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Write a reviewSo if you've read my Elementalist In A Dungeon, which is my previous story, then you know what to expect...but this time we start with actually good writing quality XD ---The story is probably gonna be longer than I expect. ---I try my best to keep everyone in character. ---Minimal OCs. ---No Harem. ---No character bashing(Unless it's in character within the story). I know MHA stories have a tendency to do this so just saying this now. ---MC will be causing canon to change so be prepared for that. ---Aside from his Quirk nothing else from the One Piece power systems is in this story. No 6 marine powers or Haki. This is a MHA story and I'm keeping it as such. ---I read and like almost every comment and reply to all that require a response, feel free to engage with me. And worry not I keep things polite :)
Well fleshed-out world, great grammar, a unique story not afraid to diverge from canon, updating stability is not the best though it has improved. MC is as realistic as a MC with a superiority complex can get, Mc is not a hypocrite. Author is working really hard to make a great story. All-in-all a great read. Take notes from this guy if you also want to write.
I read up to chapter 76 and I can say that this work is not for everyone, I found it interesting and ignored his god complex, he is very strong and certain parts of his personality I even like, one example is that improving is simply something natural for him, and whoever doesn't really seek to improve he despises, but still in the end I can no longer ignore his god complex, it's simply frustrating for me to continue reading, I like the work and I really wanted to continue, I'm sad ðŸ˜¢, I thought that I could ignore but not I got it in the end.
I love this story and how author shapes the lore to his ideal form but i just detest this long periods of hiatus , besides that great fanfic
It was great novel, sad to see it get dropped. After months of wating its time to remove it from library, cant keep hoping for something that's never gonna happen.
honestamente, me arrepenti de la Ãºltima reseÃ±a, estÃ¡ historia hasta el momento (150+) es una de las pocas que realmente me tienen entretenido, no es el tÃpico caso de un tipo transmigrado, estÃ¡ historia es Top
As a reader I want to say that this is a story with good writing and decent world building that makes me want to read more. The main character doesn't like anyone, hates everyone, and behaves like a 12 year old going through puberty. Although I am aware that this is a strategy by the author. I am baffled by how many people defend such edgy behavior. Anyway, those aspects aside. It is a good read though not for everyone. Keep up the good spirits, author. [img=recommend]
Honestly, I started this not expecting anything, just anoth mha fanfic to lose time in summer, but I found it very well written that I gave it a chance, and it was the best thing I did. Everything is planned, you find clues in chapter 17 about the arc in chapter 305.
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Love the story, as far as I know, it's interesting and promising. Only problems: 1. there's no proofreading; some words are missing and some grammatical errors are present. 2. there are some nerfs, especially against the first nomu but they are overall bearable
what can i say that hasnt been said before about this novel? itâ€™s awesome, just check it out
Honestly, when I first started reading this I didn't like it much. The mc has a huge ego when not that op and some parts seemed really forced, but eventually, I found it to be quite readable. I like how it has mild flirting/teasing with the girls, but it doesn't focus on it plus some humor. I'm interested to see if he ever likes someone romantically, what happens with his parents, and who he'll be in the end (I hope if he does change it's not because of Nezu).
Reveal SpoilerWas great but donâ€™t know why the author put invincible as he kept nerfing the Mc for no reason. Was a shame tbh
realy good book though just fore new readers just to alert them twop things 1. his power is a quirk version of the op-op-no-mi not n exact copy/port of the devil fruit though it is pretty much identical there were some modifications made to add a bite of extra conflict though pretty much 90% of the conflict is not connected to those changes so when they do come up accept the authors explanation and move on and 2. is a bit of a spoiler so anything further is a spoiler so read only if your fine with getting spoiled ________________________________________________________________ after the mc fights all fore one he gets a sorry driven as in it an important part of the story partial nerf nothing ground-breaking but its there and people complained it does not go away until the gigantomachy after that the nerf is gone and he pretty much immediately becomes even stronger then he already was
I was warned multiple times about the god complex and still thought I could just ignore it, boy was I wrong.
Does horizon know that is parent are dead for a long time and if soo in what chapter what it revealed
A estÃ³ria Ã© muito boa e segue um ritmo cadenciado, mas Ã© doloroso quando o mc fala, que personagem merda, ele ser alguÃ©m ruim que melhora com o tempo seria louvÃ¡vel se isso acontecesse, mas o cara Ã© uma crianÃ§a birrenta que simplesmente nÃ£o revisa os prÃ³prios passos, alguÃ©m que nÃ£o reflete sobre si nÃ£o Ã© inteligente, Ã© sÃ³ prepotente mesmo.
I donâ€™t get what the whole hype is about. The mc is pretty unlikeable and a stupid egois who sleeps with the fantasy of revenge every night while what the heroes did was valid. And donâ€™t get me started with his parents they feed into his ego and make it a god complex. Overall not my cup of tea.
The best fanfic I've read about MHA ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾
Reveal SpoilerBest fanfic on the app hands down. This book is what got me to start reading fanfics started reading this novel from chapter 10 been reading for a year and will continue reading for as long as the author makes chapters. Iâ€™m pretty sure Iâ€™ve made a review before a few months back
It's a really great fanfic, with a unique mc that makes the BNHA world, show it's hidden beauty.
these fanfic could be considered the best mha fanfic out there it took me a while but i love the mc's god complex and the author writing is great everything is so natural and these fanfic could have been a stand alone novel
It's an ok junk food type novel but the character is a pretty trashy power fantasy type with a pretty unlikeable personality that seems to only get worse over time.
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Biased review from someone who read author's previous works. I especially recommend this author's works because he writes really interesting and compelling characters (not just the MC either).
