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Symmetrical
Frequently asked questions: 1. Is there a romance? Yes, that's not the main genre but yes there is. 2. Is this a harem novel? No, the MC won't have a harem. But some side characters will. Why? Because most of the characters are not humans. They have different cultures on their respective planets. 3. Is the MC a simp? No, he would kill a gal in a heartbeat if it's necessary for his goal. 4. Are you going to update everyday? Although I can't guarantee it yet, that's my objective for my first novel. 5. How long this will take? I am not sure yet but based on the plot that I made, it's around 1k chapters. Author's requests: 1. Although I appreciate reviews, please don't make one if you didn't read the novel at all. 2. I appreciate criticism but please make it constructive. I will delete unhelpful hate comments. If it's not your cup of tea, don't read it. 3. Although I'm confident in my English, please kindly correct minimal grammatical errors if you find one. 4. Don't use the review section to promote your novel or offer a contract from a different platform, please! Self-review: Pros: The start is different from the common truck-kun cliche scenario. I think grammatical errors are minimal, too. I am trying to be different but there are still cliches but with twists. This is where I am most confident, I know martial arts and the fight scenes will be as detailed as possible that even an elementary student will understand how it happened using fantasy version of real martial arts techniques. Cons: As a newbie author, sometimes I am so concern about the readers' different comprehension levels that I am over-explaining complex things in the system or world-building. Forgive me if I'm treating readers as a child sometimes. I will work on that. I am sometimes using informal American English without realizing it while writing and I also need to work on that. Overall, I hope you give this novel a chance.
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kharit
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kharit

hmmm it's hard to comment t on a book with so few chapters depending on how the book goes from here. the grammar is good and the story is definitely not just a copy a paste however I had a hard time being excited about the next chapters. I think it's just not my cup of team because of the mc himself Is just not the type of character i expected him to be so far. I'm not saying it's bad because the novel so far is pretty good if it's in your alley but the investigative type nature of the mc is not something I'm a fan of. however if that's something you like then I think this book will turn out to be better than expected. especially since I feel the grammar and wording of this novel are quite superb compared to novels on this site although to some that may not be such a compliment I assure you that reading it yourself will be gratifying in that aspect. keep up your work author I would like to see where this story would go even if it's not my favorite mc it's still good start and I cant wait for more chapters
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bibiyenini
It's a different status for Liam to wake up to something unpredictable, not that amazing world where he wanted to save just himself from everybody. I just want to say that this system novel, or even then, prescribed as isekai or even transmigration, is a very different and out-of-this-world novel that you might want to differ from any other stuff. This suits everybody who has the cup of tea on system novels, and it is really a mysterious plot that might go along that 1000 chapters. The thing about this part is that there are many kinds of systems that you might have tumble upon on Webnovel, but what asked me as a reader was that, what is the difference between this book? What is the uniqueness of the MC's power or even logical thinking to any other characters in other novels? That might help too. The author may be asking that when he or she wrote the plot itself, but what goes along the way stays the way. I am surprised with how well you had written the 1st chapter. It will make you wonder, "Oh. This novel is gonna be amazing all throughout." There are minimal errors that I could find, but nothing much. The world background and character development are a must! So I think I am looking forward to the author's work!
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SilentKidd
AMAZING!!! keep up the good work I have only read chapter 1 but i am already hooked to the plot, you have some serious talents, stay safe!!!!
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