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Allen_Hunat
πŸ€”πŸ€”πŸ€” The story is complicated.πŸ™„πŸ™„πŸ™„ hatred, pity, sad, happy, betrayal, manipulation, superpower and many other emotions. a lot of twists and hidden secrets.☺️☺️☺️
2yr
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Chloe_Smith_8046
The author has different styles. πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰ You'll crave for the story as you practice patience in knowing the secrets hidden 😜😜😜😜😜. One issue I found is sometimes it too long to read.😁 But there are lessons in the story.
2yr
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Miestne_Salazar
The plot of the story is unique! The characters are alive, it will really arouse your emotions. In fact, I hate Sassy so much.😑 She was very daring. I feel pity for Maia or Dianna,😒😭. Although there are some issues about typo and related cases but still understandable πŸ€ πŸ˜ƒ.
2yr
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Niko_Ruth
I like the detailed presentation of imagery, let say, the sky is thirty percent cloudy 😌☺️, very precise. The story is very unique in the sense that there are hidden irony,, humor, thrill and suspense. The thing that makes me continue to read is because the ending is unpredictable!
2yr
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Mc_Jienne_Gamba
Ti2. hahahahaha 🀣🀣🀣🀣 Go lang ng go. aja. Tiwala lang sa sarili. Never give up. πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚ Just be happy 😊😊😊😊 πŸ’ͺπŸ’ͺπŸ’ͺπŸ’ͺπŸ‘πŸ’ͺπŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘
2yr
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Sof_Ernity
The descriptions of characters and settings are detailed. I hope not too much because sometimes it makes the story dull. ✌️✌️ But the story is very interesting, a lot of hidden secrets and mysteries in it that as time goes on, gradually, it reveals to the readers. I'm still not sure if how the story will end, I swear! 😁
2yr
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Hamo_Hama
The story is unusual. imagery is good, it will make u really imaginative. It's just confusing for their are a lot of scenes but challenging to read.
2yr
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Tj_Lingan
Wow.β˜ΊοΈπŸ‘. Can't believe you can write something lyk dis.β˜ΊοΈπŸ‘. Nice start. ☺️ just pursue ur drims and never give up,,, The story is unique ☺️.I don't know if it's really true or simply product of ur imagination πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚ Wish u luck! 🀞🀞🀞🀞🀞🀞🀞🀞
2yr
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Mia_Almario
πŸ€”πŸ€”πŸ€”πŸ€”πŸ€” Ganun sa simula. minsan naman 🀣🀣🀣 inana Tapos, 😲🧐😲😲😲😲😳 Then sadness naman. πŸ˜ŸπŸ˜•πŸ™πŸ˜•πŸ˜•πŸ˜•πŸ˜• Then painful πŸ˜–πŸ˜–πŸ˜–πŸ˜–πŸ˜–πŸ˜£πŸ˜–πŸ˜£πŸ˜–πŸ˜£πŸ˜– But nice story., vry orig. πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘
2yr
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Yvette_Lagonoy
The novel is unique.😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊 Characters are mysterious πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰πŸ™‚πŸ™‚ The scenes are like stairs, escalating!!!! I hope that I can finish this 'til the end.
2yr
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Mara_Brown_7360
I was confused by the changes. But it's great! The pacing of the story becomes interesting. The story seems realistic. The problem, there's a lot of flash back. I want to read a story that always directed forward ✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️
2yr
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Ar_Mee
Hello friend.🐱 Good luck for this... Just enjoy what you're doing πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰πŸ€  This is a good start already. πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘ I hope you publish this in the near future. πŸ™πŸ’—πŸ˜˜
2yr
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Kim_Yuzon
Characters,... good... Flow of story... complicated, very complex. unpredictable...tackles problems in the society which make it original and realistic.
2yr
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Dianne_Silva
It's realistic πŸ˜›πŸ˜œπŸ˜œπŸ˜œπŸ˜œπŸ˜œ Lot of characters that made the flow of the story complex. It covers certain problems that tickle my mind. Interesting in my point of view.πŸ€”
2yr
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Fal_Ci
Congratulations,sir for your novel! Nice one. I love the flow of the story, although quite complicated. I love Chloe, she's great here!πŸ˜…. I hope she cN survive til the end.
2yr
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Mara_Brown_7360
Changes made is great! I feel excited to read the next chapter. I'm just a little bit curious in everything.😜 I can't predict the next event. It's very complicated story, then.
2yr
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Relcey_Mahan
Thank you amiga for inviting me to read your novel. it's nice. good luck! you continue writing novels to inspire others. Pursue your dreams and never give up! mwaahhh πŸ€— 😘😘😘😘😘😘
2yr
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Tirso_Habla_Gamba
Hello everyone! This is to promote my novel. I hope you will find my piece exciting and challenging to read. I swear, there are a lot of twists, hidden scenarios, events, deceptions and everything that will awaken your emotions. I put all of those in the last part of my novel. Thank you πŸ’ Enjoy reading.
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Miko_Laban
The book is very playful in words. Some are highfalutin, anyway. I need to have a dictionary beside me. The story itself is a mystery a lot of questions bothering my mind.πŸ˜‚
2yr
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JEO
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JEO

It's a great story. It's original, with some moments to make you laugh. The only issue I have had is it can be kind of dry at times, but it does not take too much away from the story
2yr
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