I have never cried this much over a webnovel. This story was so well developed that each character had that perfect amount of depth and detail to them that at several points you could relate to them. Our female lead went through plenty, really stepping into her role as the best stepmother stepkids could ask for. I also loved the fact that she made sure that her life and the lives of the kids were stable and that her influence made them change for the better. Her love life was even the type youβd get jealous of. She got that earth shattering love, a soulmate. Unfortunately thatβs where my waterworks got the best of me. Luckily this was a matter of βlove always finds a wayβ and the βred strings of fateβ were in effect. Author I loved this story and Iβm glad I finished it on my second read. The mix of modern and back in the day concept was great and the ending was also something I half had an idea of I wanted to happen and I was genuinely surprised. The ups and downs really had me feeling different emotions. A wonderful plot and literary work. Thank you.
This novel is a great novel that highlights familial bonds and chosen relationships, overcoming hardships, and seeking the courage to dream and while being daring enough to pursue it. The characters have moments of setbacks and lessons, but remain soβ¦human. The universe is one that pulls you in with tears and laughter. All side and main characters add dimension and substance to the written world.
Goodness!!!
It has been years since I last read something on Webnovel. This is really good, but I think author could have done a better job at background buildup. Our FL and new ML interactions were okay, however, they could have had some feelings or attraction at the beginning. Because no matter how workaholic or family oriented one can be, there are times that they might get caught in feelings and distracted. It is perfectly fine for an outsider point of view to perceive that she is not thinking or reading too much on their interaction, however it is not if the story is about her POV. Otherwise, readers might feel that it is bit rushed during the transition period. And also, rather than generalizing their business growth, author could have taken a few incidents to emphasize their influence. For an example, sister Wei's story drags bit too much, yet it only adds a little color to the story (May be it does but this is how I felt at that moment, because the author proves their capability for emotional buildup through her writing in the last few chapters). Even so, compared to some other novels in this platform, most of the characters are properly linked to the story at the end.
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I think we deserve another two chapters about their second life, because of the heartache at the end. It is totally unfair that you stop at that "NO". Dear author, you are bad. Totally deserve your own Shiliu for stopping like that. How could you!!
I really love the plot of the book. the book was really interesting to read. The character are really funny and interesting. Can't wait to read more books from the author
If you are tired of formulate plot of CEO or celebrity transmigration story. This book is for you. I know the theme is not new as it is another transmigrating story however this novel really brought something new. I like that it is a short one unlike those 1000+ chapters as this novel was not dragged for long. I love the chemistry and the design for each characters. It all have the theme you may like stepmother, divorce, love triangle, empowered woman, face slapping, prince charming, family, little children, and unending love. I love how the events were compared to the plot that the FL red and what she done to not make a drastic changes in her surroundings even if she knew the future. Everything is great. I just lowkey want to have a special chapters for every supporting characters ending. I wanna know what happen to them after she came back to the reality and what are their counterpart in the present.
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This is a wonderfully written novel. Very in-depth. I felt I was apart of the story not just reading it. There is so much action, drama and romance, you canβt wait to see whatβs next. Excellent read and a great author. Thank you for such a great work. This is a must read π donβt miss out!
Now this story is the leading example of a strong female lead. Though it might start off as a cliche trope, it leaves the cliches behind through the MC's personality and strength. She's not helpless where she needs an overbearing CEO type to come in and fix everything, and the author doesn't compromise in the terms of romance where most authors try to take the easy way out.
If you had a hard time falling in love with characters, don't look no further. This characters hold a piece my heart. This book made me feel every emotion one could feel. 10/10 would recommend.
although i like the story but, it left a bad taste when the mc and ji guy got into relationship. I felt that the author in the 1st place didn't put effort in developing the characters. Look at Qihai and Ji guy, although they have to compete to each other to love MC, you can see a gap when it comes to developing the story, Ji guy have more screen time in the story, kinda unfair for Qihai. Specially the background of his story in the 1st part. Tragic soldier and got wronged.
C:I author really focus in development between Ji guy and the MC right in the beginning.
*Its little unfair for Qihai
The author introduce him a tragic character in the early stage of story, but in the end he didn't not deserve the ending because Ji guy all have the scene to court the mc. IF author gave them same treatment probably qihai got upper hand. because its kinda unsettling, your own children convince you to devorce....
There's really no development Between Qihai and MC
About the GU
*wth, ??? I know in early they used that method but in the first place where the heck did she get that? and know to use that .....
