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Into 17 chapters as of now. Loved the genre and tonal shift in the story. But I personally felt, you could have introduced the 'REWIND' plot point soon, felt the pace slower and confusing in the early chapters because of it. Really loved the main character and her dilemma because of her 'choice'. Will be continuing...
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HoneyMercado
I really like the story development so far. I think you can really got something going here! I have only read 9 chapters but I am going to add this to my library!
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Main_Island
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Mikazuki_Sora
WOW! I am truly surprised with this story honestly. I was hoping for some cliche plot, but I receive more than that. I can feel the energy of the characters as I read them. But I'm hoping for more and more updates. I don't want to stop reading at the karma chapter. Keep up the great work author. Kudos to you!
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Aeipathy_02
This is truly an intriguing read that will not stop you from reading until you reach the last chapter.
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Writing Quality. It's superb. The narratives are clear and the author has a great usage of words to tell the story.
Stability of Updates. The author has a stable updater weekly around 3-4 chapters per week.
Story Development. One of the things that keep a reader is surprising and interesting developments and this story has that. As I continue reading, it's truly engaging how everything flowing. From Care's death to the deal with the Fae and how she needed to find her soulmate and cut the red string of fate. Though, I've got the feeling who might be her soulmate 🧐 I'll just be quiet for now 🤫 since nothing is certain yet lol.
Character Design. The characters are well thought out. I love stories with female lead the most and have a strong personality but at the same time kind too. Care has that (btw I love her name). For other characters, they are also good. Care's father is really gold. I also love how the author emphasizes the contrast between the character of Eli, a man that came from humble birth, and Care who is rich.
World Background. Set in a modern timeline. And still, it's well detailed.
Overall, this story is quite a refreshing read for a while. If you are looking for a refreshing read with a bit of time rewinding and other touches of fantasy. I greatly recommended this story to you.
Great work author! Keep it up!
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star_dreamer
I loved the narration of the author.
It brought the story to life.
The FL is also a very well- crafted character with depth and who invokes the intrigue of the readers.
A great story with lots of potential.
(Just a couple spelling mistakes, but it's nothing that can't be ignored)
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Proteety_Promi
Wow! I like the way you describe the scenario! The story has great potential, and if you work hard on it, it will be amazing work! Good luck!
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Mel_Aniv
The protagonist was likeable and has her emotions fleshed out. It was very nice reading this novel as I saw potential in this author's work. The narration was splendidly done for the readers to easily read and has its immersion within it. Its charm was very good as I saw the story development was in a good pacing. Overall, a nice read! Gotta recommend this to others!
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BlindBandit
I read the synopsis and it interest me, so i dived in... overall, its a good story, I rated all 5 except the writing quality, I do like how descriptive you are, a chapter is too short, it breaks my immersion and you combine sentences a little bit too much, its too long. anyhow, its a good read, I recommend it, Keep up the good work author. Kudos to you!
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captiun
Five stars to the character(s) design, the story development, and the world background.
The prologue is very intriguing, and the story surprised me in the turn it took soon after it started, but not before the characters were properly introduced and the world set.
Special awards for the description of the character and the world. It was done in such a way that picturing the scenes was easy, and it was easy to become immersed in the story.
There are about 3 turns that I liked in the first 18 chapters, but to not spoil you, I shall not talk of them.
Should you read it?
Read the first chapter and see if you like the style.
I'd say that if you like fantasy, realistic characters, and world-building, you will surely like it.
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Rachael_Olawale
I LOVE IT
I LOVE IT
I LOVE IT
I LOVE IT
I LOVE IT
I LOVE IT
I LOVE IT
I LOVE IT
I LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!!
OMG!!!! I freaking love this bookk!!!
Where were you all my life?!!!!!
I don't even know what to say!!
I LOVE IT ×100000000
I wish there was something like a ten star cuz I would give it to this book. You deserve an award!!!
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Author_Enigwe
very interesting and I keep on falling in love with it.[img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=fp][img=fp][img=fp][img=fp][img=fp][img=fp]
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