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dragonslayernjd
honestly this book is a great read, but jesus the chapter updates is so bad. for example, the last chapter was uploaded 25 days ago. if the author started posting chapters more frequently, then this book would actually be a really good read.
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triple_0verkillZ
Honestly this novel has so much potential. I absolutely love the setting and the world building, but for me it's ruined by the MC. Hes not necessarily a bad character but his naivety is extremely frustrating and at times a bit ridiculous in my opinion. I think the writing quality and world design are great and all but personally I just can't stand the MC. If naive characters don't bother you I think you will still highly enjoy this novel though.
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ithica
the mc is stupid it doesn't matter that he's 12 if anyone when through what mc went through they would not be this dumb world background needs work aswell many plot holes
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shacochan
The story is very good so far.
I like how the author found a way to give subtle hints and make character behaviours unnatural without making sloopy readers feel the oddity in them.
The story is slow paced but it keeps you engaged.
I wish the author can release chapters a bit more often.
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abcdefgxyz123
Hmm...I give the novel this rating. First of all the grammar is smooth enough for a good read. Author has done good work to make this work a potential masterpiece. Now why I called it a masterpiece?? Here it is. This is the only book that made me feel like buying chaps if it goes premium.
Overall it's so good. Keep it going, I'mma support you from shadows mate.
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AncientSource
I don't usually give a review but I honestly gonna say that this was a nice story.
Like it very much and I would recommend anyone to read this story.
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Omipotent_reader
really great one
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Shyxlio
I love Kalon and Micah! Hopefully they'll turn out to have a unbreakable bond. Anywho, I 100% reccommend this book! I don't think I'll ever get tired of it. Keep up the good work Zings!
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HiddenSageMilkMan
Ngl your The legendery F rank was kinda bad however this novel is very good. in this you have not made the same writing mistakes and it really shows. piece of advice just keep the power levels consistent and dont make the rank jumping to much or common
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Divine_univers
honestly speaking Kalos naivety is a double edged sword that makes him likeable but also frustrating so far as a character. I understand the premise of him being young and ignorant but the way he's being used and abused in the first 30 chapters seems to be a bit much for him to not notice his father is using him and lying to him. Besides that though the story so far is good and I'm looking forward to his development just hope he uses his head a bit more.
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BrewingFantasies
>• Before you begin read this:
Our MC is a human and people are waiting for him to awaken his powers which is seeming impossible. There are evil characters who are selfish, I hate Octavian and Dorian (Never felt this much rage) MCs professor and mother are framed so MCs vampire king father could use him to send him as a spy to human world. Because current world is monster world (MCs world) where he is born human without/with hidden powers and is weakest of all, although he has his mother and sister Luna and professor to love and treat him kindly (Well, partially his mother) The storyline inclines towards the rise of MC and his powers and his goals. Narration style of the author is better than his previous works which itself is a great deal and improvement.
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Honey15
I was not really into fantasy a lot and I am very picky. But this novel, the moment I read it, I felt like a kid again who loved these kinds of stories. Thank you for bringing me back my childhood through this novel. 😊
The writing quality was superb. Every chapter just draws you in and wants to read more.
Keep it up author! You had me hooked. 😊
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AinaWang
5/5 (*ΦωΦ*)
Nice story! (ﾉΦωΦ)ﾉ
The novel is well-written (=ↀωↀ=)
I like how the author described each scene! (๑ↀᆺↀ๑)✧
As I read the first few chapters, I already feel myself sympathizing with the lead character (*Φ皿Φ*)
Added to my library! ～((Φ◇Φ)‡
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Grand_Void_Daoist
The story starts of pretty good, but we have only a few chapters to read to make a proper decision. But the character and plot seems to be progression well.
Definitely worthy to add to your library.
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inflict
Nice work, zero! Can't wait for the next updates... I added this story to my library to see the progress of this human mc.
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Loneliness_Lover
Very interesting book... Absolutely loved it.. looking forward to reading more..❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️
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meixiaolian
I'm hooked with your first sentence. I like how its descriptive enough, it made me imagine of the setting, what the character felt and how I can hear the tone of their voices. This book is great!
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hartpeler
fancy book by the way.
but the only thing I don't like about is the guy is too stopid lmao.
imagine that you're going out while you're becoming the stare public show 😂. I don't want to be like that.
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Glimmy
I would highly recommend this book to anyone who desires a taste of cultivation with western elements - I for one am a lover of vampires. So you, hey you! Yes, you the reader! Do not go past this book, you're going to love it. Keep up the good work, author Zero!
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Destiny_Aitsuji
HERE I COME!
Orcs, Trolls, Beastmen and even Werewolves in this book. This is like any isekai-er dream come true... but wait! Where are my shinning vampires?!
Side note, handsome review swap trade! Completely biased and a waste of your valuable reader time :D
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Overlord_Venus
Do you know stories that revolve around moral dilemmas? Well, this plunges you right into that. Will you be loyal to strangers but were part of your race? Or will you complete the mission your blood-kin gave you, even if they don't cherish you?
What path will you choose? Is one path better than the other? Or will any choice rend his heart apart? Read and find it for yourself. This book hooked me right from the start. It is a must-read for everyone~!!!
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wounded_warrior
This novel is awesome!!!
The story is awesome - even if its just starting.
The writing is awesome - I already feel for the prince.
The author is awesome - nuff said
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Ken_5osuke
HAHAHA... An interesting novel. I like the plot of this novel. I thought this novel is a "Reject Humanity, return to Monke" vibes. But... the boi was born as a human :/... but anyway good luck to the author! I hope you are doing fine :)
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The_Procrastinator
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Zerga3
Stability - Considering that the author already has a streak of 100+ days of continuous writing then the stability shouldn't be bad(5 stars)
Story development - The beginning is intriguing and I am actually interested in what's going to happen next. The story can definitely lure the reader in(5 stars)
Character design - once again, too few chapters to judge, but there is a lot of room for character development.(5 stars)
World background - (5 stars)
Btw the cover looks bomb.
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1st_Manga_KING
Well, looking for a book with awesome story line? The ya, you came to the right place.
The book has a steady pace with good developement so far. There are 11 chaps for now but I can feel the sense of this book hooking me up.
Have seem many fantasy novels and think this is same as any other? Well my boy, u got it wrong. Give it a try and you will understand why~
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cherlyswan
This book is.............................................................................................................................................................................................................. captivating lol
I had high expectations from the author and I can proudly say that he didn't disappoint!
I don't give out spoilers so I won't say much.
But I have to say... Add it to your library and give it a read!
It's worth it!!!!
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docaqui
RECOMMENDED TO READ!
I already read two chapters of this novel before the competition even started and I can say that this is a really good novel. Already put this in the library and will read it when I have time.
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Resurgent
Hmm...I give the novel this rating. First of all the grammar is smooth enough for a good read. Author has done good work to make this work a potential masterpiece. Now why I called it a masterpiece?? Here it is. This is the only book that made me feel like buying chaps if it goes premium.
Overall it's so good. Keep it going, I'mma support you from shadows mate.
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Madyan_wani
This book is best to read. The mythical creatures with their adventurous journey. Omo writer I love the plot. Ima be a vampire and snatch your writing skills. Well the bg ,characters development are really great. I can sense how much struggle the author put in this novel. More power to you. This book is gonna be a blockbuster one.Fighting!
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