Well-written dialogues and description, author did a good job on his writing skill. With an information on the first chapter wouldn't make the readers confused. If you are into fantasy, give this a try !
I liked a good apocalypse story and this is a nice start of how an apocalypse begin. i also enjoy the light comedy (yes, i am amused easily and tend to laugh at the littlest thing).
Since ive read the author's previous work, im somewhat accustomed to his style of writing and i must say its def improved. keep it up author and i'll be silently rooting for you β€β€
the battle scene was described so well that i got hooked to it. good words and easy description. love the story. good work author, looking forward to further updates
i was amazed at the fine detailing of the story, i want to know more and it is keeping me on edge everyday. the information was very creative and unique, good work author
i am not much interested in these types of novels but this author just proved me wrong! chapters are wonderfully written and i can sense that this would be a whole lot of an adventure for a reader like me. definitely worth the read and i hope the author continue to update more!πͺ
i really love the way the author tells the story.. first chapter was a whole lot of fun to read and it was like i had been taken into the novel's world. immersive, and wonderful imagery. thumbs up and kudos to the author!
I can clearly see where this story ganna go... and it's gonna be a great one. I was amazed by how the author make his battle scene, and it is well written, so better check this out.
the story's concept is well developed, proper description is given. good usage of grammar and new experiments in this genre. the plot is very interesting.best of luck author
the writing style is unlike any style i've seen before.. first chapter was a whole load of info but the way it was written is so interesting. the premise of the novel is wonderful and kudos to the author!
it's so rare in these days to write a novel without an OP system. looking farward, i believe this novel will reach heights.
keep it up authorππββ
I am literally new in this type of writing style. It is a little bit chaotic for me (I have only read 3 chapters, though) and I can't seem to pinpoint who are the main characters in the story. Different situations are being portrayed and the switch of scenarios are not smooth enough for readers to understand.
I think that it was the author's style to have multiple perpective. .? Anyways, this is an interesting read!
The word "AD 2025" should be written as "2025 AD".
I feel the gate should also have been elaborated on. Like how was it created?? How did it come about.
Ok so shameless author here promoting his second work. This is my entry for WSA. I hope you guys enjoy this one.
I'll try to deliver premium content as much as possible.
Things to note about this book includes the presence of Multiple protagonists and somewhat dramatized scenes.
Anyways thanks in advance : )
Typhlix