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yash_kant
I have read the initial chapters and I like how the story is setup with a non-mainstream theme of 'Mafia'. The established world of the novel has lot of potential for exciting development. Also the main protagonist is neither OP nor to lack in power, with a good contrasting personality trait which give a plus point to this novel. If the author focuses on main story without much overloading the chapter with unimportant stuff, the novel will become much more exciting. It will definitely grew into top rank novel.
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AudreyJeru4
oooooh another book
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nice nice nice nice
I want moreeeeee
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so I shall gift you sparkles
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yu_chan_desu
another novel and another 5 star drop review! might i say that i will not say anymore because of the five stars? ok. i will not say more. ciaaaooo
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Daoist_Little_Yun
Are you a lost reader? I bet you're handsome or pretty. Read this novel if you are. Otherwise, read it twice. Don't believe me? Read it thrice.
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William_Pendragon
This book is simply too good to not read, especially because the author might just make you an offer you can't refuse. Read before it's too late!
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Magic_
oh ues, this looks very wonderful indeed it does looks like a great novel that I will try out for sure!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!+
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Zombie
When your world is so stylish it even has its own fedora.
Then there are the guns.
Maybe just American who knows...
But seriously, real talk.
How many chapters will include fedoras?
This might be a deal-breaker btw.
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TaintedMetal
Here's a 5 star review from my Vault of 5 Stars seeing that this novel deserve such stars. The novel is very nice. Such action, much intrigue, WOW :D
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AinaWang
5/5 (๑ↀᆺↀ๑)✧
What a masterpiece!!! (*Φ皿Φ*)
The author's creativity is very well portrayed in this book! (=ΦÅΦ=)
Well-written, with good descriptions and awesome lead character! ٩(ↀДↀ)۶
I am so glad I came across it! ฅ(*ΦωΦ*) ฅ
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TrueDawn
This review has been automatically generated by the Godfather World System as a way to increase the ratings of this novel. Although not much could be said of the novel for now, it has been approved by the system as being an S-grade novel.
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Shining
Hey author, I must give a five star ratings for this book. I would like to suggest everyone to read the story. Though I read only five chapters, I would say the story is astonishing. Keep writing ❤️
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Littlepunnie
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Ysabel_xox
I like it! The synopsis is interesting and it really made me want to read it. The first chapter shows what is happening or what the story entails. I'm still annoyed at the guy who fudging killed him.
Great story though! I can't see any grammatical errors. It's smooth to read and it's fun to read too!
Great job author!
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Idczhen
The cover 5/5
The synopsis 5/5
The writing? It was amazingly written and it surprised me that Webnovel has such quality writer. This is a hidden gem and I discovered it. Give me a medal and reward please.
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Madyan_wani
omo writer...I love the plot.How can you write so well. Gimme half of your writing powers.[img=update]
Keep updating .More power to you.[img=update][img=recommend]
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The_Celestial_King
The author of the ball of nothingness is here again with another masterpiece
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marichat_nettenoir
A mafia-themed VR novel? Unique, and unlike anything I've seen before. This story is amazing, the plotline, superb. Stepping into the life of Zen Taro certainly is interesting, although I won't go into any details out of fear of spoiling what is to come, hehe.
But, I highly recommend this novel, and you can be d*mn sure whatever Destiny_Aitsuji writes is top notch.
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Sabin_Subedi_Fei
Nice story, another amazing story from the destiny author. Keep up the nice work.................................................................,......................
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Izavelle_Brielle
Wow!!! Great job, Author! Kudos for the plot and character development.... I’m nOt so familiar with the VR plot line but you made it so well, I can’t help but get hooked!!! It reminded me of the anime Darwin’s Game....
Goodluck.... 👍❤️😎
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1King_Rep1
Thrown right in to the action, this Action packed start leaves you hungry for more. Waiting to see the clever ways the mc survives from day to day is what will keep me coming back for more. This is a must read for anyone looking to get their blood pumping!
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RachelRuth
Did you just get here, buddy? Let me lay down the rules—Read This Now.
I know what you're thinking. Who the fucc are you to tell me what to do? Well, I didn't make the rules, bud. The Godfather did. Are you in the mood for a new type of online arena? Check out the Mafia VR and step into the life of Zen Taro. This story is pretty epic and if you know our [Boss Bitch] Destiny_Aitsuji then you already know that this story has got the quality, consistency and all of that jazzy stuff that we readers are looking for.
Haven't heard of her? Well, better save that in your memory bank because this story is going up the Ranks! You better do your part, chum. Throw in the Power Stones that you've been hoarding and place your bets with me—you don't wanna kick the bucket, now do you? Go on, we're watching you, pal.
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meixiaolian
Hi, author-nim! You hooked me on your first chap, its great. Love the writing style too, descriptive yet could grasp the readers imagination. :))
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ForeverPupa
I havent read, but Aitsuji is an author that is well known to make many great novels!
top notch quality and great grammar
Try it our yourself and you'll know that I speak truth ;^)
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Maomii
I must say I was very intrigued by this novel's concept. I never read a Mafia-themed VR novel before and that caught my attention. As I was reading there were many things that made me stop and go hmm. For example, when we first meet the MC he was Civilian #3207. That made me wonder what type of world he lived in where the people didn't have names.
I was upset that he died just by helping someone, I literally shaking my head chiding him about playing good samaritan. The game itself looked to be very ********. The action at the start was wonderful.
I can't wait to see what the author does next in the gameplay. This will definitely be a fun read. :3
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Roselia_Black
Growing up video games has always been something that I have always loved even when I didn't read many video game novels, but this is one of the best that I may have come across. I am absolutely in love with this book.
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Zero_Things
Godfather world. at first I thought this story was about a godfather who lived in the world but it more like he is the godfather of the whole world. And just judging from the characters and other things then it is an amazing read and I recommend that you read this!
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Resurgent
Thought I'd just check it out and Bam!
Just like that I stayed.
I would definitely recommend!
But what do I know,
Just try it and tell me what you think
🤓😁😈😈👍👍👏
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PermanentScarlet
What is this? What is this? A new book by the author of Ball of Nothing?
Also, the mafia? I have high expectations now.
Also noticed the author is undergoing some kind of puberty change? The personality in the author notes are a little strange from usual.
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Light_ray
An intriguing plot line among the plenty of system novels on this platform. MC character is deigned nicely by the author- San. The world is created where criminals are living a good life which is in itself makes it very different from the other stories on the platform. Wanna see how Taro will become a godfather when his skills are nil.
All the best for Spirity☺️
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cherlyswan
My first thought on this book? ...................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................... It's awesome!!~
I love the characters, the world building, the writing style and just everything!
The author really did a good job!
All the best!!!
Destiny_Aitsuji