*life style and living conditions
-Dont have any improvement,.
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Can you please make some more chapters or epilogue of their story.
PETITION FOR SEQUEL! Dear Author my little heart couldn't take this cliff hanger ending.. please give me an update about their relationship! Did they add each other on WeChat? Did they follow their profiles on Weibo? What about the kids?? I need to know!! Boohoo~
Have to say love this book. The characters the interactions the plot it was all fab. Never cried so much when reading a book. Thuroughly love this. Definitely recommend.
Have you ever wished for a book to never end? At this moment I find myself hoping that the characters cross over into the real world. This book is as unique as unique can be, the lack of focus on romance but on every form of love and healing is just unusually warm and beautiful.
Ahh~ The story is really the best. But it was so devastating for me as the couple I ship didnt end up together. It's sad me π But overall story are really good and well developing π it's kind of life lesson too
one of the bestest works i have come across in the webnovels soo farrπππ₯°π―π€―π€£ππ―π―π―π―π―π―π―π―π―[img=recommend][img=faceslap][img=coins][img=fp][img=exp][img=recommend][img=exp][img=fp][img=fp][img=coins][img=update][img=faceslap]
What happened to the ending? Anyway i cried a lot toward the end. Like ugly crying because it was so good. Overall the story and progression was good! The kids development was also awesome!
I loved the this novel a lot, it made me ππ a lot in the end , I thought it to be a heartwarming family story of the genius kids and a loving mother but why did it end as heart wrenching love story .
I enjoyed the story a lotππ
After 3 or 4 stories full of disappointing ending, I was craving for some fluffs and romance and then I saw this book! It indeed has romance(though I kinda feel like it's more of romantic subplot) their first life time together brought me to tears!!!
Anyway, let's start with the kids first. I like their characters and development a lot. They are geniuses and definitely OP sometimes and matured but still has the naivety, childishness and immaturity that a kid should have. Then there was the supporting characters like Shao Qiyang(πππ), Tang Moling and Mu Xue. I kinda expected their ending the moment Tang Moling liked Mu Jingzhe so I am not that surprised that Qiyang and Mu Xue ended up together but still, I really think that Shao Qiyang is still too good for Mu Xue. Then there's Shao Qihai! At the middle of the story, I'm still neutral because I am still not sure who's going to be the final male lead but since Jingzhe and Qihai were married so I thought they'd be the end game so I'm kinda expecting for their interactions at the beginning. Later on, I realized that Shao Qihai has becoming more and more of a supporting character and he has no sweet interaction with Jingzhe like Ji Buwang does, that's why I've found out that he's not the male lead because he definitely doesn't have the male lead momentum and halo/aura. He's like a background character honestly, but I still felt sad for him. But compared with Buwang, he's definitely lacking so I'm not that sad that he and Jingzhe weren't the end game. And of course, there's Ji Buwang! I am still sad whenever I remember their first lifetime together. Why the need for that tragic ending? Though it's good that he and Jingzhe met again in the modern world, it's not enough. I want more extra chapters where I can guarantee that both of them reached a happy ending. Also, if I may add, I am quite satisfied and dissatisfied at the same time that he's a realistic character. He's not your typical overbearing and domineering CEO, he gave off the feeling that although he looks too good to be true, but not to the point that he's way too good and unrealistic. Maybe it's because of the setting where they are? And lastly, Mu Jingzhe, our FL. She's definitely like the other OP transmigrators(just like what she said) where they encounter setbacks but will always end up with series of face slapping and are considered a genius. She's a realistic character even if she's a transmigrator. She's not OP, not a god-like existence where she know everything or can learn anything quickly. The Shao siblings are even smarter that her in my opinion. But she, unlike the other transmigrators who are geniuses, gave a realistic feel.
Overall, the story is good. The character development(especially of the children) is great too. The supporting characters are not just a mere background characters. Even Li Zhaodi, Mu Teng, Zhao Lan(π€), Shao Qiyun(π΅π€¬), etc. are integral characters somehow. Aside from a few more special chapters, I've got nothing to ask.
This was an amazing read as a whole. π I love everything about it. The characters, the storyline, the ending, everything! I want more! Thank you, author, so much for this incredibly warm story. I really love itπππππππβ€ππ
the end was soon unexpected. it's sad. the story is a quiet time stealer you can't put it down.
unexpected, very good character build and creative all round.
If you haven't started reading this yet, then get to it !!
It is well written, with great characters and good character development.
kept me hooked and guessing till the end and now its finished πππ
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