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Write a reviewBefore you start, read this review! [Review date: 22-06-2021] Passed after the editing. GOOD POINTS: - Great flow - Perfectly placed dialogues - Characters are interesting - Plotline has magic, love, romance, and suspense in it - REMEMBER, there's a story going on within the story - There's a mysterious glimpse revolving around the characters. - Transmigration is done very well and the hooks are well placed. - One can connect with the FL very well with her 'human-ness.' WEAKNESS: - Little punctuation errors. - Capitalization at few places. If you are aiming to read n exciting + dramatic + really interesting transmigration pick this. Believe it's amazing with the 'story within the story' aspect.
Can someone pls give me a spiler?? Because I Don't want to continue after chapter 86😭 if they Don't clear their misunderstandings........
I dropped this at ch 20 and I can’t continue with the story. The writing isn’t as good as I thought. For starters, the FL falls wayyyy to easily falls for a guy who left her to die and only saved her just cause his right hand urged him to. And the basic of human decency makes her heart flutter .. and she’s also feels for him cuz he has a tragic backstory. Simply put, “I can fix him” seem like the premise so far for her character. ML is just written to be evil and does evil things even to the FL but she falls for him regardless cuz he’s handsome and pitiful so pretty much it’s like everything is dismissed. She keeps mentioning that she knows he’s evil cuz she read the main plot but she forgets that he’s because of how he treats her. Anyways if an FL being naive and easily falls for the ML who does evil things to the FL but gets away with it becuase he’s handsome or because he does basic human decency then this the novel for u.
Reveal SpoilerHonestly, I loved this book. ❤️ Plot is intriguing and the characters are mostly well versed and detailed. The book has a great feel to it, although you might get lost at times towards the end. I really did enjoy the whole experience! I loved the FL throughout the book and the ML is intense and untrustworthy at times. It did keep me on my toes the whole time! My only critique is that I would say that the end felt rushed. I did not get the great detailed information the author was able to convey earlier in the story… they might have just been ready to get the book over and done with so they could move on, so I get it. :)) But I really, well and truly did enjoy it!❤️
This book is on my short list of few which I feel are hidden gems. The writing, plot development, characters kept me going from start to finish, and at no point did I feal wearied or inclined to stop. I absolutely recommend it.
Every thing is so well detailed yet it doesn't seem to bore you and the story really holds your attention and makes you want to turn page 👌👌👌👌👌
This is so good?? I don't like reading webnovels, but I came to try this book on someone's recommendation and it was so worth it. There are certain parts with little plotholes and some grammatical mistakes. But it's the author's first webnovel, so I don't think those flaws are a biggie tbh. It kept me hooked until 50+ chapters so I gotta say I am impressed. PS: The recent incidents are making it hard to leave it, if you know what I mean. 🌜
great story !! The characters are well set and perfect, the progression of story is great and amazing. All i have to say is -- Just amazing work !! keep up !!
This story is great, the way things are explained, the appearance of another transmigrant, the desire for freedom of the protagonist all this makes me want to read more and more, the dialogue flows naturally and the writing is excellent, I CONCERNEDLY WILL CONTINUE TO READ THIS.
This novel deserves more views! It manages to grabs the reader's attention from the get-go. With a great plot, intriguing characters, and each chapter leaving the reader in suspense and craving more, it can't be rated other than 5/5. I'm a sucker for any fantasy-romance novels, but this one takes the cake! I literally couldn't put it down and am currently caught up at chapter 103. Looking forward to future updates and seeing how the story progresses. Thank you for sharing your book with us author!
i don't know what to say other than wow. the story get more interesting as i dive deeper into the book. hihhly recommandable![img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
I would say that it is not really my cup of tea but I can not say it is not a good book, the author is doing good with this book so I can say you all should give it a try it is a nice read💕
It's pretty interesting, and I'm getting hook every dialog I read. I'm into this kind of story. I'm going to read further to check the character development and how to story flows. The story is well written, and I love the synopsis.
A very fun novel! It seems a little slow with pacing in the beginning, I found myself wanting more of a hook in the first chapter. But the characters are very deep and well developed.
I really like how the plot goes well in your story, and the character is surely an interesting person, this story is really good and I hope to see more updates on it.
I like the novel thus far, the fact that there is another person who also joined and transmigrated into this world as well, great description, great plot, a great read indeed, right now how it sets I like everything on it, no nitpicks from me personally anyways. great read, I recommend reading it
Reveal SpoilerI do like how well you describe the characters. They fit extremely well and the plot moves very smoothly. Everything that happens in this story is very complex and interesting to read. It's a very great book and I enjoyed my time with it!