So if you've read my Elementalist In A Dungeon, which is my previous story, then you know what to expect...but this time we start with actually good writing quality XD ---The story is probably gonna be longer than I expect. ---I try my best to keep everyone in character. ---Minimal OCs. ---No Harem. ---No character bashing(Unless it's in character within the story). I know MHA stories have a tendency to do this so just saying this now. ---MC will be causing canon to change so be prepared for that. ---Aside from his Quirk nothing else from the One Piece power systems is in this story. No 6 marine powers or Haki. This is a MHA story and I'm keeping it as such. ---I read and like almost every comment and reply to all that require a response, feel free to engage with me. And worry not I keep things polite :)
Well fleshed-out world, great grammar, a unique story not afraid to diverge from canon, updating stability is not the best though it has improved. MC is as realistic as a MC with a superiority complex can get, Mc is not a hypocrite. Author is working really hard to make a great story. All-in-all a great read. Take notes from this guy if you also want to write.
I read up to chapter 76 and I can say that this work is not for everyone, I found it interesting and ignored his god complex, he is very strong and certain parts of his personality I even like, one example is that improving is simply something natural for him, and whoever doesn't really seek to improve he despises, but still in the end I can no longer ignore his god complex, it's simply frustrating for me to continue reading, I like the work and I really wanted to continue, I'm sad ðŸ˜¢, I thought that I could ignore but not I got it in the end.
I love this story and how author shapes the lore to his ideal form but i just detest this long periods of hiatus , besides that great fanfic
It was great novel, sad to see it get dropped. After months of wating its time to remove it from library, cant keep hoping for something that's never gonna happen.
honestamente, me arrepenti de la Ãºltima reseÃ±a, estÃ¡ historia hasta el momento (150+) es una de las pocas que realmente me tienen entretenido, no es el tÃpico caso de un tipo transmigrado, estÃ¡ historia es Top
As a reader I want to say that this is a story with good writing and decent world building that makes me want to read more. The main character doesn't like anyone, hates everyone, and behaves like a 12 year old going through puberty. Although I am aware that this is a strategy by the author. I am baffled by how many people defend such edgy behavior. Anyway, those aspects aside. It is a good read though not for everyone. Keep up the good spirits, author. [img=recommend]
Honestly, I started this not expecting anything, just anoth mha fanfic to lose time in summer, but I found it very well written that I gave it a chance, and it was the best thing I did. Everything is planned, you find clues in chapter 17 about the arc in chapter 305.
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Love the story, as far as I know, it's interesting and promising. Only problems: 1. there's no proofreading; some words are missing and some grammatical errors are present. 2. there are some nerfs, especially against the first nomu but they are overall bearable
what can i say that hasnt been said before about this novel? itâ€™s awesome, just check it out
Honestly, when I first started reading this I didn't like it much. The mc has a huge ego when not that op and some parts seemed really forced, but eventually, I found it to be quite readable. I like how it has mild flirting/teasing with the girls, but it doesn't focus on it plus some humor. I'm interested to see if he ever likes someone romantically, what happens with his parents, and who he'll be in the end (I hope if he does change it's not because of Nezu).
Reveal SpoilerWas great but donâ€™t know why the author put invincible as he kept nerfing the Mc for no reason. Was a shame tbh
realy good book though just fore new readers just to alert them twop things 1. his power is a quirk version of the op-op-no-mi not n exact copy/port of the devil fruit though it is pretty much identical there were some modifications made to add a bite of extra conflict though pretty much 90% of the conflict is not connected to those changes so when they do come up accept the authors explanation and move on and 2. is a bit of a spoiler so anything further is a spoiler so read only if your fine with getting spoiled ________________________________________________________________ after the mc fights all fore one he gets a sorry driven as in it an important part of the story partial nerf nothing ground-breaking but its there and people complained it does not go away until the gigantomachy after that the nerf is gone and he pretty much immediately becomes even stronger then he already was
I was warned multiple times about the god complex and still thought I could just ignore it, boy was I wrong.
Does horizon know that is parent are dead for a long time and if soo in what chapter what it revealed
A estÃ³ria Ã© muito boa e segue um ritmo cadenciado, mas Ã© doloroso quando o mc fala, que personagem merda, ele ser alguÃ©m ruim que melhora com o tempo seria louvÃ¡vel se isso acontecesse, mas o cara Ã© uma crianÃ§a birrenta que simplesmente nÃ£o revisa os prÃ³prios passos, alguÃ©m que nÃ£o reflete sobre si nÃ£o Ã© inteligente, Ã© sÃ³ prepotente mesmo.
I donâ€™t get what the whole hype is about. The mc is pretty unlikeable and a stupid egois who sleeps with the fantasy of revenge every night while what the heroes did was valid. And donâ€™t get me started with his parents they feed into his ego and make it a god complex. Overall not my cup of tea.
The best fanfic I've read about MHA ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾ ï¾
Reveal SpoilerBest fanfic on the app hands down. This book is what got me to start reading fanfics started reading this novel from chapter 10 been reading for a year and will continue reading for as long as the author makes chapters. Iâ€™m pretty sure Iâ€™ve made a review before a few months back
It's a really great fanfic, with a unique mc that makes the BNHA world, show it's hidden beauty.
these fanfic could be considered the best mha fanfic out there it took me a while but i love the mc's god complex and the author writing is great everything is so natural and these fanfic could have been a stand alone novel
It's an ok junk food type novel but the character is a pretty trashy power fantasy type with a pretty unlikeable personality that seems to only get worse over time.
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Biased review from someone who read author's previous works. I especially recommend this author's works because he writes really interesting and compelling characters (not just the MC either).