Reviews of FLOCK OF JUSTICE by ihatepower_45 - Webnovel

This is an explosive story with action everywhere you turn! Unravelling every step you take, the author has magnificently constructed a castle of a tale that spirals into the clouds. Great work!

So far I think Story is Very likeable. I Like the characters relationship between leo puppatier. All the characters of the FloCk are orginal. OnlY thinG thaT needs tO be added is More workD building.

very pretty cover. The flow of dialogue is smooth, and the authors control over the characters in enviable. I do feel like the synopsis could have been more detailed

I loved the fantasy-magical theme of the novel the imagination of the writter is wide and Amazing the flow of story was good but there were few Petty mistakes breaking the flaw of the novel like - punctuation mistakes, typography, grammatical errors but if the author works on these things nothing can stop this novel from rocking on. a little cheer up dance for my author best of luck

It has an interesting premise with the mc being a deal with the devil type character. The cover art looks amazing as well. The only problem I had with it was the grammar making it a bit hard to read.

Impressed by the way, the author put the tory together. Although there are grammatical errors, it's passable and everything else flows smoothly. [img=faceslap][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]

This reads very much like a screenplay. I'd like to see author expands and add more than actions and dialogues. Plot is intriguing and characters are interesting enough. The battle scene is exciting. Epic, I dare say. The story's got a huge potential. So, a bit more muscle on the bone, and this would rake in stars and readers.

I can see that the author tried his best to make it epic. There's nice worldbuilding, though I would like it if you stretched that more. The main problem is stretching... your story looked too easy... stretch it, make ot more difficult and make it as believable as possible. There are quite a few grammatical errors... you should solve them asap, especially the punctuations. The writing style is easy on the eye with a bit of fixing it would be even more promising... Good luck... Author.

Join the FLOCK group! Synopsis is great, short but intriguing. Like how the author name the characters, the world building is great too. The author's narration is great to let the readers imagine the setting. Haven't across a novel that is has a lot of adventures. Give this book a try.

Read the first chapters and i am intrigued- the writer did an excellent job to get a reader hooked right into the story. The plot caught my eye and I am curious about the main characters. I think this was a great read!

I jumped into this with no expectations, and was greatly surprised honestly. It's a very intriguing start for the story, and I'm more than curious to read what happens next. Honestly, AMAZING job!!

At the start, I felt like there is a mentor kind of relationship with Hades and la puppeteer! If you could pull it off, this would be epic! Although there are few grammatical writings from here and there, one sweep of editting will make the entire novel at its finest! Kudos for the author!

Narration: Decent and immersive Worldbuilding: Vast and detailed Character development: Nice and steady Character design: Outstanding Dialogues: Realistic and Lifelike Pacing: Not fast nor too slow Writing quality: Magnificent Execution of the Genre: Good pitch Story potential: High Updating Stability: Steady This is my review! Hope you like it! 😉

I like the Author's writing style, the storyline is not the same as what readers usually read . This one is the best novel I have read so far. Keep up the great work, Author.

This could be improved especially on the grammar, world building and character end but I'm willing to give the author 5 stars to support his/her work.

This story caught my attention with the mis match of characters but somehow they work together. I like the references that are scattered across the chapters and the jokes that are hidden underneath. Just fix the Grammer and puntuation issue and this will be 😌

Fantastic work by the author. I hope they will continue on this wonderful journey as a author. The only true issue I have is the fact that the story is too slow. Otherwise keep it up

I like this story and its characters, the description of the world could use some work, but otherwise from that this story is pretty good in my opinion. Thumbs up to you author.

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