Chapter comments on the chapter The Day Everything Changed of the book The School for the Unimpressive

Excellent start! I love the light and fluid writing style!

This is an amazing start

I like the light hearted humor of the story so far. I would’ve liked more build up to the big reveal/discovery of the main character’s powers though: a more detailed glimpse into his everyday world, and maybe a little specifics about how his friendship with his old friend ended—basically a more immersive introductory experience. I can’t deny I’m intrigued though and am interested to read further.