Reviews of Rebirth of the golden lineage by YeshuaH - Webnovel

Perhaps the introductory chapters are a little slow for some people, but in them there is some important information for the story in the future. Hold on tight, please. ヽ༼ຈل͜ຈ༽ﾉ

The classic reincarnation/transmigration story that tugs at your heartstrings. The author does a great job of setting up the premise and MC's characters, establishes his relations with his family, with lots of show instead of telling. The emotional core of the story is set up very strongly, and so are the characters, especially the MC. And then the fun part starts. If you like system/litRPG/transmigration stories, you will definitely gonna wanna read this. Very few typos and grammatical errors that can be easily corrected with simple editing. Highly recommendation and will stay in my library, so that I can keep following it. Thank you, author.

Get me some new tear ducts. My old ones broke down. Although the writing quality is great, the thing that stood out most is the emotion. Miguel is relatable and funny at times, and has his own flashbacks and backstories, but what I'm talking about is the PAIN. I felt it slam into me like a truck and I wanted to cry. The start is a bit slow, but that's ok. It's all important to the plot. I love the meaning behind Gaby's name and the obvious thought and/research author put into creating this book and giving each character life. Although I'm just at the part mc gets his new life, I can already tell this story is progressing beautifully. It all flows really well. Never lose that touch to connect readers with the characters, author. Good luck!

I really like how you build up the tension within the story. I think the description of the characters and background could use some work. I'd like to envision what is happening and the setting. The story development seems solid. I notice that you use a video game style to describe certain parts of the story, which is a common Web novel tactic. People seem to like it, so I have nothing bad or good to say about it. Keep up the good work. But please add some more description to the story.

Nice setup of scenes. I can visually imagine the imagery the author wanted me to imagine. I can see that this novel has potential with the right amount of exposure. Dialogues were all executed wonderfully and it is a nice read all in all. Kudos!

This story honestly shocked me a bit the emotions it took me through we real to a point, the comedy could be a bit better but still funny. I fund a few grammar errors but nothing you cant ignore. Overall this story doesn't deserve to be put in the back of webnovels read list.

Plot is interesting, but the use of present tense narration feels off to me, and the large amounts of dialogue with not enough description in between makes visualizing the story hard. With a little work, this story can easily become much better. Keep up the good work.

I am very curious to see how the series will be developed due to the tips that have been given so far. I hope you write more often. [img=coins]

This book definetly deserves a five. The narration and the writing quality is top notch. The potrayal of the characters and their interactions are very real, making this book very immersive. The plot is clear and smooth with no hiccups. Waiting for more chapters!!!

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5 stars! This book has the potential, I love your writing quality so much, this being your first novel is already amazing! Please continue to write more, the story overall is intriguing, good job! keep up the good work, Author!

This story uses present tense as narration. Grammar and pacing were both decent. Not exceptional, not bad either. I did enjoy the comedy and the plot was interesting... Hopefully, it things won't go too badly for the mc....Hopefully