After finishing the first volume of the story, I can finally give my work an honest rating.
1. As you can read from other reviews, the start of the novel is one of the best things I've ever written. But the pace afterwards is a bit sloppy.
2. I was too focused on developing the future plotlines of the story, I forgot to pace it properly, which I took care of immediately after realising my mistake.
3. I can say with surety that things improve later on (as you will see). I just request you to have patience while reading the first volume of the story.
4. the Second volume is where the story picks up and I promise to make it one of my best works ever.
Thanks for reading!
This book is quite good from what I can tell and I think that in the future itβll be one of the most popular books
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Started out good but it feels like the plot became more and more sloppy.
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first time writing review
the story and atmosphere is over all good
but I don't like mc
coz?
that simple he isn't a human hero type person he have what it take to be hero but don't have hearts of a hero to sacrifice everything for the greater good. character development is going on but that all I can say for now.
The synopsis attracted me
The story enchante me
Amazing
Placed this in my library and waiting for further updates
Keep up the good work, youve got something herr author
I love this novel, The concept is very good. ..10/10 for plot and storyline It has very good character design and update stability ...Very well written,The writter doing very good job. [img=update]
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this is an amazing book read you won't regret it the mc is someone who would do anything for the people he cares about and while he may make mistakes he trys to learn from it all
Haven't read it yet but many peeps reviewed it 5 stars. Ever since getting
interested in supernatural creatures and the Witcher, I've been looking for monster hunter stories and finally found one! I'm expecting great things from this!
Such an interesting story. The beginning is good but I feel more interesting parts will be coming soon.
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well I promised after 10 chapters I would give a true review so here it is. This is so far a great story the MC is well made and relatible so far and I doubt he will be op anytime soon. His power and skills sound reasonable. The first boss sounds like something I would love to fight myself and hints at the idea of hidden blood lines/abilities. so I can't wait to see what happens next keep up the good work.
After a long time a story managed to grab my attention.. Seems well thought out story. I can put it in words how well this story grabs attention from its readers. A rare gem, Totally worth reading this story
If you're reading this review, then I guess you stumbled upon this novel by chance. Let me tell you one thing, fellow daoists: you will definitely regret not reading this novel! Even if you are not used to reading this particular genre, you'll still be immersed in the story because of the author's impeccable writing style.
An interesting plot furthered by good writing. Although system fantasy stories have become an increasingly common staple, hopefully the author will be able to distance this story from others.
I can so well relate with this book only because this is the case of my country right now with different case of kidnap. This might be a novel even so, it is also a caricature of life. Thank you author for writing this great piece. I will sure read until the end of it.
I've read all of the novels author-san and I must say, this story is by far the best one I've read. I'm completely absorbed by the story, great going. I hope you'll win the WSA or at least be somewhat successful at it. Thanks for such a great story.
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Your story is like a magnet. Each chapter makes the readers want for more. I don't want to spoil the fun of others but you're seriously missing out if you're not reading this excellent masterpiece.
I really love the story even though its only four chapter i cant wait for more i really bad at reviews so i never know what to write but this story definitely deserves a five star review I if you see this book i definitely recommend you read it. Anyways thanks for the chapters Author-sama.
I don't know how the author does it, but with every passing chapter the story gets better and better. I know a bit more about the story than the crowd here as I'm a beta reader. Still I can't wait for y'all to see what happens in the future.
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