Good work
.................................................................................................................................................................
Loyalty Sonnet
From everything to my love I will be attentive
Before, and with such zeal, and always, and so much
That even in the face of the greatest charm
Of him my thoughts become more enchanted.
I want to live it in every moment
And in your praise I will spread my song
And laugh my laugh and shed my tears
Your grief or your contentment
And so, when you come to me later
Who knows the death, anguish of those who live
Who knows loneliness, end of those who love
I can tell myself about the love (that I had):
That it is not immortal, since it is flame
But let it be infinite while it lasts.
So far I liked it. I just hope she doesn't cry too much and get over her ex soon. I was a little surprised that she had se% with another man so quickly, but considering she's Brazilian, you could say that's not surprising.
Well, in summary, I liked it, waiting for new chapters~
MorfPPQ