The cringe is unending and terrifying. How this novel has such a high rating I will never know but the loopholes in this novel have loopholes. The way the character acted after getting out of a coma made absolutely no sense as in zero.
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The first 10 chapters is utterly garbage with rushed/forced dialogue glaring plot holes in each one and power scales that makes you question if the author even knows about the DC world, Olympus gods and it's mythology or is he just using DC character names and then making up their stories and personality with the defense of its an FF. And judging by there being no real complaints and negative reviews, im starting to think the author is deleting them.
A good one for sure, quiet the dose of savageness. The MC acts a bit as some sasuke sometimes tho, not too much hopefully. Wonder where the story will be going after the personal stuff of the MC being sorted... because it's like a main leading point for now. Let's keep reading anyway and good job :)
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great idea great start ................................................................................................................................................but you ruined it with the escape scene
I can say that the concept is interesting and the pacing is alright, not too slow or fast but the logic behind the story is just simply idealized. It's not what people would think in real life. 3000 years of painful imprisonment and your still mentally stable? Total BS. I try finding the logic behind the reasons why authors do things the way they do, but this author is not very good when it comes to common sense.
Was going to give a 2/5 solely based on the first 10 chapters but after that, it only went up which made me really happy. The premise was really good but the execution was done poorly at the beginning. I suggest you rewrite the first 10 chapters as they lacked logic and common sense with some pretty disgusting plot holes. Not hating as I enjoy the story the more it goes but if you fixed those beginning chapters then you'd receive a lot more readers that don't drop it before it gets good. Everything is good except the dialogue, it is either really really cringe or decent. That is my only criticism in future chapters. Apart from that good job author!
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Well, I'm just going to read it, we'll see what reading has in store for us
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great story so far, love the MC having a Jason Todd/Red Hood vibe. going in a good direction so far, and while he may seem OP right now, I can see him having trouble with villains like doomsday and DarkSied.
5/4/4/4/4 =4.2
I am going to give the author a 5 on the writing quality because the author reads the chapter comments and fixes grammar errors quickly. (like less than 2 hrs) that a +1 star right there.
4 for updates, it is a relatively new novel, but does have constant (1 a day atm) chapters.
Dev- i get the premise, want to see more from here,
Author you do you at your own pace :3
Char design, works great, I would say pretty realistic as realistic as dc can come. Great job!
I like the multi povs
World background good amount of info
<story/char/world is a 4, better than some translated novels, since its in its beginnings, I rate novels that I like and have potential 4>
highly recommend this novel,
great change for me since mostly I've been reading HP, Percy J, and marvel/mcu/spooder, dc is great addition to my fanfiction addiction :3
Good story. Please dont drop. I sometimes wonder why DC even created batman. He is literally useless and his superpower: being rich. I really like that this is a new idea and i hope that the mc kills and torturw his mother in front of every amazon person(is it called amazon person)
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