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S_N_4028
The deaths, mistakes and grudges accumulating facing such cruelty through multiple lives is a nice touch. A limited set of abilities against the superpowerful hero and well, everyone. The curse isn't helping much. Some of the characters are annoying but yeah kid annoying.
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KayLillyt_1
There is no going wrong with this. A tale of rebirth, struggling to find a path to ultimate happiness. Each word is worth reading. Definitely read it
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MicahDarkFantasy
I like the premise behind it. This story has this reoccurring theme to it that plays out like I'm about to read something that I'll never forget. I definitely had that with this book and I'm glad I got the chance to read it. Like good Fantasy/Romance stories, it has likable characters, a very detailed world background, beautiful storytelling, and enough intrigue to keep me invested in what this author will deliver in future chapters. Overall, it's an interesting take on a reoccurring statement and it's executed brilliantly! Great read!
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Epyonnn
Enjoyable read! As of writing this review, I haven't read the entire story, but I found it quite entertaining. I'm always looking to try out different genres that I've never read before, so an otome game villainess reincarnation instantly caught my eye. I would like to point out that the infinite reincarnation may end up becoming repetitive and reduce the tension in the plot, but so far, it has been handled with care. Keep up the good work!
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ghjgyugf
I loved the MC, the story was unique and mysterious, there were plenty of things that will keep the reader pushing for further chapters there was a negligible amount of error that was good author you're doing great
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Proteety_Promi
Wow! A great story from a great author! The story is well-described and just perfect for anyone who loves fantasy. Good job! Keep up the good work!
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Loyalscum
This was an interesting read its hard finding a novel with a female mc thats actually entertaining. Can't wait for more from this hidden gem.
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archiey_
A potential starlet! Definitely recommended for people who wanted a new take on villainess/reincarnation trope!
I'm intrigued by the different takes on villainess/reincarnation trope because it's quite rare for a protagonist — a villainess, live the same identity everytime she reincarnate, not to mention, it's countless times! So the concept is really interesting. Also the story pacing is good and not rushed or to slow.
The characters are also likeable for me as I could understand the reason behind their action and the characters didn't feel robotic or "forced" as the story developed. There's still mysteries in regard to character backstory/history especially our MC, and her maid. So I'm looking forward for future development!
For writing quality, it can be improved. As a person who is very picky with story I read, grammar is the aspect I look after storytelling and how interesting the plot of a story. I'm the type ignore grammar error when the story's enjoyable and this story is one of it.
The grammatical errors is still there, and some of it is just common mistakes in grammar (as far as I can notice) but not that glaring to make you suffer from migraine.
However, I suggest the author avoid using the same linkers or words. Other than that, please be careful of using he/she pronounciation. I was so confused when the pronouncing changes from he to she at some chapters when character gender already established 😅. Nevertheless, the writing quality improve in later chapters.
In terms of narration and pov changes, it's unique? Although there's time where the transitions seems weird, it wasn't awkward. I think of it as author writing style. Ohh yeah, the chapters length also is just nice. Not too draggy and abruptly end.
Overall, this story has potential if polished nicely. So, don't miss out on this story or you'll regret it later 😜
Kudos with many thanks to the author for writing this story! Cheers and goodluck to your writing journey [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
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Proteety_Promi
I like the story a lot. The cover photo is cute and the way you describe things deserves praise. Really amazing! Keep working on the good work!
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Jo_J
The reincarnation and the journey of souls is an interesting topic here, on WN, and has always attracted attention, so you chose a good topic. The plot is intriguing and your main character is expressive. Well done.
Good luck with the contest!
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The_Procrastinator
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YawningBrain
I really liked the story, it was truly engaging to read and the pace and descriptions of the world are superb. I a intrigued to know more.
Excellent job!
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WinterQween
So the main plot line is quite common but ofc the author adds their own unique spin. From the getgo I enjoyed the MC's carefree vibe & that she seems to never give up. Would recommend if anyone is looking for an otome game novel!
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Wolfgirl1215
This was great!
I really enjoyed the concept of being reborn into the same life over and over, and that you can see the mental exhaustion really affecting the protagonist. I love the style of narration, the humor, overall a very nice read.
If you are in to reincarnation, I would highly recommend this one!
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Monarch_Of_Death
The story really is a nice one. The development pt the story, the world background, and the other aspects. (I can't speak about the grammars as I myself wasn't good at it)
Promising by the way.
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Khawla_Amini
The book is so interesting...
The plot is amazing, the style of writing is kinda interesting too.
Not to mention the very attractive title.
I love everything about this book so far 😍
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Lullabybao
Pretty good story to be honest. I found it more fascinating and eye catching than I'd expected it to be. Good work author. hope you become a great author you are meant to be.
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_banana_
I really enjoyed this story, it's really amazing how the situations are developing, and I'm liking how it's progressing so far.
This story has great potential, good luck on the wsa!
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Precious_Onwe
I love this book!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Maryixxx
I can't deny the fact that this one is interesting and at the same time a refreshing story for readers.
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HelenBold
Oh, this book made me smile several times. The narration is witty and keeps you enthralled. I didn't know whether to laugh or be sad in some situations, but that was interesting, and it doesn't happen to me often. Overall, an excellent read, and I highly recommend it!
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Cy_Rinn_10
I'm so glad you aren't gone. Webnovel has been recommending me nothing but the most gutter tier y/n wattpad fanfiction-esque stories and your writing is just so immersive it'd be a lost if this story were gone.😭💓
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Winterwisps
The writing in this story is good, although a little quirky at times. The development is rather interesting, and the main character has a lot of personality. There's a lot of explaining going on in the first chapters, which suggests a lot of depth to the world setting.
A very enjoyable beginning to a story I hope to see more of.
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Khawla_Amini
This is wonderful, I'm totally in love with this book...
The plot is interesting, the style of writing is more than unique, and I'm totally hooked by the characters...
The book is already in my library, and I can't stop myself from being addicted [img=update]
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Aeipathy_02
A very refreshing villainess trope.
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Writing quality: It is great. I have seen no g-errors and the narratives were well-written.
Stability of Updates. The author has a steady update every day.
Story Development. With the unique plot of the female lead dying and reviving, it has infinite potential too for many ideas. I love the flow of the story so far, it's not too fast-paced or either slow-paced.
Character Design: Well-rounded characters especially the female lead. It is also funny how she gave nicknames to people she hated.
World Background. Well written.
Overall, this book is an interesting read that has some unique plots from your usual villainess.
Great work author!
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pelzy
I'm trying to broaden my library, so stories like these are new to me, but this seems very interesting. Honestly, I found the synopsis kinda funny, but I like the vibe overall.
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Jo_J
Dear Author, the plot is interesting and your characters are expressive. You also pay attention to the language. Well done!
Whish you endless inspiration and a lot of great ideas!
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