Reviews of Into the abyss by Luzparadise_ - Webnovel

The prologue was AMAZING! I feel that itself was sufficient to get me glued to it. I liked the use of vocabulary. The plot of the story of story is intriguing. I liked the MC of this story and world building about it. There are minor issues with the novel but completely ignorable. Other than that, story has potential and very well written. And I am looking forward to future chapters, keep up the good work :)

I have one word for this, amazing! I like how i was captivated by the story plot and it drags me into the story from just the first part of it! There were detailed descriptuon of things that can help visualize the story better and it also helps give off a fantasy like feeling to it! I would definitely recommend this story! It was a good read overall and i hope to see more of this! Keep up the great work of yours author!! ✨[img=recommend]

My first thought was cliche. But, unknowingly I'm already inside the world created by the author? Huh? The writing was subtle, chaotic, and engaging, silently pulled you in without the chance to resist. Need to be careful, or else this will be addictive.

At first, I thought it was related to some kind of vampire stuff and all. Then, later I came to know that it isn't. The work is based on Greek mythology. I used to love this concept. But, I have read so many novels that it has become a normal plot setting for me. Still, the author tried to bring the change by introducing Luna and her involvement with God. So, I can appreciate that. The writing quality is decent and very understandable. I did find many errors in the prologue. But, the synopsis says ~ it's going under a huge revision so I'll overlook that for now. Story development was good too. I liked the characters so far. The world is vast and that is why I think the pacing is slow, which I understand. To show such a vast world, it will require a lot of words to make your readers fully immerse into the chapters and your world. Overall, it was a good read and I really enjoyed it. Keep it up!!

A really interesting beginning! Have only read the first five chapters, but this definitely goes into my library and I will look forward to updates.

This book is pretty awesome! If you like a good story with elements of horror, mystery and greek mythology told in a new perspective, you've got to check this one out! Great job author! I love your creative mind. Keep it up! [img=recommend]

Beautiful storyline with great characters and story development. I like the fresh idea you put and every chapter has me hooked for more! Just can't get enough.

I always like supernatural involvement in novels. This book had a interesting concept of how the lord of the underworld got interested in a human. Worth A Read!

Interesting story! I love how you pulled us in with a dream, I can't wait to see if we ever meet this guy for real. There are a couple issues with past tense and present tense in the writing but other than that, I love it! ♡

The story is good and the first chapter gives a good sense of the story's potential to be truly great! The writing quality struggles a little between past and present tense, but if you can get past that, the story is a gripping read.

I like the pace of the couple of chapters and I going to see how this story going to turn out when I read the other chapters and more to come. 👍

The story has great potential, but the mixing of past and present tense might be a turn-off for some readers. So it would be great if you could stick to one. Otherwise, good story.

So far the story is amazing. I can't wait to read the rest of it. It is very captivating. I enjoy how it has a bit of mystery and romance. It is definitely an interesting story and although some of the characters are from a different story they certainly have a uniqueness to them. I really enjoy this.

A very good concept for a fantasy reinterpretation of the classic Cinderella story. I always appreciate some good mythologizing in my stories, and this one has that a-plenty mixed in with the fairy-tale elements, which is nice. The MC isn't just some helpless damsel either, but appears to have some spirit. The technical aspect of the writing is decent, with no real spelling errors, but there's a lot of complications with tense, which can make it an effort to read. Even so, it is still worth it if you're into romantic fantasy, greek mythology, and a strong heroine.

Cinderella Twilight! This story has a great potential albeit in need of a bit of grammar work. The opening with the burning mansion is impactful enough to encourage readers to keep going. I'd like to have some more substance added to scenes, tho. At least for up to where I've read, it's all dialogues and actions. A screenplay would be fine with that, but a novel needs a bit muscle on the bones. Anyway, I like how it's going so far. Please keep up the good work!

Although it's not my favorite genre, I actually quite enjoy reading this book. I can feel the author make a lot of effort to develop the story, characters and the world around it. The writing quality is decent, nothing to complain about. overall it's a good read!

Very detailed character and world development, Great narration and good plotline. I really look forward to the upcoming chapters. good luck to both the author and the book.

I really like how the author was so descriptive with the scenes. It really created a clear picture in my head. Although there are grammatical errors, the plot itself has potential. Only read the prologue, but I can say this will get somewhere!! Kudos Author. It's really important to get your readers interested in the first chapter coz it's really the make it or break it kind of moment. And you just MADE IT! Keep it up.

Firstly I must say this book is good! I like the way you use the geek gods and some part of fairytale story Cinderella. From my point of view I would want to have dreams like her cause I barely even get any dreams at nights than nightmares so yes I will be looking forward to this book😌.

This is a remake of Cinderella's story. With Greek mythology. And that's an interesting combination! For those who enjoy fantasy and romance, give it a try, it could please you! Keep going, Author! Note: Author, careful with your verbs as sometimes you mix present and past when you don't have to, and repetition.

The author did a very great job with this novel 👍 I can feel the fantasy and the intense atmosphere in this novel right from the first chapter. Not so many dialogue, but the descriptions are detailed and interesting so it's not boring. Each character left strong and deep impression, it's easy to feel how the character feels. I enjoy it so much! [img=update]

I like the content and the fresh idea you brought out with this book, it's nice to find a different type of story to add to my library. I just need to keep on reading more

This is a high quality novel! Each chapter was intense and long, but not boring. The writings were very neat, the pace was just right, the situations were described in very detailed way. It's interesting and well written novel. Good job! [img=recommend]

This is a really good novel, very well written and draws you in by the dog blood portion of a beginning. It feels very Cinderella but the author adds her own unique twists that make it distinct. Good job, hoping for more chapters!

This is a really cool take on Greek mythology. I love that the author put so much effort into researching and getting things right. Overall, it's a really entertaining read with great characters. Would recommend! (:

This is a great book! And I, for one, love the cover! It has great writing style and with the cover alone, one can know where it's heading to. Keep up he good work Author!

Greek mythology....love your idea author. Everyone loves these stories and it's really great and the dream thing. Absolutely amazing. Nice story with amazing twists. Best of luck.

Overall, the story has potential. Some grammar problem but those can be overlooked. It is a good book. Keep up the good work. Lovely artwork who did it for you?