yet so I’ll wait a while and return to see if there’s any updates.
i loved the story, this is comedy romance, entertaining anda made me laugh, i love your work, keep the good work[img=update][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
Are we submitting AI written novels now? Is that a thing? I can't believe this is a native English speaker. Did you google translate this?
Every sentence is painful to read. I can't follow any sort of logic from the characters. I lost it at Vera honestly asking if a male character ever wore clothes. What the actual heck??? and her aside about having to wear clothes like it was a chore? Look, if this is a real person I feel bad, but this has to be a mildly edited AI script. I can't believe an ***** wrote this with a straight face.
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This novel so cool. I can feel when I reading this story. Can't wait to reading next chapter! So you guys, must reading this story! You will fall in love to this story!
this is fabulous one! i always chuckled when starts to read this book, very recommended [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
sweet story' of marriage couple who not know well each other... slow plot, sweet scene and the comedy Made me laugh.. good, recommended, i like the story
This story is so interesting and unique.... the writing is even very neat and easy to understand. I will read it every day and wait for the next chapter
I like the storyline, the main character is also amazing.
very good to read in my spare time, I hope every day a continuation of this Story. hopefully it will always update and make me curious
I'm waiting for the continuation of the story, it must be getting better and better. I fell in love with this story. hopefully it can continue to update
The story is good, likes the language style, is easy to understand, doesn't make you bored. can be read while relaxing, never wait for the continuation of the story
the writing is very good, the storyline is interesting, always likes romantic stories. I'm always waiting for the continuation of the story. Don't be bored with updates, OK Author!
Romance stories are great, but rarely can anyone be this interesting. Always waiting for the continuation of the story, even though it is long ... but still loyal. love you author!
love it!!
accidentally opened it, then attracted. the storyline is good, likes the main character. Interesting to wait, don't be long to update the author
This is a good story, I really love this story.[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
I always waiting for next chapter[img=update][img=update]
Go...go...go... Fighting for author 💪💪💪
Very gooood
love the story, because it is good. Don't update it for long, author ...
Waiting for each chapter ..
the main character is always at heart.
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