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captiun
Honest 7* review. Ah, I can't exceed 5 stars. What a pity. The writing quality is such that I was unable to find something to improve or correct. As for the story, it is depicted with such details and realism that I find myself being immersed in the world as I would watch a movie (and live it). I can perfectly imagine an anime or a movie being adapted from the book. Note also the insane frequency at which the author is able to write one chapter after another! That requires tremendous talent and dedication. So, you who is reading this review, please give all your power stones so that the author writes the rest of story. Shameless review from a reader that wants to know what happens next.
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Nr_Yet1208
1 million special!!!! First of all, thank you everyone for your continuous support. In recognition of that, I've released 3 chapters today. Next, I'm glad you're looking at this (yes, you, the reader.) I'll try my best to entertain you through my writing. And lastly, some answers. This is a dark fantasy so there will be plenty of blood and death. There will be romance but not a harem. The plot is favored over the length of the chapters, so some might be shorter than others but I generally try to keep the word count close to 1.5k Lastly, thanks again for picking this up. If you have questions, feel free to comment. Hate me? You can even send me hate mails. Address is in the bio.
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Hexagon_1234
I remember the author saying he won't make this a harem despite mmc aving multiple love interests I have a feeling they won't live till the end of the tale R.I.P
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Hashile
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Hashile

From the very start, just the prologue tell me this novel is a banger, seriously it's so well written. I just finished to read the first 2 lines and I knew I was going to enjoy myself and I was right
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Glezeri
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Glezeri

wow, glad u told me it was fiction or I would have thought it was that time u got transmigrated.............................................
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WarrantyW
Love the story so far, thanks.[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
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Dieudonner_17
Hahahaha This story is sick, everything feels so real and lifelike and…. To be frank sans endless praises for this divine piece i have nothing else to say (except the fact that i personally prefer 3rd person to 1st person😂😂😂😂😂 people’s choice) This is a great book, a wonderful masterpiece
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Aimi_Fuyutsuki
5 stars, and for one reason only. The cover. I'm not sure if the Author knows this, but the character on the cover's name is Skadi, or to be more precise, Skadi Alter. She's from a game called Arknights, and is a very strong individual, who is also part of the Abyssal Hunters. The Abyssal Hunters in Arknights fight against all kinds of eldritch horrors that threaten humanity, so it seems like a fitting cover for the author's book. (Yes I am a Skadi simp)
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Reallyker_101
im a simple man, i see a potential waifu on the cover and an intresting synopsis, i add it to my read list. Any authors lookin to spread their work take note. First impressions matter ✍
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ARIO_VANISH
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HoneyMercado
I absolutely love this book!!!!!! It was recommended to me and let me just say it is something I would read on my own. The storyline is actually interesting. I recommend this book to all.❤️
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Andrew_Oak
Very interesting story. Good start and fast development of events. Clear and attentive detailing of the world and descriptions of the characters are pleasant to read. I hope to meet an unexpected storyline turn and get a strong impression. Good luck author. thanks for the fantasy.
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kommers
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kommers

