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Jyojiko
Cue in all the sad songs that involves rain!
It may be too early to do a review for this book given that it only has 5 chapters, but it was such an enjoyable read that I would recommend it to anyone who likes story that could break 💔
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Realistic stories always touch your heart as you can relate the things depicted in the story to your life. The way emotions are being written distinctly shows how much emotions are embedded in each part of the story.
I personally believe that a good story is all about emotions, feelings, and the difficulties a person undergoes during his journey to be successful. This is the story that gives you all! So, without any thought just add this story to your libraries.
Through the description in the story, one can analyze what kind of character Rudra is!!
The story is slow-paced in the first few chapters and that seems okay as the character is still building up.
Keep up with your good work, dear author, and best wishes for the contest.
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Only a few chaps are out so I cannot give constructive feedback. Nevertheless, interesting story. There are little to no grammatical errors. The character design also seems good so far. The story has potential and I can't wait to see what the author will give us.
Still, I suggest the author not using unfamiliar words like 'tuk-tuk' and work on the world background.
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Madyan_wani
The first realistic book. I love the plot. The description is too lit. Writer gimme half of ur writing power.
My eyes were swelling I had to keep my mobile off.But novel hook me from the start.
A must read novel worth reading.
Hey you,yes you aspirant reader. Grab your popcorn nd enjoy story.
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CREATIVE_SPACE
Truly a remarkable story. The synopsis was so captivating that it made me read all the chapters at once. The emotions were well depicted and honestly writer I envy how you portrayed them so well. Me added it to my library. Good luck author!! 🤗
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Ferjenni
This is such an interesting story, honestly! Unique than the usual stories I have reviewed in WN. Just work on the dialogues a lil bit more instead of just summarizing what happen in the description. This book has so much potential. Thanks author!
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