A novel that answer the question: what if ALL characters were isekai protagonists? XD Or more than one, at least. Nicely executed and fresh. Recommend.
5/5 (ะ`・ω・´ะ) Great story (=ↀωↀ=)✧ What I personally like about this is the feeling of suspense, and as I read, I turn excited to know what will happen next ლ(=ↀωↀ=)ლ The book also has likable characters ^ↀᴥↀ^ So far, the pacing is alright b(=^‥^=)o Good job, author ~(=^‥^)_旦~
This novel has a unique twist to the usual transmigration story. I very much like the vision of the author. The grammar and writing are all very clean and proper. The characters are greatly portrayed. The central conflict and story is immediately established. You get to know where the story will be heading. The reveal in early chapters is simply ingenious. There are minor issue with some dialogue tags and pacing of the story that I have shared with the author, but they do not take away from the enjoying the unique tale. Thank you so much, author. Please continue writing this unique tale and I will continue to follow it.
Very interesting! Excellent grammar, excellent plot, and excellent character depth as well. The pace is good. Might be just me, but I was hoping for a big picture overview somewhere near the beginning so I could get my bearings. But still, I was more than happy to follow the flow. Well written!
One thing I so love about the novel is the language. The language is such that is simple and easy to relate with. The imagination behind this novel is captivation. The author I bet too her/his time to edit this book so well and I honestly think you should give this book a try too.
The story was well paced. It was very interesting and the plot twist with the emperor was very unexpected and is a characteristic of an FL novel. Aside from unnoticeable grammar mistakes, I don't find anything wrong with it at all. It will all depends on how the story turns out at this point.
The plotline is good and the characters are very… unusual. The author needs to watch out for minor spelling errors, preposition issues and slightly improper tense usage, however [basically grammatical errors in general]. If you haven’t already, I would suggest getting someone else to proofread your work, so that you can be sure your work is with as few mistakes as possible [or you can take the time to read your story from the first chapter to the latest each time you post a new chapter, so that you can be sure your story flows smoothly WITH as few mistakes as possible in between]. Keep up the good work, author! P.S I love the plot twist in Chapter 2; thought it was gonna be a normal transmigration story~
REVIEW Narration: Decent and immersive Worldbuilding: Vast and detailed Character development: Nice and steady Character design: Outstanding
ooh, this is a new approach for an isekai story. (if I am correct) two girls were transported into a novel, and the plot kinda reminded me of that one barbie film. Anyway, the story feels smooth. I really love the twist you add here in your novel. In all honesty, it amazed me. I left my mouth hanging wide open while reading this!
I've read your story and It's well written which is quite impressive... It does only have 7 chapters as of now, so I can't judge the book too well as it's only just the beginning stages, but overall I think it's great, This book is certainly a rare find... I hope you the best of luck in your journey as an author. And kudos to you!!
SPOILER ALERT!! (Summary of the initial chapters/ review) So the story starts with our MC and a glimpse of her restrictive life. First chapter revolved around how she had lived her life before the prolific killer truck-kun delivered her to another world. MC had been a filial daughter. She had lived her life trying to please her mother and everyone around her. thus, she failed to speak for herself or be heard by them. It's a tiring, toxic life she had to endure. Then, truck-kun at your service happened. (promotion for my next novel) When MC died, she was not really sad neither was she happy. She just had too many regrets. You know, the series of "what ifs" in life. We all had those. And then, like most transmigration/reincarnation/system novels, here comes the voice. Since we're all familiar that after the voice, we expect our MC transmigrating into another world. In this case, our MC was teleported to a novel she had read as a princess' proxy/handmaid. Turns out, the princess, Johannah was being occupied by the writer of the novel. (the writer died and experienced the same process as our MC and now they're both characters in the novel) And yep. we had a lot of things going on here. In the process, the time MC arrived in the novel, there had already been changes in the story because the writer (Johannah/Amber irl) messed things up. The little changes had slowly taken effect, changing the supposed events/arcs that should originally happened. So, the starts of the MC's survival adventure. Review: I won't focus on grammar since I'm bad at it myself. But, there were occasional typos and tenses getting mixed up which can be overlook because the flow is good. The flow is more important (according to me.) Anyway, as a whole, the story concept was not very new. BUT, what made this special is that things happened when you least expect it. You might read and say, "hmm. sounds familiar." but the next second, you'll raise your brows and say, "maybe, not." That's the kind of novel is this. Overall, its a good read. Looking forward for more chapter. I wish the author success with this novel! (please make this an adventure novel and just add romance as a subplot. lol)
Reveal SpoilerThe writing quality is really good! I see no problem at all! I love how Amber and Nesrin are very supportive on each other, I'm waiting for more between them! This is a recommended book, thumbs up author!
