Hi, Macy it's been long time time since we last time talk.
how you doing out there, everything is fine?
are you still mad at me, after what happened.
can we talk again.
can you unblock me.
The opening chapters start off with a bang. An intriguing premise of the whole story for the readers to explore the later chapters and so on. A must read.
Amazing book, only the blurb got me hooked on the book immediately and even I started reading it. I couldnβt drop it. love it and I canβt wait for the author to update more
The synopsis hit too close to home so it got me hooked to the book and I must say the book is written so well. The author has a way of making reader hooked up with the book. The writing style is so catchy and the storyline is captivating. Highly recommend.
The synopsis really good and catching, your writing style is amazing overall a really good novel, you are totally a talented author, keep the good work.
The synopsis of the book was really good same as the plot. I'm really glad that I had given a chance to read this book. I'm hooked. [img=update][img=recommend][img=recommend]
A good read. Highly recommended this book. The story is lovely with intriguing synopsis. Glad I read them.[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
Woah! Short synopsis but it has a strong impact. The plot was unique and good. The Author made the characters very well and relatable. Good choices of words. This is such a good story, I'm looking forward to read the rest of the chapters and see how this story will unfolds. Great job Author!
Cry cry π. I promise I wonβt spoil it for everyone but I love this story about family. You canβt chose your family but you can make positive things out of the relationships that you are given. I promise! Heart goes out to Lorraine π.
I can relate so much with Lorraine. I also lost my mother so this story will always be in my heart. Beautifully written with great descriptions of the characters loss. Highly recommended story[img=recommend][img=coins]
Everything about this book is gorgeous! The cover page, the title , the MC etc. The storyline shows u the pain and frustration of Lorraine, making u imagine everything and situate oneself in sivh situations. The author leads the events in a wonderful pacing, so that u don't feel lost at anytime. If I must say, this is really a good read. Looking forward to it!
To be honest, I was a little confused when I started reading. Was Lorraine telling the story of something that happened before in her life? That was the question I asked myself. And then, as I continued to read through the following chapter, I realized, oh yes she is. It was so sad to read her mother had died because of her father's lack of compassion and patience. And did he marry someone without telling Lorraine? That's so sad.
Overall, Lorraine story is like reality. Anything can happen, no matter in what position or class you are. It is original, and I like that. Though, I would not normally read books with this theme, but this book was touching. Thanks for sharing author.
The writing style is very unique and the plot seems nice! Though I personally wouldn't read this, I would definitely recommend it to my friends! Keep up the good work!
The story is well written and interesting, the contents have good suspense in them which can easily make a reader thrive for the next chapter. Good work, author.
what a beautiful dark tale, enough ripple to create drama and mystery. It just holds onto you and never let go as the story progresses and you came into a realization that you just got addicted! π
Totally enjoyed reading this, the author did an amazing job putting the story together. The synopsis got to me but the story itself had me turning the pages for more. Highly recommend.
Hello, Author. This is Novelstar_PG speaking, a web editor from Novelstar. I have done reading the first few chapters of your book, and I've noticed that this has a great potential to get published in our platform. I want to offer a non-exclusive contract to it. Kindly send me and email with a screenshot of this offer. Tell me if you're interested.
Thank you and have a good day ahead!
Totally enjoyable. The plot concept and the development. It brought tears to my eyes, and it just makes you stop and think, things like this happen. It's a good story that should be given a chance.
I enjoyed what I read, the emotional trauma Lorraine will go through will be this book a lovely read. Nice book, I highly recommend. Thumbs up to the author
the narrative of the story expresses the memories of the main character in such a masterful way, explaining every scene in detail as if the mc was there spectating the course of events, it caught me since the work is so well done, good job to the author!
I have only read a little but the beginning is very intriguing, definitely makes one want to know what will happen next. interesting storyline and background
This story is amazing, it's a hooking emotional start to the way the author has written it, it's good. Also, the description is to the point and something that made a reader automatically click on the book. The author has done a great job!
Wow this book is very interesting. I love the storyline because it is very unique, although I have read only a few chapters I am sure I am already in love with the book.
I like the plot of the story and the way you right in some part is awesome and I can see a real talent..
I am not a good writers myself but...
There are loopholes in the plot..
Like in reality a baby doesn't have any recollection about the very specific thing that happens in their life, specially when they are new born..
It might be safe if it is a POV of the Parent..
Second
Language and dictionary is a real challenge for a three year old child what more for analization of the situation..
A baby may feel hostile towards violence and it can be traumatic for a child but somehow it will be a mistery for them of what the situation is all about..
All in all..
It is a good story and has potential..
Keep it up..
As a read the first chapter it was sad but as you read more it makes you more curious about what will happen next. I love my mom and if I saw my father did that I think that's a trauma for me. Great Job author πππ
The story starts off a bit sad and I felt very sorry for Lorraine, so much has happened to her at a very young age. I hope things get better for her and that she finds happiness.
The concept and professional ways the author put out their work is great! it shows how the author is hooking us up very well! keep up the good work, author!
"Symphony" hooked me to read further. While reading the chapter I felt quite an emotional ride of pain, emotions, and sympathy for the female lead Lorriane who is struggling with her life. The writing style is well written. I hope the story ends on a happy note. Definitely recommended for reading. Keep up the great work, Author!
TRASH_MONAL