why did you delete everything i remember reading this like half a year ago or something the one stars are because it doesn't exist anymore not because it wasn't good
Can you at least post it so I can read it, I am looking at the reviews and it is very good, the negative complaints don't boither me, If you are still there and can here me may you post it back, if thats not to much trouble. I really want to read your book.
I'm sorry but I had to give up reading this as I've seen increasingly that the novel doesn't carry out its description. The DC part of it is pretty much non-existent (except some brief appearances) and focuses solely on Michael and Samuel/Lucifer.
Even though the author warned in advance of his ONE GOD ramblings it still doesn't excuse the bias that you'll feel from the author, defending God and Michael's actions (or inactions) like a zealot in the form of Michael, like a self-insert, wish fulfillment, as if the author himself just wrote this novel to try and justify God's actions/inactions.
To much time is spent on preaching about God from Michael that you would be forced to try, REALLY hard not to try and find the author's hidden agenda behind all of this. I wouldn't really care if it was Gabriel only, but Michael IS the main character, so it's hard not to come to the conclusion that this is the author's opinion which bleed into the novel.
Later on Michael and Gabriel do "indeed" question and "criticize" God. I put it in citations because they pretty much just go back into loving him again like it was a trial or something, which is debatable. It's funny that the author is quite active in the comments defending God and Michael, but never responds to the classics like; "If god is omnipotent and all-knowing, why do God test them?", "Why's Noah's Ark necessary if it would just go back to the usual later on? God should've known that right?".
Well, that's all. Maybe it's because I'm an Atheist and I get triggered when som people preach about God and how all of creation are his objects and doesn't deserve to exist and should repent if it doesn't coincide with his thoughts and plans. And praying in church automatically makes you the good guy.
This author is horrible he never finish his stories and drops them. Just look up his profile and you know. If author was any good he would finish at least 1 story.
Ok. I understand.
Write what you want author. I am sure it is gonna be awesome.
Ok. I understand.
Write what you want author. I am sure it is gonna be awesome.
This is a great story and I can't wait for you to finish the story.
sorry i just need the word count
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I haven't dropped this story. I follow all of your stories. Please keep updating whenever you have free time.
I haven't dropped this story. I follow all of your stories. Please keep updating whenever you have free time.
Wow. Getting interesting. Hope nothing bad happens to michael and his family.(And I am including his children, wife and siblings).
Wow. Getting interesting. Hope nothing happens to michael and his family.
I think he is too much of a kid, thousands of year and still crying over a brother who tries to kill him, and the worst is the 'god' thing here, it looks like a religion book.
Writing is perfect and if you want to spot a mistake, good luck because you ain't gonna find it.
World background is researched and author has all knowledge of it.
Characters have great personalities
Character is OP which I like
(look at my username)
Author interacts with the readers and always replies.
Perfect 10/10 fanfic and great author.
this is so good I reread it some fanfics are good as a monkey in the multiverse but I don't like rereading it but tis is amazing worth it and the side story is amazing
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It's a heaven of a story. Too op for my taste so 4 stars in character design (you could have put the compulsion to live in his own terms little subtly). Cringy story put a good contrast where it is needed but since MC is omniscient well we could have some other POVs to support it or remove all the POVs and put the information in MCs POV.
Overall a very good DC story I like it.
Would love if you would do story of Harry potter crossover.
Author, what did you think of lucifer season 5b(episode 9-16). I loved it. Binged it. It came at 12:45 pm at my country. I thought it was better than season 5A.
episode 15 is the best.
And I normally dislike nusical episode but the one in lucifer was fun.
Best Read I've had in a long time. just wish there weren't as many cliffhangers... hmm Author, if I review a 1 star and say I won't change this to 5 stars unless I get 10 chapters a day, would that work?
I loved the work author 👌😃
I loved your take on the dc creation myth and all other aspects of it. I like the changes you made and the plot progression. I would love to see more from you and thank you for writing this😉
And respect for your homework on dc author 👌
Eu realmente gosto mais do Lúcifer, mas a minha opinião é influenciada pelo seriado e pelos quadrinhos que nos fazem ter um apego muito forte pelo Lúcifer, eu gosto do Michael mas prefiro o Lúcifer mesmo que ele esteja errado.
this is one emotional roller coaster
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I never really right reviews, but this I will make an exception, this story is one that should be made to exist in legends, this book has huge potential. That and the Hopes of this story has easily been surpassed, the author outdid himself, and honestly, I cant wait for what he comes up with in the future.
second review this is a great novel great work so far keep up the great work............................................................................
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