Reviews of NPC Code: Red Riding Hood by kuhaku_sora - Webnovel

I always ask myself this question “Why do you want to write stories?” When I was still a student, I had a few friends I could rely on, but no genuine connections (I secluded myself from them). I had no purpose in life. It felt like I was moving on a cord with no directions. However, that feeling changed when I read light novels and books. That time made me feel I was not alone anymore. Ten years have passed, and here I am, wanting to share that experience with those isolated and sad individuals like I was from before. I want to reach my hand to them and entertain them, regardless of how much I earn or how many views I have. I want to give everyone a pleasant time, enjoying the stories that I write. NPC Code: Red Riding Hood is the best one that I am proud of writing. Thank you, everyone, for giving this a try. Let me know if you hate it. Let me know if you have enjoyed reading the story. Let me know if something changed. Let me know both the negative and positive sides of your feelings!

i dislike the concept. it is a knockoff of the legendary mechanic at the core. go use a original idea please. its not hard......................................

It's an interesting take on a well-uses premise. I appreciate that this time, the female character is self-driven and actually HAS character. Grammar and diction is also impeccable, and the story building is great. Overall, a good read!! Keep writing!!

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Very very well written. The vocabulary and grammar are spot on. The plot is epic but most of all, the character growth is really well done! Excellent novel!

The novel is well versed. The start itself was like an invitation to dig deeper into the chapters. The environment was explained vividly and this actually made me imagine the characters in that place. Very well written. Keep Going!!!

I have completed the first chapter, and I swear to you, I am definitely going to read more. Unfortunately, It's late and I need to go to bed, but I wanna get this review out while all this info is in my head. Plot: 9.5/10 Really intriguing plot. I'm new to Webnovel, so I don't know how unique it is, but I have watched and played stories similar. Which is totally not a bad thing at all. If anything, it made me enjoy the story a whole lot more. Knowing some of the source material gave me deeper understandings of the characters and their motivations. The only reason I'm giving a 9.5 is because at some points the story is very explain-y, if that makes any sense. There was a lot of info given at one time. I mostly retained the information, but there were times I had to go back and read it to understand what was happening. Characters: 10/10 Really intriguing characters. There are times I read books on this website, and I completely forget the cast and who they're supposed to be. And with the lack of much dialogue in this one, I assumed the character's would be forgettable. But they weren't. Part of this is the interesting names you gave them. Red RIding Hood, or Red, and Clementine are a few example. The lines they do have are memorable and intriguing. World: 11/10 This was my absolute favorite part about your story. I really felt immersed in the world you tried to build. Like, really immersed. The setting was relatable, because everyone has seen shows with Kingdoms and villages and stuff like that. And the whole Virtual Reality aspect added depth to the setting. Overall, this is a great story. I really wanna read more. There were a few minor errors, but they really don't reflect the author or their style at all. That's all they are, tiny mistakes. And I see that you're competing for the Webnovel Spirity Awards. This definitely deserves one of the top spots. And I'm saying that even though I'm technically supposed to be competing against you, lol. Keep up the good work!

hey author, I was wondering if you took inspiration from the manga called "Updater" the synopsis sounds almost the same so I'm wondering if that's where you got your idea from.

This is a truly distinct and unique piece of work. The idea of making an NPC in a game world into the Main Character is nothing short of amazing. For this particular reason, I fell in love with this novel💕 The Author has a nack for writing and describing gory scenes too. I enjoyed that. There are a few errors here and there, but who cares? The story is lovely. I recommend it to everyone. Nice work, author. This is a beautiful piece💕💖

First of all, What i like the most is the idea of the story, its unique. Somewhat unbelievable, but still, it's web novel, this is what makes it exciting, no. Secondly, great writing. There are some typos but they can be ignored as the flow of the work is great and easily understandable. Thirdly, chapters are hooking. All and all, this work has great protentional. Well done Author! Waiting for more chapters. Recommending everyone to read the work atleast once.

I am just a first time writer but I am an avid reader .I can recognize a good story if I see it .This one is definitely one good read . Your writing style is really good. well done

I was hooked from the first chapters. Well to be honest I was hooked from the synopsis 🤣 I think the idea is very interesting. Reading a story from an NPC's perspective instead of a player that goes inside a game is soooo new, at least to me. So I am having loads of fun with it. The writing quality is really good and I think you have a good style. Your descriptions manage to pull at my heartstrings from time to time, making the story even more enjoyable. It's nice and gripping! Keep up the good work! 🥰

this is an interesting one. especially when author included the children's stories in the novel. the concept is intriguing enough to hooook me![img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]

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Thank you for posting this wonderful novel , I really love your work and makes inspire every day . Every plot and characters were very portrait beautifuly as I would like to see every updates everyday . Thank you fellow writer 👍 I really love your novel which inspires me every day to be someone like you. I always think to follow your footsteps. 👋 😇

Starting felt like the generic start of the VR story but as I progressed the story was quite unique. The thing that I felt unusual was the game dev not having any control over their own game. It felt kinda unreal but it was need for the plot trigger so I guess its fine. Ngl the writing quality was quite good. It was emerging and easy to imagine. I liked the writing style. the only thing I felt lacking was the character design. Its my opinion tho.

