Chapter comments on the chapter ~1~ of the book ~Woke~

It was interesting but maybe you should look into 'dialogue in books'

I'm glad I decided to come back onto WN. I've also had severe writer's block too; I'm happy I read your comment on my story and looked at your work! Keep up the great work. I know you'll make it; it just takes time

Good 1st chapter. Like you said it could have been longer but other then that i have no issues 👍🏼

So far, it's going good but u can improve it. Believe in yourself! ヽ(´▽｀)/