Splendid synopsis, Captivating first chap, Narrations and character interactions were solid. The names of the characters are foreign-sounding for me but it was cute....haha.... Meeting such names for the first time. I think it was arabic or something similar to it? I don't know π€ Still, awesome job! I hope you rest well too when you write....Kudos and good luck!
It is an interesting book I really love π it, how you write the story , the characters and the back ground is well sit, well authorπππππππππππππππππ
OH MY GOSH! OMG! I must say this book is splendid. I just managed to stumble upon it on my weekly featured and I got completely intrigued by the name and cover. The book is absolutely splendid! π₯³π₯³ Love the book and Kudos to the author
I love the way fl is characteristic scarecistic. I firmly believe scarecistic people are logical. "my oh so lovable parents" just imagining that makes me laugh and declare the person as my best buddy
Fantasy Romance is just my cup of tea, And your novel is just splendid. I read only the first few chapters and it was really addictive.
Your description was great
Character design was good too and the way you write makes the novel more captivating.
Thou It would be better to update frequently if possible~
Anyway Best of Luck Author!!!
hey I really like the writing and the character development of the story.
It would be great if you have more chapters for as to read. Keep up the good work.
Amazing work author ! Really loved your plot line and story. This novel piqued my interest right away from first chapter. I would recommend this book to everyone.
KEEP UP THE WORK. !!
Hi, welcome to my page/book/story. Author here, I just felt like writing what prompt me to write this story. So I came across an article about demons and suddenly my colorful brain came up with a story. (I had this like a second voice in my head and always immersed in my own little world. I hope you enjoy *wink* *wink*)
Intriguing Story, I must say awesome start from the synopsis. It is a very captivating story. I loved the feel of the background. Perfect backdrop, good character building, good English. It should get read by all. β€β€β€ππππ₯°π₯°π₯°. Very captivating.
An interesting story! The plot is intriguing, your characters are expressive. You also describe the world background. You don't struggle with the language. You are doing great!
Good luck with the contest!
Wow! It's a good book with a beautiful writing style and a well-described synopsis. The story gives you an urge to continue more and more. Good job, author! Hope to see more of the good work!
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