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xiaohai_23
Who is that girl? I can't wait to find out. Here another thriller (I guess? btw it's thrilling to the core) from the dear author. Doctor Ryley, the mc, is human and at the beginning of his career, it's fun to see him stumble upon a difficult case so soon. His luck is what it is... There are few chapters so far, enough just to introduce the leads and a couple more characters. Everyone has a personality, a story and something particular. Everything seems suspicious, so much that I can't wait to find out what will happen and why is the girl in that condition :D
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Purplebride
Author Hestia is back again with another thriller. I read Ignoto from start to finish and just three chapters in, I'm getting goosebumps from the book. Doctor Riley is a medical doctor who gets wrapped up in a mysterious case when he gets assigned to treat a patient no one knew about. I will be following to see how he solves the mystery and also be able to save himself when all gets tricky and sticky
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Monsoon_Mangoes
Wow!!!! this story is like a hidden gem. I have read the first few chapters and it totally got me hooked. The writing quality and plot appears too good. The emotions portrayed by the characters are right on point. thriller-mystery genre enthusiasts, you have came to the right place 🥳🥳🥳 Kudos to the author and waiting for more chapters ❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️
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qunin_e

Wooowww! My love for mysteries is totally filled here! Anyone who love reading such geners! Don't, I repeat don't miss this book! Amazing plot nicely written! keeping gng author!
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ArnolDadi
Just randomly selected this one. Though don't like the doctor genre as they either develop into MC going from a professional doctor to a full blown pharmacist of ancients or the gore during the operation scene,. Though for those who like it. It would be a good read. It has that 'My House Of Horrors' factor. So it's readers can try.
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Carciphones_02
There are many mystery in this books. Two side of people too as there is Riley and, Maxwell and Be..(don't remember her name). I read until chapter 5. there seems to be a connected dote, and I don't know what will happen in the future and I can't say more because it's a mystery so, I don't know what to say.
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MicahDarkFantasy
This is one of those horror/thriller stories on Webnovel that is actually done right. The storytelling in this book reminds me of classic horror movies with all kinds of twists and surprises. For a horror story, it's filled with interesting characters, a sympathetic protagonist, excellent worldbuilding, and an atmospheric tone that most horror stories in the future should use. Overall, it's a great book to read and I highly recommend horror fans to read it!
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Epyonnn
Interesting read so far. There were quite a bit of punctuation mistakes, but it didn't disrupt the flow of the sentences too much. Although the premise itself feels a little basic, that's not necessarily a bad thing since the story itself presents a neat mystery that definitely has potential in the future. I feel that this story could use the most improvement when it comes to the characters since they all speak with the same voice. Of course, I'm not suggesting the cliche "doctor doesn't use contractions" and "child uses small words," but I think that if you can make your characters pop out of the page, it could really help to elevate your already-good plot. Overall, I had a good time reading it!
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Yoan_Roturier
Surprisingly, it was interesting. Didn't expect that. It flows really well. Dialogs are good and sketch out the characters' personalities. There are a few technical and grammar issues but it doesn't hinder the reading. I like the vibes from this book. Good work.
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meixiaolian
As a horror and thriller writer, I must say that the author did a good job. The great narration of writing it hooked readers who are into this type of genre. I like how it is similar to mine to uncover the truth. The build-up of tension on chapters is great. And what I like about this is it involves nurses and doctors. SOOOOOO goood! Give this a read!
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daygon_yuuki
Looks really intense and I can't really wait to know more about the story as a whole. Who's the girl and what's the deal with her, I'm really interested now
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MokouFriedChicken
Well, that was pretty exciting. I've written in this genre myself, and I have a lot to learn from your work. From the way you build the world, to the way you weave the tension and mystery, it's really top-notch. Dialogue flows well too, with minimal grammar mistakes. Then again, that's really nitpicking. Keep on writing
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Winter_Iris
Incredible story line. I can't wait to see where this will lead to. The characters are intriguing and the plotline has a lot of potential. Can't wait to see what you will do with it, author!
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Elle_Lynn
Love this story! the suspence and the whole World bulding! I am very interested in thriller and I love psychology so I mix of both of them is definitely my gem! Will keep reading this story For sure🙏
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IkuSaari
I started reading this book without a clue about how captivating it would quickly become. This is, by far, my favorite take on the "mysterious patient" trope!
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AnonnaRahman13
very nice plot.Cant wait for more chapters[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
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BerriApplepi
The synopsis is enough to capture my interest. I'm a sucker for books like this and I can't wait to read more! It's very intriguing and mysterious. Good job dear Author! 🥰💖
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Hey, your cover is cool! There are only five chapters so far, so I can't guess how this story will be developing. But I already feel the mystery right from the start. The author did a good job of describing and creating the mysterious setting. The story is very interesting and intriguing! I'm gonna looking forward to more chapters! [img=recommend]
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Jo_J
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Jo_J

A catchy and original cover page! A short but meaningful synopsis that is a great advertisement for your story and encourages further reading. I wonder who she is and what happened to her... The plot is interesting! Well done!
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Henrietta_Otu
This novel is so interesting and attention gripping. I really love the narration and vivid description of scenes and events. Even the characters are awesomely created. Love this. Thumps up author.
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Syed_Taha_Hussain
Wow mate your writing skills are awsome! The descriptions and dialogues are perfect and paints a pichture in readers mind. Good jobe mate. this story has a great potential
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Mel_Aniv
The story was nice and the plot is steadily building up. Though, I noticed that there has to be slight edits that has to be made. Still, an awesome read! I can see its potential in the near future. Kudos!
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Nr_Yet1208
This is a pretty good story. It started up pretty good and I liked the pacing. The writing quality was better than most and grammar wasn't an issue. However, things could be better with some proofreading. The start of the second chapter was a little confusing but I guess that could very well be the author's choice. Overall I'd say this is a good story
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Envision
I love a mystery, who or what this girl is appears to be promising. I hope you continue to develop the story while weaving the mystery deeper and deeper into your story.
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ZOA
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ZOA

There are so mysteries in the book. Though the synopsis isn't catchy still the book and story plot is quite good. Good job author. Keep on updating regularly [img=update][img=update][img=recommend][img=recommend]
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mrant12
Great book! Well done author. I will keep in library and read all the updates. Please update soon and dont make me wait too long. Hehehehe. I had a great time reading this. If you're thinking of reading it, go ahead. You will not regret it at all.
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Cornflower
Love the the story flow so far, Author did great work at describing the character's feelings, Writing quality and character design is good, Can't wait to read more.
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Nancy_Jim
Well in my opinion this book is good and the plot is pretty refreshing and original. I like the thriller vibes and I am hoping to see how Riley adapts to his wild patient. Haha. Great job, author [img=recommend][img=recommend]
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AinaWang
5/5 =^∇^*= There's this mysterious feeling in the synopsis! (^・o・^)ノ” The storytelling technique of the author is great. Although there are a few punctuation and capitalization errors, it doesn't bother the thrill of the scenes and can be checked+edited through proofreading! v(=∩_∩=) I remembered that I love the author's work IGNOTO, so I'm sure this book will also turn out good as chapters get uploaded and the characters' mysteries get unveiled! o(^・x・^)w Please continue writing and great job! ┌(=^‥^=)┘
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Golda
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Golda

Wow! A must read. The ML seems like a chill dude. In his internship he meets a girl who is mysterious. Another person might have the same experience as the FL (my guess... Maybe they were probed and experimented on by aliens 😅) Even with the little chapters, the author had gripped the readers with a lot of suspense. The language and the world development is great. Can't wait to see how the story develops. Good luck author. ❤️
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