Hey, Reaper here, its one of my starting novel, so there may be some mistakes here and there, pls comment for it, and enjoy the book. Your reviews are most welcome
This MC is stupid as a donkey, it's chapter 135 now an still this mc has brain problem stupid as donkey his brain need development,. VeryΒ² stupid from chapter 1 he talk about beauty beauty still from chapter 1- to 135 he only sleep with 1 women an he have 5 women he like an 2 of them wer seeing another man lolππππ he need a brain chack just because your handsome doesn't mean all girls like you.
This Mc is dumb as f#a##k an soo many stupid Questions ask to system xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx
I stoped at ch.9, I just couldnβt stand the banter between the system and him and the way the character keeps repeating how awesome he is. Good luck on the book Arthur, just not my cup of tea.
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so far have only read the discription but I can feel this is gonna be good since from what I can tell there's gonna be a lot of "reject humanity return to monke" memes And this books gonna be a giant bucket of laughs (will update review when I read the book right now I'm reading some other books so this is going in my "read later" folder)
i like the story, its pace is nice, character feels a bit iffy sometimes but its a very good read. The background plot progression always leaves room for a bit more mystrey and its quite funny and fun to read too
Chapters are VEry short. messy plots and issues. Also i just gotta point out, super rich guy who is bedding several hot ladies still not happy with his life and wants more woman so he can be more awesome??? Like WTH??
Dropped chapter 2
First chapter give impression mc is intelligent due to being a consultant and multimillionaire that quickly changes into him being given millions due to death of parents
And dialogue is terrible
i like the story a lot at the beginning but started to hate the mc,even though this story has great potential and i actually like the story,i am dropping this because of mc,i hope the best for the author and i relly think this is a great story but i didn't like it,but i recommed others to read it
author, your story is very addictive!! I'm sorry I read it so fast...keep up your great work!
The story gets a lot better after the first evolution of the mc, and man, I can't wait to see the harem progress. ( Ν‘Β° ΝΚ Ν‘Β°)
I apologize if I wrote something wrong, I use google translate
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a Playboy returns to monkey after death and strives to be awesome but turns into God,
in other words return to monkey to become God. sounds good to me man
the concept is very good but the mc is like sanji but very stupid, the mc literally just thinks about "beauties" and it got old after 4 chapters. other than that the chapter length is short which isn't bad.
A fun-filled novel. The MC's interaction with the system really amused me. Ant killing part, the gorilla chasing part, and all of those comedic parts are awesome. Keep up with your good work, author.
I have read few chapters so far, and it has been a fun ride. The constant confrontation between the Host and its system is fun to watch. The idea itself is pretty interesting. It is a great story, and I will continue to read it.
Comedy/power fantasy that feels like a parody with abridged series vibes. Most of the pros are dialogue which leads to a quick read with few descriptions. A few times, the lack of dialogue tags + a character speaking twice in a row made me lose track of who was talking. But the characters have unique voices, so it never takes long to get back on track.
The story is a standard video game-inspired power-based world. In parallel, the world background and enemy design follow this theme.
Fun comedy power fantasy that can give you a laugh if that's your thing. :)
I love the way you narrate the story. It's a comedy with some actions scene. I laughed as hellππ€£. Keep in mind to the readers who want to read this. Don't hesitate, that's all.
This story is executed so well! I cannot believe English isn't you first language because this is really well written! I love the idea of the book and it's funny to read what happens to the MC. He deserves it in my opinion, he did click yes after all. π β‘
It's very satisfying that the main character is self-centered and it doesn't handle it badly. A novel that you can enjoy while reading. I suggest you pay attention as it can create more than a smile on your face in some places. :)
It is a very enjoyable read. The system is nice and the mc is quite hilarious. They perfectly blend well together. I enjoy how his task for evolution was executed smoothly in every scene. Nothing feels force and the story were flowing with great fluidity.
Overall, this book is a great read with lots of things to look forward to.
Keep it up, author!
I like how the MC starts off self-centered! It provides a great setup for the story and allows the reader to imagine how he might change and evolve. This story has a lot of potential, I can't wait to see what the author does next.
an interesting novel with very authentic characters. the use of profanity is nice giving a more down to earth reaction which is unique. all though the character doesn't feel like she has much to them
Good story line you have here... I enjoyed how the ML situation turns out to be and his interaction with the system is not like in other novels I read. Few grammar errors that can be fixed, and sometimes there a change in POV that can't be confusing but is something that can be easily rectified... All in all the book has potential, keep up with the good work
Interesting take on genre and really funny. Needs a bit of editing, but all and all a really good take on the genre. The interactions are interesting and the story is fun, what else do you need?
Truly a fun one! Hero being a playboy and reincarnated as a monkey was a great idea! Writing quality is definitely good. Looking forward for more fun! Keep them coming
This story is so funny! I have a love and hate relationship with the main character but I couldn't help but continue reader because of his hilarious antics! Good job Author-san!
REaper