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Styc
IMO great story, great characters, and good plot but it seems that the author has stopped updating this story and moved onto a different story ink if you are reading this do you ever plan to continue this story ?
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Rairyu_Kyuketsuki
Hello, first of all I want to say that I love your novel, then I wanted to tell you that I hope you will continue it unless it is already finished (there has been no recent update). Have a nice day!
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Juiceisagoat
Great novel
It is about the mc who is the weakest magician he has a system and he become the champion of the system
Warning
The girl literally begs him and seduces him to give her a child after their first meeting also the last chapter I read she gave him permission to date her friend that she considers her sister
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At_Tyagi
Honestly yaar high hopes but sometimes things like weakest magician in history, a name too grand (Eliott Vincent whatever -_- ) these unnecessary things throw me off DROPPED after 65 chapters.
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DaoisttG3KuY
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CatHam
I forgot most of what happened in this but i still love it anyways. I remember loving this when i first started reading here. It was definitely one of my first 5 novels and it seems really underrated.
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DaoistqsoWie
Why are such novels rated so highly? Although it is a very clichΓ© novel, people give high marks and such cliche novels keep coming out. Seriously sad.
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Dao_of_mischeif
Honestly I am in chapter 5e or something the novel is pretty good I gotta admit u could just try reading the first couple of chapters and u r just going to love it
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Annaiel
the story was good until the author starting writing romance. at one point he forces a girl to enter into a magical contract to marry him. she has to pay him 100,000 magic coins monthly to be his woman. pure disgust. I dropped story at this point. chapter 64.
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Silver72
Started of really good, but currently I hope that the mc's enemies will kill him, yeah I'm not kidding, I root for the bad guys when I read this.
The reason is simple the Mc is so annoyingly arrogant that I want him to die.
His arrogance is definitely not the good kind, where you can just pass it of as cringe, it's to the level that I hate the Mc.
It would be one thing if he had something to base his arrogance on, but all that he has is the system, the system and nothing but the system.
And his attempts to act all big and mature, make me cringe so hard that I want to vomit blood.
If you want to read a book that will make you wish for a Age of Adepts ending this is your book.
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Lamar_Palmer
ThiS novel is great in my opinion. I lOve romance in novels as i cant stand saudage fest but the only real flaw that i have is the characters desIgns arent descreptive enough
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SecondProgenitor
One of the best Storys I have read in a long time The story development is perfect but the reason it is 4.6 stars I'd because at the moment it is 2 chapters a week
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Lucigames
I have not read this book yet but i do have a question for.the author does this book take place in the same world as your other work "blood evolution system" i am just wondering as this seems like it is going to be just as good if not a better read than that one
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Abhi_th_Smasher
It's good ππ if you can tolerate the brainded mc, that isπ
. I mean he is living his worst life and still can't see the true face of others , and who knows where, this girl who is his childhood friend came , who hadn't contacted since his childhood called him with his nickname ,only after seeing his results and made that girl in love with him since then ,bcs he's faced bully for her in childhood and our mc is really happy , that she remembers himπππππ
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SomePeasant
I don't know what on earth they're putting into the water of the female characters or if they just never learned how to let off "some steam" on their own. Had a legit start but then apparently mating season arrived.
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Pommona
Interesting story, but love interest characters make me want to puke. People are not horses, asking stranger to make baby with her (she never talk to him prior to that curse scene, Iβm disturb) - just to βbreedβ better offsprings is such a disgusting idea. (Worse, her father approved with that idea)
What will happen to Mc (or children with high potential in general) if this idea become a norm? Would they kidnap them to βbreedβ with other high potential women (thatβs right, MANY women) just to get an army of high potential offsprings?
A disturb idea indeed, consider most teachers and students around them was just staring in shock and envy at them, but not tried to interrupt and even feel that Mcβs rejection were abnormalβ¦.
Lol, I think this novel have interesting plot, but female charactors destroy it all. Read at your own risk.
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Sphinx57
I am almost positive this novel was wrote with the idea of it being a romance novel with elements of power and comedy not a magic fantasy novel with elements of romance and comedy. This is why I think so many people were upset, because it wasn't what they thought they were getting. (chp 60)
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chef
I don't know why not many read this, cause I really like this story.
The pacing is a bit fast, with power levels increasing suddenly (the author said he might end this story early). The MC is a bit (more like completely) on the crazy side. From what I have read till now, the MC can very well have a harem, but he still loves only one girl.
The world building for me could have been a little better and the fights are great in my opinion.
P. S. my first time writing a review, hope it helps
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Giorgi_Kakaladze
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MOnkey_D_Luffy
Great novel, hope the author does not stop writing this and keeps updating the chapters daily. I wish more people will give their power stones to this novel.
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No_Name_3707
I'll read it sometime but for now it's fairly good. I will change it if I feel the need to.
The begging chapter starts of well too .Β―\_(γ)_/Β―
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DaoistDaniel
Well this novel as being great right from the beginning heroes are already separated from the villains, and the MC future potential is very easy to figure out, no matter how good I rate this novel if it will still bore you it will, but for people that like this kind of settings I know you will get to enjoy it...
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Skrtt
Why are u doing a prequel while doing the sequel . just wondering...........................................................................
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Vastoking
I would have given the author a five if the females where not power hungry thots, in the first few chapters some girl all of a sudden fell for mc cus he awakened a good ability. thats it i hate interactions like this, i wanna trash talk the author but i cant cus overall that is like the only problem in this novel.
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Oakrest
60 chapters in and this is a lot better than your other book, alas there are not enough chapters to last me the day.........................
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