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Plebston323
You added the father frank speech he had in such a perfect way you just make me cry man, you make the story so inducing to the point we feel what you write. I love it when authors do that so thank you.
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Pepega123
One of the best fanfics I have found on this site and the only fanfic I have ever found where the mc is Michael Demiurgos. Anyways If you have time to read this story then you should definitely give it a try.
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Jovipinheiro
Devo dizer que esse capΓtulo foi muito bom, principalmente na parte do LΓΊcifer falando com a Detetive, fiquei atΓ© um emocionado na parte que ele fala sobre os desejos e Miguel.
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Empyrium
Your grammar is really good, love it.
Your story development is also good, love it too.
I love your characters, they seem so real π―π₯°
8 chapters a week, can't complainβ€οΈ
I even suggested this novel to a few guys on discord. Love itβ€οΈ
You got my vote
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Plebston323
I love how well you depicted Lucifer and his character, I absolutely love the chapter and story as a whole.
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Jovipinheiro
A histΓ³ria estΓ‘ muito, eu adorei o desenvolvimento do Demiurgo, estou ansioso pra ver quando o LΓΊcifer vai aparecer pra falar com o Salvador.
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robel_zerihun
I LOVE IT. I LOVE IT. I LOVE IT. I LOVE IT. I LOVE IT. I LOVE IT. I LOVE IT. I LOVE IT.I LOVE IT. I LOVE IT. I LOVE IT. I LOVE IT. I LOVE IT.
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KhadaFourJhin
Short Review: it is really good if you can bypass the cringey moments as it is in character but still cringey. The chapter length is average but the quality is done really well. Characters are the best part and the world background is decent! The only complaint is upload quality because the author writes when he has motivation which is understandable but from a reader's perspective it is still criticism. Apart from that good job author-sama!
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jahmarian_thomas
all in all 5/10 c'est plutΓ΄t bien je le relirais γγͺγθ―γγ§γγγδΈεΊ¦θͺγγ§γγγ ist ziemlich gut wΓΌrde wieder lesen is goed zou opnieuw lezen Is maith a lΓ©ifΓ arΓs
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Gild_Rakingh
The truth is, I don't have the story. The MC is a reincarnated, but sometimes he behaves like a character with no knowledge of what's going to happen. He should already know what's going to happen, so I don't see why he's sometimes surprised or doesn't know what's going on. It may be my business, though.
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Meriduda
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SufferJustLikeMe
Really recommend this book for those who like op mc like me.
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Zero_Day_0445
I really like your story itβs really well done, and I can say Iβve ever read a fic with the same idea. There are some cons but nothing you cannot fix with experience and beside itβs only my opinion, so overall great job and PLEASE DONβT DROP!!!!
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Phoenix1998
Good chapter.
Zeus as a cute kid is giving me nightmares though. lol...................................................................................
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Zack_Smith_9438
This has to be the best fanfiction on this site, I love the character development, and how he takes what happens to dc and makes it his own story, explaining everything that is happening in the process, for example how he took Zeus from Crounus and adopted him, making him a better person, Though the Whole thing about The presence not liking other gods is weird I don't think he would allow that, if he calls himself king of the gods...but hey this is dc, you have to change things or else it will be impossible to make a story based on the exact correct response to the said religion of the tara/bible. I am looking forward to more and I hope you don't drop. If you do I'll be disappointed but it'll be fine.
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Benjamin_Peggy
Nice job on this chapter love how mc has adopted Zeus their aren't many stories where Zeus is a descent being I carnt wait for the implication it will have a Zeus becomes a true ruler of the Greek pantheon in every sense of the word
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Onii_Chan_3844
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Immortuos
welp i realised i never made a review even though this is the best DC fan fic i read and the writing is good, the relationships micahel has with other characters feels real and not fake, the author is interactive and takes opinions from readers well all in all its great, thanks for the masterpiece Samael (the author not lucifer :P)
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