Before you start, read this review! [Review date: 22-06-2021] Passed after the editing. GOOD POINTS: - Great flow - Perfectly placed dialogues - Characters are interesting - Plotline has magic, love, romance, and suspense in it - REMEMBER, there's a story going on within the story - There's a mysterious glimpse revolving around the characters. - Transmigration is done very well and the hooks are well placed. - One can connect with the FL very well with her 'human-ness.' WEAKNESS: - Little punctuation errors. - Capitalization at few places. If you are aiming to read n exciting + dramatic + really interesting transmigration pick this. Believe it's amazing with the 'story within the story' aspect.
Can someone pls give me a spiler?? Because I Don't want to continue after chapter 86😭 if they Don't clear their misunderstandings........
I dropped this at ch 20 and I can’t continue with the story. The writing isn’t as good as I thought. For starters, the FL falls wayyyy to easily falls for a guy who left her to die and only saved her just cause his right hand urged him to. And the basic of human decency makes her heart flutter .. and she’s also feels for him cuz he has a tragic backstory. Simply put, “I can fix him” seem like the premise so far for her character. ML is just written to be evil and does evil things even to the FL but she falls for him regardless cuz he’s handsome and pitiful so pretty much it’s like everything is dismissed. She keeps mentioning that she knows he’s evil cuz she read the main plot but she forgets that he’s because of how he treats her. Anyways if an FL being naive and easily falls for the ML who does evil things to the FL but gets away with it becuase he’s handsome or because he does basic human decency then this the novel for u.
Reveal SpoilerHonestly, I loved this book. ❤️ Plot is intriguing and the characters are mostly well versed and detailed. The book has a great feel to it, although you might get lost at times towards the end. I really did enjoy the whole experience! I loved the FL throughout the book and the ML is intense and untrustworthy at times. It did keep me on my toes the whole time! My only critique is that I would say that the end felt rushed. I did not get the great detailed information the author was able to convey earlier in the story… they might have just been ready to get the book over and done with so they could move on, so I get it. :)) But I really, well and truly did enjoy it!❤️
This book is on my short list of few which I feel are hidden gems. The writing, plot development, characters kept me going from start to finish, and at no point did I feal wearied or inclined to stop. I absolutely recommend it.
Every thing is so well detailed yet it doesn't seem to bore you and the story really holds your attention and makes you want to turn page 👌👌👌👌👌
This is so good?? I don't like reading webnovels, but I came to try this book on someone's recommendation and it was so worth it. There are certain parts with little plotholes and some grammatical mistakes. But it's the author's first webnovel, so I don't think those flaws are a biggie tbh. It kept me hooked until 50+ chapters so I gotta say I am impressed. PS: The recent incidents are making it hard to leave it, if you know what I mean. 🌜
great story !! The characters are well set and perfect, the progression of story is great and amazing. All i have to say is -- Just amazing work !! keep up !!
This story is great, the way things are explained, the appearance of another transmigrant, the desire for freedom of the protagonist all this makes me want to read more and more, the dialogue flows naturally and the writing is excellent, I CONCERNEDLY WILL CONTINUE TO READ THIS.
This novel deserves more views! It manages to grabs the reader's attention from the get-go. With a great plot, intriguing characters, and each chapter leaving the reader in suspense and craving more, it can't be rated other than 5/5. I'm a sucker for any fantasy-romance novels, but this one takes the cake! I literally couldn't put it down and am currently caught up at chapter 103. Looking forward to future updates and seeing how the story progresses. Thank you for sharing your book with us author!
i don't know what to say other than wow. the story get more interesting as i dive deeper into the book. hihhly recommandable![img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
I would say that it is not really my cup of tea but I can not say it is not a good book, the author is doing good with this book so I can say you all should give it a try it is a nice read💕
It's pretty interesting, and I'm getting hook every dialog I read. I'm into this kind of story. I'm going to read further to check the character development and how to story flows. The story is well written, and I love the synopsis.
A very fun novel! It seems a little slow with pacing in the beginning, I found myself wanting more of a hook in the first chapter. But the characters are very deep and well developed.
I really like how the plot goes well in your story, and the character is surely an interesting person, this story is really good and I hope to see more updates on it.
I like the novel thus far, the fact that there is another person who also joined and transmigrated into this world as well, great description, great plot, a great read indeed, right now how it sets I like everything on it, no nitpicks from me personally anyways. great read, I recommend reading it
Reveal SpoilerI do like how well you describe the characters. They fit extremely well and the plot moves very smoothly. Everything that happens in this story is very complex and interesting to read. It's a very great book and I enjoyed my time with it!
