Not bad wish this book would update more 🥰🥲
Your story has a lot of potential more than those trash, boring chinese ones.
🙇♂️ hope your story gains some more attention.
Pretty interesting story with a cool concept. There are some moments, that i didn't liked in writing, for example using too much ",,,". But overall it's a great story, which I'm gladly to read and watch it progress.
VanillaWater