Chapter comments on the chapter The rising of emperors of the book Emperor's descendant system

Hello. You dropped by and asked my opinion You are very creative and I liked the premise. There are balance between dialog and description and a nice narrative. It has great potential!!! My advice is to study ' dialog tags' and apply it to your dialogs instead of writing them as a screenplay. Many readers don't like it and it can prevent you from catching attention of WN editors. I wish you good luck and I hope it helps![img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]

Great!