A novel that answer the question: what if ALL characters were isekai protagonists? XD Or more than one, at least. Nicely executed and fresh. Recommend.
5/5 (ะ`・ω・´ะ) Great story (=ↀωↀ=)✧ What I personally like about this is the feeling of suspense, and as I read, I turn excited to know what will happen next ლ(=ↀωↀ=)ლ The book also has likable characters ^ↀᴥↀ^ So far, the pacing is alright b(=^‥^=)o Good job, author ~(=^‥^)_旦~
This novel has a unique twist to the usual transmigration story. I very much like the vision of the author. The grammar and writing are all very clean and proper. The characters are greatly portrayed. The central conflict and story is immediately established. You get to know where the story will be heading. The reveal in early chapters is simply ingenious. There are minor issue with some dialogue tags and pacing of the story that I have shared with the author, but they do not take away from the enjoying the unique tale. Thank you so much, author. Please continue writing this unique tale and I will continue to follow it.
Very interesting! Excellent grammar, excellent plot, and excellent character depth as well. The pace is good. Might be just me, but I was hoping for a big picture overview somewhere near the beginning so I could get my bearings. But still, I was more than happy to follow the flow. Well written!
One thing I so love about the novel is the language. The language is such that is simple and easy to relate with. The imagination behind this novel is captivation. The author I bet too her/his time to edit this book so well and I honestly think you should give this book a try too.
The story was well paced. It was very interesting and the plot twist with the emperor was very unexpected and is a characteristic of an FL novel. Aside from unnoticeable grammar mistakes, I don't find anything wrong with it at all. It will all depends on how the story turns out at this point.
The plotline is good and the characters are very… unusual. The author needs to watch out for minor spelling errors, preposition issues and slightly improper tense usage, however [basically grammatical errors in general]. If you haven’t already, I would suggest getting someone else to proofread your work, so that you can be sure your work is with as few mistakes as possible [or you can take the time to read your story from the first chapter to the latest each time you post a new chapter, so that you can be sure your story flows smoothly WITH as few mistakes as possible in between]. Keep up the good work, author! P.S I love the plot twist in Chapter 2; thought it was gonna be a normal transmigration story~
REVIEW Narration: Decent and immersive Worldbuilding: Vast and detailed Character development: Nice and steady Character design: Outstanding
ooh, this is a new approach for an isekai story. (if I am correct) two girls were transported into a novel, and the plot kinda reminded me of that one barbie film. Anyway, the story feels smooth. I really love the twist you add here in your novel. In all honesty, it amazed me. I left my mouth hanging wide open while reading this!
I've read your story and It's well written which is quite impressive... It does only have 7 chapters as of now, so I can't judge the book too well as it's only just the beginning stages, but overall I think it's great, This book is certainly a rare find... I hope you the best of luck in your journey as an author. And kudos to you!!
SPOILER ALERT!! (Summary of the initial chapters/ review) So the story starts with our MC and a glimpse of her restrictive life. First chapter revolved around how she had lived her life before the prolific killer truck-kun delivered her to another world. MC had been a filial daughter. She had lived her life trying to please her mother and everyone around her. thus, she failed to speak for herself or be heard by them. It's a tiring, toxic life she had to endure. Then, truck-kun at your service happened. (promotion for my next novel) When MC died, she was not really sad neither was she happy. She just had too many regrets. You know, the series of "what ifs" in life. We all had those. And then, like most transmigration/reincarnation/system novels, here comes the voice. Since we're all familiar that after the voice, we expect our MC transmigrating into another world. In this case, our MC was teleported to a novel she had read as a princess' proxy/handmaid. Turns out, the princess, Johannah was being occupied by the writer of the novel. (the writer died and experienced the same process as our MC and now they're both characters in the novel) And yep. we had a lot of things going on here. In the process, the time MC arrived in the novel, there had already been changes in the story because the writer (Johannah/Amber irl) messed things up. The little changes had slowly taken effect, changing the supposed events/arcs that should originally happened. So, the starts of the MC's survival adventure. Review: I won't focus on grammar since I'm bad at it myself. But, there were occasional typos and tenses getting mixed up which can be overlook because the flow is good. The flow is more important (according to me.) Anyway, as a whole, the story concept was not very new. BUT, what made this special is that things happened when you least expect it. You might read and say, "hmm. sounds familiar." but the next second, you'll raise your brows and say, "maybe, not." That's the kind of novel is this. Overall, its a good read. Looking forward for more chapter. I wish the author success with this novel! (please make this an adventure novel and just add romance as a subplot. lol)
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The writing quality is really good! I see no problem at all! I love how Amber and Nesrin are very supportive on each other, I'm waiting for more between them! This is a recommended book, thumbs up author!