I don't usually like stories with systems, but this one is perfectly fine, as it's not too intrusive! Red is a wonderful protagonist and her motivations are both relatable and interesting. Keep up the good work!

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As a gamer by heart this story is wondrous for those like me. The plot feels well thought out and the author made sure that the first chapter was 100% on point to capture readers and you aced it! Great work!!

Great. This story is amazing tho there are some typos but still, it's not much of a problem for me. I like the style of the author and let's not forget about the plot it's unique and new because this is the first time for me to read a book like this. I'm happy I choose this book.

great novel, the world context has me much more, the development of the story is also exceptional. I hope you will continue to write this story.

Nice novel...this novel have = writing quality >>> have little grammar problem but still I can understand when I'm reading. Story development >>> so far so good. Character design >>> so detailed. Updating stability >>> Good,depending situation and timelines. World background >>> detailed information. (The mc is npc named Red that realized her world is just entertainment for player and seek vengeance again founder of Code.On the other side this novel have second mc named uchida top ranked player want to save his friend but he knows his friend accidentally killed Red's sister...) - Well that's all I can tell,this novel interesting we have two main character here,one is npc and the other one is player... - Everything on this novel written well and interesting I can't wait author-san upload more chapters.Have a good day and take care yourself too!

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due to a review swap I was recommended this story. and boy... and I glad it was! I haven't read the entire novel, but this has gotten me hooked. I find myself reading this every spare second of my time! the story may sound cliché, but it isn't. I love the protagonists, each are well written and the second one especially! I rarely give five stars, but its because I'm saving it for stories like this!

Just read the first chapter.. It’s my first time reading a story with a NPC as its lead.. and you make the NPC could refuse the story created by the sistem.. she must be good at coding.. lol... but it makes the story more interesting.. the idea is good.. the design of the game reminds me of MMORPG dragon oath I played during my high school.. It’s well written.. Best of luck for your WSA as well👌🏻

The storyline is good. What he can't do, but now can enter the game world. The first impression that I read, This story has a fairly complicated plot.

This is a very solid story. I like how it's written and I like the description of the story for the most part. The only thing I would say is that I put a bit more into laying out how people look and how the monsters look. Besides that, I don't have any complaints. The characters are interesting, but I think the ideas make the story stand out more than anything. The idea of the virtual game is very interesting. The story development is outstanding.

Overall - This is an intriguing novel to read. If you want to read a book full of thrills, look no further than this. Highly recommended. Style - Classic first person point of view. The readers are able to see the world through the eyes of the MC. The readers experience the development of the main character in a great way. Updating - As a writer myself, I give kudos to the author. Wtiting is very hard. I'm giving the autho 5 in this aspect. Story - Well planned. It follows the tale of Red, an NPC, in a litrpg world. Story line is the heart of any novel, and this novel did a good job on its story. Hard to put down. Believe me. It's captivating. Grammar - Excellent use of the grammar. No complaint on this aspect. The flow of the story is smooth which shows the effort that the author is putting into the writing. Commendable. Character - The characters are well written and designed. They fitted their roles, especially the MC. The other characters are well catered for too. Kudos to the author. World: Its based on the fantasy genre settings of litrpg. The author put great effort into this and it was perfect. Well done.

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This is my first time reading a story like this and not gonna lie, i really like it! It got me interested in the story as soon as i read the first part of the story! I like how detailed the story was and the grammer and words used are superb. Even the title is nice, it attracts readers to read! I hope to see more of the story, it was a amazing read!! I’ll save this in my library and wait for the updates of it!! ✨✨[img=recommend]

The novel is very easy to read with good flow and pacing. Though a lot of people may think the concept isn’t entirely unique, it’s executed much better than majority of any other similar novels. The MC is refreshing and the world building is done beautifully, without it feeling like too much. I hope to read more soon.

This story about a VR game seems to be an amazing one. Although, the idea of an NPC becoming a main character or a villain seemed to be used a lot nowadays. I could find on different sites of web novels the same idea of this. The writing quality on this novel it is amazing. The characters seem normal for today standards, were rich folks are doing sexy models just to get the money out of simps pockets. The plot, it is for now heading into a good direction. Carry on, author!