A very descriptive narrative and beatifully written story also the kind of novel I like, classical fantasy, waiting to see how the author will turn this in long run. (ch 5)
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YeshuaH
I went to chapter 11, and because I needed to go to the bathroom, I stopped. I'm taking the opportunity to leave this review because when I read again I probably won't stop anytime soon. I felt very immersed in the story since the first chapter, it was all very real and congruent, so much so that I didn't even realize that two hours had passed. I didn't notice spelling mistakes and the story is very clean, at a pace that is pleasant to read. Thanks for reading, now I'm going to devour the book again.
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inklingparker
wow didn't expect that blew me away with how engaging the story was, the opening doesn't fluff around and catches straight to the catch which I thought was cool. looking forward to catching up
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nite_prinxeas
I personally know the author so I'm trying to be as unbiased as possible. This is a good story. The narration is well enough and there aren't any glaring problems with the writing. Some awkward sentences are here and there but I mostly enjoyed this. Hopefully, everyone else will too.
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Sweetdreamer20
Let me go ahead and if it a 5 star 🙃🙃 This is top-notch y'all 💃😢 the prologue was so good, it gave me the chills 😭😭 have you ever longed to watch a movie, and son as it starts you started acting out...? This is it!!! This is the movie!!! ps. I started acting up from I read the first paragraph 💃💃😢😢
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MrChinchila
That's a messed up world, I tell you. MC is so confused, poor guy. Anyway, the grammar is good and there could be some edits in the first chapters to improve it, it isn't anything major.
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Resurgent
Wow, its been a long time since I read a good first person POV fantasy novel. The way the character's thoughts, his reactions and his interactions with the world was written was too good. In fact, I doubt any top 10 novel with first person POV would be better than this. I feel like this hidden gem deserves way better and hope more readers unearth this novel and add it to your library. Except for a few clunky para's the grammar was good enough to not destroy our immersion. I wish all the best to the author :)
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Foxy_Fairy
I love the narrative. I can picture what is happening inside my head. The story concept itself is interesting. I added this to my library. Good job!
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Juliet_Omuadona
The story is so intriguing, I found myself reading chapter after chapter in anticipation of what will happen next. It is definitely a fun read and worth the time.
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Blue_Pizza
I feel like I've been working in a review factory nowadays. Finally, I got around to reading this book and I must say I don't regret it. If there's one thing I love most, it's foreshadowing and prologues (ok, fine 2 things) and this book has both. Then I read the next chapters and whatdoyousay it's fluent, well-paced, interesting and captivating. As I haven't read a lot yet, I can only say the monster that has appeared gave me some inkling of the type of world this story is set in. MC seems like a rational and smart person who is calm instead of freaking out over unfamiliar things. The English is good and the action scene is pretty well written (I want this talent). Oh, and did I mention the chapter titles are unique/hilarious/informative but not boring? Last thing, I know it might not be the intended effect, but I was laughing at the gory scene at the start (not in a maniacal way—that's weird—but in a lol way). Good luck, author!
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1Little_Tree
it's crazyly good. i rarely meet a good horror story like this one. love the way author describe everything. i can feel the tense athmosphere through my phone. good job author!
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Cyclxne
TL;DR: This was a great read. The writing quality was good, I couldn't find any grammatical errors, spelling mistakes, punctuation errors, etc. Stability of updates? The author literally uploads 10 chapters a week. Anyway, you get the idea. Story development is good, hooks readers in. Character design - somewhat generic. I would've liked to see more emphasis on the characters' personality and such. The world background is pretty cool, the author did a good job of building it.
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JF_Fanai
Brutally honest this is a deliberate autobiography done kinda right!.... I'm not no critic or the most suited to critic a work... but yeah improvements could be made. However No spoilers or any infos but I'll just say this is better than that farce (My Vampire system)
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Nullinvoid
So here is my review after 5 chapters. Will update once I get further in. Writing Quality: Good. Their are no glaring issues and it really gets the job done. SoU: Consistent and on point. Story Development: I can only tell you I like what I have read so far and that is good enough for me to give a 5 star as nothing in particular bothers me about it thus far. Though I hope power creep is kept in check. Character Design: Adequate. I'm not far enough in to give a good or bad opinion so I will default to 5 on this one. World: The world really draws me in. I find it very appealing to read about and want to know more. This is about as much as you can ask for in any webnovel.
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Jyojiko
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Jyojiko

The emotion was on high right off the bat. No wonder this novel has already a lot of views! Good descriptive skills you got there. I like the narration and how the story moved forward at a pace that would want the readers to anticipate the next chapter!
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Jo_J
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Jo_J

The story is as dark as the title. You are doing a great job, the lot is interesting and your characters are expressive. Well done! And good luck with the contest!
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SKRZ
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SKRZ

The story is written so well I really enjoyed it. The author created a magnificent setting with monsters, and an ordinary protagonist grabbing at every ounce of survival. I really enjoy it when I can see the protagonist "grow", and this is one of those. The pacing was great - I like the action and the thrill that comes with it. I also enjoyed the first person POV - it was written just right. I love the plot - it's interesting, and the writing style is very engaging. The setting was superb, it felt as though I was in an RPG game. Yes, it's that good! I can picture it clearly in my head. Great job! Looking forward to reading more! Highly recommended!
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Prommy_Halibut
The first chapter was sooo intense! I honestly loved it. The action was fast-paced and heart-racing, the descriptions phenomenal, and overall writing just amazing! It's a very interesting story, and I can tell that it'll only get better from there! Just one suggestion though: as a reader, it was difficult for me to distinguish the character's thoughts from their narration. I would suggest making the protagonist's thoughts a separate paragraph to let the reader know it's their thoughts (to avoid awkward tense shifts from past to present). But it was just awesome in all! Great job author!!!
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ReginaldDabs
Really great novel. The beginning is captivating and has a whole lot of great mystery. Also, it's written in first person, which I personally love! It's very dark but it isn't "edgy" or whatever. Everyone feels like real people and not just random characters meant to serve a purpose. Also, the grammar/prose is great! Definitely recommend.
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