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kpthe1
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kpthe1

Hey author here. As always I'm giving myself a rating. I'm introducing a new type of system in this novel world. A borrowing system. Psst!!!! Here's a spoiler. The MC will borrow items from this system. Don't miss this!!!!!!!
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WinterTimeCrime
There's so much to cover but I can't spoil it, unfortunately! At first, I thought this was another eastern novel but I was quickly surprised with how fast the story shifted. Writing Quality: Despite the writer's first language not being English, most of the scenes are described quite well. Excellent story-telling and the dialogues are quite realistic. Remember, however, that not everything in a scene needs to be revealed to the reader, like specific locations, numbers, etc. leave a bit of imagery to the reader :) Stability of Updates: Too soon to tell but they seem to be on the right track. Just keep writing every day and try to make deadlines for yourself. My goal is 3 Chapters every day before the afternoon, practice makes perfect. Story Development: If I could go 7/5 I would! As soon as they talked about the borrowing system a few chapters in all I could think about was FMA and FMA: B regarding 'Equivalent Exchange.' I thought that was one of the most interesting concepts to ever exist in anime because the MCs aren't typically overpowered as they have to be creative with what they already have. You can already tell that the MC is crafty and resourceful, so it'll be interesting to see how he uses this new system and for what. Character Design: Excellent work describing each of the characters and making them memorable, from the names to the way they act. Bravo! World Background: I could easily visualize each place they were in, imagery is imperative in fiction and it seems like you know what you're doing -- you're already a ways ahead of your competition. In conclusion, love the book so far, love the idea, and can't wait to read more! P.S. With English being my second language I can totally relate to you as I can see the minor mistakes you're making in your work (imagery, diction, and sentence-structure wise) if you'd like to talk we can exchange discords :)
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Blue_Pizza
So I came here for a review swap and wasn't sure what to expect going into this book. I recently got out of my Books with Systems phase and was quite tired of all the systems that were A) cute, fluffy but utterly useless and B) cold, mechanical, calculative and just using the mc for its gain (and the mc that is given no choice but to obey albeit unwilling). Imagine how elated I was when here comes a system that HELPS the mc. Even if Genesis doesn't give out impromptu missions like a game (I like this), just the originality of the borrowing system sold the story to me. Plot wise, I have nothing to say. 5 stars. The author was more focused on character development than world building in the first few chapters but luckily it didn't drag on for too long. Mysteries and more Genesis scenes prompted me to not skip-read, and I'm glad I didn't. The MC is smart, hilarious and the way his system functions is definitely the most unique one I have ever read. The only problem is sometimes the past and present tenses get mixed up and I get confused. All in all, this is an intriguing and interesting story. If the grammar errors can be corrected, I will rate it perfect stars. Best of luck author!
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yu_chan_desu
this novel is probably one of the most original thought i have ever come upon with regards to themes on systems.. unique and wonderdully written you will never be bored with the way the author narrates the story of wang wei. kudos to you dear author and keep writing!
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Aciee_GelaTin
Don't know much about novels with systems, but I can tell that this is an innovation. The title of the book is both hooking and intriguing. Never seen something similar to it before. The plot seems to have a lot going on too 🤔 The storytelling is quite captivating, and the narrative is enjoyable to read 😊 Liking the character design as well. Overall, this is quite a great work!
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Zhang_Awei
Nice cover. From the cover, I already know what the story will be. I already read a few chapters. This story had great prospects, just keep up the good works author.
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gaijsnsn
im not good at reviewing, but here i go. okay, this is a really good read. the MC is very well written, and I love the system in here. I also like how truck-kun was left out, and he's just in the real world with it to help him along. please, anyone reading this, go read the story, you'll like it too.
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MatchaMilk
First off, reading the synopsis already made me excited for the story and I have to say the story doesn't disappoint. Although it seems to start off slow, you are already intrigued about what's going to happen and about MC's character. The writing is simple yet fits the story perfectly. What I like a lot is the dialogue because it sounds quite natural, although I do have to say that author doesnt put comma or anything for the dialogues. However, the world-building shows great promise and the pace flows nicely with the story. An interesting and amazing read, everyone should pick up and start reading!
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Lizabelle88
This novel is about Borrowing System, and this one is unique! The writing is easy to read, easy to understand and has an interesting plot that I came to like. The characters are likable and the flow of the narrative is awesome! The story development is in right pacing, not so fast and not so slow either. Overall, the story is entertaining, a page turner and makes me laugh. Above all a good read! Good job, Author! Keep it up!
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Winterwisps
Short review: Very fun setup with good characters and an interesting system. Long review: The writing is overall decent, but the author shifts around in tense too much to make it a natural read. The story development is excellent, with a good introduction and setting up the stakes from the very first chapter. The characters are very well developed, with distinct features, and their interaction feels natural. I'm not far enough to say a lot about the world-building, but it appears solid, and I'm interested in how the author is going to make the supernatural features fit into an Earth-like world.
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Minxs
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Minxs

