Heelo! Author here.
I am writing this book for the spirity Contest. I hope it will be to your taste.
let's start with few salient features of this book-
1. Urban Fantasy guys... (I'm trying my hand at this genre)
2. lots of Magic ( including vampires, werewolves, mages, demons, gods, etc.,)
3.You need Badass Female characters, yes they will be delivered.
4. lots of side characters with their own story and ships to follow.
5.You want to dip to the Dark side, don't worry we will also go there. ( only occasionally you know, )
6.Mystery and urban fantasy go hand in hand.
7.Mc is getting introduced to the magic world and so are you ( so no fear of getting lost )
;-) just ride along Mc in this shaky novel to witness the action, thriller, mystery, and adventure. Yeah, there are love interests too.
P.S-Happy reading guys, just enjoy your life......
This is the first review I have ever written after being on this platform for 3 years or so and that just how much I like this novel. Right now there are only 50 chapter or so and the story is great. The strength system is diffrent from the traditional eastern cultivation and is more western. No op main character and you can see some character growth from weakling to maybe a future powerhouse? The concept is great and interesting and i'm just saying try to give the book a read and it would be worth you time
The story is great and very engaging. I really like the writing here however, I must say that there are some grammatical mistakes here and there. If you can turn a blind eye to it, than you will most likely love this story.
Well, it's good...
Right now the chapters are very few, but so far it's really good...
I really like the detailing though, it's really good
So far, it's a good novel, so... yeah, it's a nice one and you should give it a shot.
Right now, I won't say much about the character progression or more stuff as there are very few chaps so, cant make a false impression for you, new readers, but yeah... it looks really promising.
I like it
Aside from a few clunky sentences herre and there, there's really not much to say about quality.
The first chapter is a delight to read, introducing the stakes and the worldbuilding in a very interesting way. And I love how the author was brave enough to write MC's daily life for two chaps before diving into the action. I feel that I see a lot of people just jumping into the action after a few introductory sentences.
The introduction of a bunch of characters on ch 2 was a bit eh, but since each character took so little time to expose, it doesn't really bother too much.
Aside from all that, excited to see where things go.
Wow, what a really strong start to what feels like an amazing novel! The author has a way with words and his ability to set the scene and create an immersive world demonstrates this. I look forward to seeing where the author takes the story. Keep up the good work. [img=recommend]
Aside from a few minor nitpicks, this is a very well-constructed story. I dig the premise and so have added this to my library. The first chapter drew me in like a prize tuna, and I can't wait for the payoff.
I Will be honest I can not give an impartial review of this novel as Author is my friend. Therefore, this review is only for showing my eternal support to him. Keep going Author, we support you.
And as for readers, I hope you give one try to his work for sure.....