Love the characters personalities.
Love the novels title, that alone made me want to read more. GREAT CHOICE
Nice narration
No grammatical errors that I noticed and nice writing style
A good novel with an interesting plot! I haven't read much but from what I have read through, this story would bloom soon enough. The flow of the story is smooth and it had no grammar errors. Keep up the good work, author!
Really promising start and the family has a nice chemistry you would expect from one. The world is looking unique and one would crave to understand about it more. Keep it up, author! Nice work.
A highly recommended novel from me! The author has shown his skills in vocabulary and the plot is really interesting.
You are doing a great job. Keep it up!
The story is fun to read! It really gets me to read more and more and more of it~ I did not see any grammnatical errors for this story. Kudos for the author, and I hope your story blooms!
I'm flabbergasted ! Honestly I wasn't ready for such rich vocabulary. I love the fantasy twist right at the beginning, the plot is complex and well entangled.
It's a nice surprise for me ! I didn't see time passing by while reading it all, that's a ten out of ten.
Fantastic flow, and easy to understand. The world building so far is good, and I'm excited to see how things develop. The author demonstrates a really great control of the English language, and keeps the story moving at a good pace. I can't find anything wrong so far.
The book is a thriller.
We are able to see life through the eye of the MC. The are a few typos that the author should work on. Other than that good work author!
Truly a good piece of art with imagination out of these world. well, some might this as an exaggeration but I highly recommend this novel to everyone. Whew, Such Great job. I hope I can get atleast 1% of the author of this book's way of thinking.
Good Job!! Such Creativity 😍
I loved the story so far, the characters were refined, the thoughts of the mc were deep and intriguing there were grammatical errors but the story was enough to cover those
good work author
Didn't see any errors from it. Well-descriptive narration. The title and the prologue is hooking enough for the readers to read the book. give this a read, everyone!
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