Chapter comments on the chapter Escape. of the book The Dark Lord's Maiden

It actually gives classic feels with those dialogues. Many such novels lack it these days.

Such a captivating story, you making reading interesting and nicely done

Beth is a nice girl. She should hide Mr. Pickles in the barn, or wherever.

For that period, it was hard for maidens to survive without depending on their families and men. I hope Beth could meet a nice gentleman The conversation reminds me to my favorite Pride and Prejudice ;)

I kinda like it

Ahh I feel so sad for Beth sitting on a chair I saw her eyes tearing up making her green pupil magical yet breaking lending my hands I knew she won't know am there for her!

The narrative reminds me of a classic in the genre. Barbara Cartland.Good work.

Feeling bad for Beth 😔

I love the pace of the story plot👏👏

Nicely written! Well done! Waiting for more ;)

Is Elizabeth Mr Blythe’s neice