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I_liek_rainbowsss
The fic so far isn't good, but it has potential. There are spelling and grammar mistakes throughout the novel, but bearable. There are also some inconsistencies with the scenarios. I think author should try using Grammarly and read the suggestions and correct their spelling/grammar mistake if needed. You just need to read through the things that Grammarly suggest a change to, because some non-English names might be changed if you just mindlessly accept everything Grammarly suggests.
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Dio_The_Sage
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TBoyKey_Hoang
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2mth
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killiam11
good good continuation
2mth
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Ezzaldien_s
More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More
2mth
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Zetsway
It's so-so. Not bad for someone without anything to read, but not that good either. Most people complain that he befriended Naruto, I don't care about that. What makes me drop this is the sad way he uses his skill. He can make any, and I mean ANY skill and then the MC goes and makes basic skills that he can gain simply by training. why would he not make some skill like Natural energy absorption and/or conversion. That would put him at instant sage mode and a permanent state with no suspicion from others cause no one can sense natural chakra aside from Jiraya. Slap some energy manipulation(he got chakra control...) that can work with ANY type of energy and he would be golden. Then he can make escape/deffensive skills like TELEPORT, FLIGHT even true invisibility. Anyway, I guess the author didn't want his MC to be strong, but he still choose a crappy wish for that. In fact, he would have been much more powerful if he choose to have the best ninja talent in Naruto.
2mth
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AmiOnigase
Yup, I'm with majority here, who's fed up, abandon or doesn't enough energy to read this shit... Your story, Meh😒... Your writing especially your grammar, like a shit💩... You brag about you having an exam that you're not study for semester, make assumption that you're college student?? But what kind of college students that can't write proper basic English as it's basic core for first semester in college to pass, no matter what country you are.. If you're college student, sure you can write this with proper grammars and verbs??? To me, you just a middle schooler that think he's mature enough to brag about his writing skills and can't be judge when someone else make criticism about your works.. Grow a pair up, shithead...
2mth
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Imperial_Fox
MCs behavior is just lame, not taking into the fact that he just suddenly befriended naruto out nowhere without thinking anything else. the writing is just poor as most of the time you can't understand what MC is doing. scenarios change suddenly without any context so abruptly that you have to read the chapter atleast twice to understand what in the fukin he is going on MC's character, background, goal and personality is not described, making it hard to understand the reasoning behind his actions. just skip this one, no point in burning brain cells
2mth
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Weirdo
Hurm.. A skill creation as his cheat with alot of limitation or author just didn't know what to do with it.. I think it's the former one, too much limitation.. Also had a crap English, so I will pray for your sanity...
2mth
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Zerzivha
I like this funny fat MC [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
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2mth
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GreekAres
............................................................................................................................................................................................. Author, who is the love-interest?
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KazuKitoo
muito interessante espero que não caia, por favor continue Autor-Sama ^-^^-^^-^^-^^-^^-^^-^^-^^-^^-^^-^^-^^-^^-^^-^^-^^-^^-^^-^^-^^-^^-^^-^^-^
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VERMILION_BIRD
good and exciting story though where the Permanent Memory Cheat skill it is the basic for every overpowered character so don't forget about thank you continue the good work 😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎
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leyrin
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ALiVe
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ALiVe

This some good writing plus the author knows when to throw in a joke or two. Thus makes the book much easier and relaxing to read. 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
2mth
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Contractor_101
Qriting quality is fine Background study is fine Character design needs work Powers are checked for now Update stability is not checked yet so... But stil the chapters are good so 💯
2mth
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TOMB_DRONE
NARUTO ☑ SYSTEM ☑ SKILL CREATION ☑ i think i will be binge read this heheh 💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯
2mth
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Daoist501779
Nice novel, having something like a skill creation is one of the attractions that i just cannnot ignore i hope you keep updating and dont drop it
2mth
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Bigbro
Yes i am giving a five star 🌟 🌟 🌟 🌟 🌟 🌟 🌟 🌟 5⃣ 🌟 🕔 🌟 5⃣ 🌟 5⃣ 🌟 5⃣ 🌟 5⃣ 🌟 5⃣ 🌟 5⃣ 🌟 5⃣ 🌟 5⃣ 🌟 5⃣ 🌟 5⃣ 🌟 5⃣ 🌟 5⃣ 🌟 5⃣ 🌟
2mth
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