I have many complaints, first: The mc is stupid, he listens to any favor and goes wherever his disciples ask him to. second: Many problems, First murderers, aliens, monsters, desolate beasts, genetic humans, genetic humans monsters, and many more. Third: He says that in the West people with money can kill anyone but he doesn't complain about how 36 families are locked up or how someone with money sends him murderers and more.
I dropped this after a few chapters. In the early chapters, seeing how the misunderstanding on elder Wang's end starts building up out of nowhere it's a but irksome, but it's bearable.
The annoying part was when he called his friend and somehow they were testing a drug that could make the person who takes it younger. Bear in mind that elder Wang NEVER took a drug from the mc. Nobody did. Yet that misunderstanding keeps building. First it's the idea of the "illusion drug" then the idea of the "drug that makes one get younger".
Misunderstandings are fine but at least try not to make them feel forced. I dropped it because if this starts happening so early in then I really don't want to know how it is later in the novel
Right, so it's not exactly a bad story, per se, but once the MC gets past the beginning, he doesn't really face any major challenges, so the story gets kinda boring at a certain point.
Modern day novels are basically impossible to understand. Like the moral cover of these characters are nonsensical. Iβll try to explain.
At one point the MC just straight up got a bunch of creatures to commit genocide on a bunch countries to spite one guy.
All Iβm saying is if youβre raised in the modern day by a good family with traditional values thereβs no way you would do this. Especially because moral actions impact cultivation.
This is because karma is an aspect of this novel. Committing misdeeds brings bad karma and punishment from the heavens. So the MC speaks of doing good deeds and not accruing bad karma unnecessarily but then goes and does this. Even if he can offset the karma to his clone I donβt buy it. His power up relies on teaching cultivation to as many people as possible. He just burned a fortune for no reason.
So the MC is just a hypocrite with a nonsensical moral code. The characters are flat and dumb. The world of the novel is also just boring.
Skip this one.
the lack of common sense is getting to me. too many stupid and vain old people. an attractive rich girl is forced to become a mistress? not only that, she has no friends to drink with? in order to teach old people to βcontrolβ their strength, he gives them the impossible task of chopping bamboo thatβs too hard for them to leave a mark on? HOW does that help. why doesnβt he show them how much damage they can do to normal items, so that they become more careful in real life? teaching people blacksmithing, he hammers iron ore intoβ¦ nothing? then tries to trick his students???
why is this author SO stupid.
I felt pain as I were reading this novel.
I only read up to chapter 10 and stop so I don't know anything be on it.
The mc is a total pushover, tells everyone that cultivation is true but doesn't provide any proof and wants everyone to believe in a complete stranger.
The plot felt forced, just when the mc finally got some people to believe in him, there's just this one guy who just so happen to know a drug that can grant youth and also have the side effects of making people see illusion, and thinks the mc is tricking the elderly on taking this drug.
i like the premise based on the blurb. I even like the idea of cultivation during modern times even if it's quite a common trope already. I like characters that become mentors like in Library of Heaven's Path, Almighty Coach, History's No. 1 Founder, even that HP fanfic entitled A Certain Rune Professor.
I also like the system since it's not as bratty as some of the others, I feel it's just right.
It's just that... I got tired of one character so quickly that even when I can still put up with the MC's denseness... I can no longer stand her.
I don't know how this story will proceed since I stopped too early to even know how things will progress but I know where my limit is. I like this type of story.
I just abhor her type of character.
it was good until chapter 100+ the author forgot that the mc have a clone that can cultivate and he doesn't need to cultivate himself π€¦π€¦ smh .. and the character development is so sudden I can't keep up.
The begginig of the story was good, but the story quality is getting worst, too much nacionalism.ππππππππ’.it is a pity, the story had potential.
you are better off reading invisible dragon smh................................................................................................................
Do not read this trash novel. MC is a big pushover who allows others to step all over him and his loved ones until βthey go too farβ and only then will he go psycho and kill their whole family. His sister has been in danger from all these annoying βyoung mastersβ numerous times but doesnβt teach her to cultivate, not to hide his identity or anything but because βmaybe laterβ and what happens. People try to kill her or kidnap her so many times AHHHHHH SO ANNOYING
I've just read the first 40 chapters and I can only say that I'm really conflicted about this novel. On one side I'm happy to see that the novel contains a lot of things that I like but on the other side I'm very disappointed that it also has things that I absolutely hate. The biggest plus is the setting, a guy who transmigrates to a world that is just about to go into a cultivation era and the mc gets a system with the goal to teach cultivation to as many people as possible. It's an interesting setting because the goal is not to be secretive, and that would open up the possibility of seeing an mc brag to his normal friends and actually do what he brags about (eg Mc: I can fly. Friend: yeah right, do you think you're an immortal and get a sword and fly away? Mc takes out sword, levitate it in the air and jumps on it). I have never seen this before and it looks like it is possible in this novel. And there are some other things that I think have the possibility of getting interesting story lines (eg involving the elderly first, having a hot not blood related sister but no interest in a relationship, the system so far has not given out missions that would require a lot of plot armor to complete). But for all the good things there are also bad things. The 2 things that are very noticeable is the use of idiotic young masters who pull out the big guns for the slightest provocation (the 2 young masters that were seen so far both had no backstory or build up, you meet them and they discover the girl they like is involved with the mc and directly sends out people to get rid of him, and the stupid thing is both of them actually have an interesting background story where it would be easy to show some of the information without giving away the plot). And the second thing has to do with the novel title and how the author ruined the title because he wanted to make a running joke about the mc, a joke that is not funny. The title makes you think the mc tricks some elderly in cultivating immortal cultivation techniques but although the elderly are the first to agree the mc has not told the elderly any lie about cultivation. The mc is completely honest and open about what he wants to teach and nobody believes him (which is funny the first time you read it but the first time it is mentioned it is mentioned by the narrator and that he was sent to the asylum, and instead of changing tactics he keeps on using the same tactic. The second time it is no longer funny and the 5th time it becomes annoying). The elderly eventually agree because they pity the mc, and in a sense you could say he has tricked them with that but to me that is not a good enough reason. I understand the author wants to use this as a running joke but I probably would have liked it better if the mc actually tricked the elderly to do some 'Chinese Yoga' which is actually cultivation, looking at the starting exercise that was used that could have easily been adapted to fit that narrative. If he used the Chinese Yoga as an excuse he could have even had a natural way to move from elderly to younger people but that chance was lost because of a stupid repeating joke that becomes more and more annoying with each time you see it
Great novel, Good story telling and world building, MC is sometimes very stupid, but who is not stupid once in their life? ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Cool concept ruined by unimaginative writing that relies heavily on annoying tropes. I held out till chapter 25, I really tried to enjoy this book but it became harder and harder as I went on. From young masters to the βice cold beauty that hates all men except the mcβ. This book is another perfect example of how authors that write cultivation novels are all just beating a dead horse and canβt write an original novel to save their own lives.
Cultivation is non existent. Everyone wants to kill you on sight. The Detectiveβs intuition is so supernatural that the author doesnβt need evidence. The 2 girls are annoying.
Honestly dont try to do more than what you can handle author. Stick with the power fantasy sect building and it would have been better than what this is.
The story is nonsense and the first person seems to have no intellect and behaves like a child of many years. Do not waste your reading. The story is nonsense and the first person seems to have no intellect and behaves like a child of many years. Do not waste your reading.
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