Only a few chapters in and here is my review. Professional story! That's all that comes to mind when I read this book. It's very detailed and has a nice plot. The author seems to have a set direction for the story, which gives the writing a sense of purpose (something not seen often on these webnovel books). I noticed a few mysteries already popping up that are itching for an answer. No big cons with this book. It's another great system read that could find a solid fan base on webnovel. I see a bright future for this book and the author. (4.8 whish it could be adjusted a bit higher) On a side-note : Idk how you will do it, but a story needs something that stands out in the beginning. Whether its a unique MC(blind, deaf, ect.), setting (growing up in a dumpster), or a mystery. You have some of these, but the truly great stories put their own twist. Just my little opinion, nothing more :)
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DaisukiDayoSenpai
A borrowing system where MC borrows, you know, and rises up from adversities. It truly is a great premise and the storyline was rather awesome as well. I also stand by on your ideals as well— that the first chapters of the book should build around the character first before anything else. Keep it up, author. This book shows great promise. I'm adding this to my library. ^-^ Cheers!
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A_loner0110
Quite awesome. I like how the setting and plot are totally in line with each other. No negative friction whatsoever. I hope I'll be reading more of this lovely story in the future
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restful_sins
this is a spectacular book and it gave me a look into what my book was missing. i want to thank the author for giving me the inspiration to pick up my pen and write harder to improve and show that maybe make it to the top
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ReginaldDabs
Cool novel! Some people may complain about it being a slow burn, but I really appreciate stories that give you time to get to know the characters before throwing them into the action. I like characters the try to fully understand the weird things that happen to them instead of just accepting it and moving on, and this does that really well!
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SKRZ
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SKRZ

Awesome. Just great. I really enjoyed reading the chapters I've read so far. The writing style is fantastic. The plotline is great. Dialogue between characters was fun and engaging. Very easy to read and follow. I haven't really read many sci-fi novels, so this is very refreshing for me and has definitely exceeded my expectations. It kept me interested all the while. I seriously enjoyed reading it, and am I'm looking forward to reading more. Great job! 👍
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Jake_Aroling
A very interesting story that builds well, has good dialogue, and nice character design. Unlimited Borrowing System is a very creative idea and makes for a great read!
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Mr_Empty
Very detailed character and world development, Great narration and good plotline. I really look forward to the upcoming chapters. good luck to both the author and the book.
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zushe_sensei
The detailing about characters, background and of course the genesis 😂 is amazing it really makes you to read more unlike other system novels it doesn't follows the clichés and interesting quests keep popping. good job author
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Easy_Tiger
This is an extremely high quality story with great set up, interesting world and an intriguing system that I very much look forward to seeing utilized in later installments. The book opens right in the thick of the action as the protagonist is beaten up by a group gangsters and told he owes them 50k to pay back his dead father's debt. This works well to throw the protagonist into adversity right from the start as he struggles to come up with a realistic way of obtaining the money. From there, a chance discovery leads to him entering an original system world where he can exchange an item of his own possession for something he can borrow for a limited time. It's an interesting set up and I look forward to seeing how he plans on using this ability to work back his father's debt. All the right elements are in place to make this a fantastic read. I look forward to reading more.
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Crystillia
Awesome. I like how you portray the main charachter, and the mystery of the Bossman. The name itself presents an intresting idea, and I am definitely wondering where this can go. Potential is high.
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BigMarch
The book is very well written. I love the plot, it is very interesting and it makes people want to binge-read it at one go. continue to work hard author.
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Acylith
Interesting! I was never exposed to novels with the concept of ‘system’ so this was a great introduction. This story has potential and I’m intrigued to find out what happens next. Good job, author!
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silent_walker
A high paced system novel... The writings are easy... not much vanity there. Readers can hook in immediate with the clear writings. The character tones is better than I expected. I only read about 3 chapters so can't tell about the story development. But the system looks promising. Now the problems I see in the readings... - you missed a lot of punctuations. t there's apparently no comma or periods in the quotations. fixed it as soon as possible. -the story missed a bit of the depth in the beginning. readers would judge the story reading the very first chapter if they will continue or not. pay attentions to that. -descriptions. work on that. - pay attention to the little details... overall the book looks promising with a unique system... good luck
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DonDenis
wow brilliant story so far, with some interesting characters in the few chapters read so far, plot is brilliantly complex and interesting at the same time. Hope your story does well author.
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QueenRani6
Why? Why? Why? Why am I addicted,?!! It's not fair, author that you have to make your book this great. Okay , not exaggerating though! The book is really nice and it has a fresh idea. Not a fan of sci-fi genre but I just got to read yours!
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Currer
Wow, this is amazing! I was really expecting a typical system genre book, but this blew me away. The author's writing is easy to read. Pacing is perfect and characterization is great. The end of each chapter leaves me wanting more. Would recommend to anyone (:
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Joymheks
This is an interesting read, and it got me hooked. You are very good with dialogues, and I like how the story progressed. I'd like to read more of this, and I hope you update soon.
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sami_sami_9684
Wang wei character is really interesting and amazing. Love the story and the twists. Author your writing skills are really amazing.....Best of luck.
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meixiaolian
An intriguing system genre and the prologue is intriguing too, I read no errors from the author's writing. I can sense that the author really did a great job by polishing the chapters. Readers would be hooked just by reading the prologue. Give this a read!
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26stars
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26stars

Very interesting storyline! I enjoy how this story developed. The conversations are also interesting and refreshing. But maybe you can use some punctuation marks like period and coma at the end of the conversations before the quotations marks [img=recommend]
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