Hello from Indonesia! I'm a newbie author here!
Your story is so interesting, the theme is light and simple, but it's quite entertaining.
Maybe you can pay more attention about the grammars. I'm not that good in English either, but I was confused when I read this story since there were inconsistencies here, sometimes you used present tense, sometimes you used past tense. You can use Grammarly to help you correcting the errors.
Overall this story is good so I added it to my collection. I hope I didn't offend you with my honest review 😊
I like the story
Good job author and IM furious about what happened next!!
Cant wait for the next update !!!! (｡♡‿♡｡)
And also i like the cover and the color really great and i like the color (◍•ᴗ•◍)❤