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I’ve read a lot of these types of books. I can say without a shadow of a doubt, this is by far the best one I have ever read. Very good job :)
This is genuinely one of the best FF's I've read and I didn't realize it was a TL until halfway through it. It has a very satisfying ending with lots of build-up. Would recommend 11/10!
This fanfiction is exceptional, the beginning is dark and melancholic, but little by little the fanfiction teaches us to value friendship and hope. There are exciting moments and battles. I judge a book to be good when it brings me an emotion and this book did a lot of good.
Well, that's a good read. It has a great concept with a great execution. The story explored a completely different Hogwarts, one where Voldemort killed Harry and he was able to rule over Britain's Magic Ministry. The only thing that I thought was lacking about this novel was probably the character interaction. I wish there would be more interaction outside the plot, where they could relax or something. The story is darker than canon, so a little bit of heartwarming moments would be good.
Worth this review at chapter 30. This story has a very interesting and unique approach to the Harry Potter fanfics, and it filled me with quite an anticipation to read it. Unfortunately I couldn't help but find it a little boring as the author goes on and on with quite the many chapters filled with literally nothing but boring to death stuff with no interesting happening... Also I couldn't help but find the MC behavior to be illogical since he didn't quite consider his situation and there wasn't much hunger for power you would expect from a reincarnator in a magical world and in his perilous situation. In all the chapters he is frankly wasting his time... This is why it will only give this config of three star review since while the idea was good the execution was less...
It really was a fun read with great twists and turns. Really different from generic fanfic but fun to read.
BEST BOOK EVER!!!!!!!!This is once in a lifetime artwork, what else can I say.
Una buena historia -------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
Haven't read this yet... Just thought I could leave my complain.... With the summary/synopsis or whatever. I actually thought it's gonna be a harem fic.. I'll still read, though maybe not much as others I've searched at this point in time.. Still, more power to you author... May you and the others have more positive lives so you can write more works for us to read..
This is gonna be long so here’s a quick overview. Amazing world building an amazing story, 10/10 fanfic, defenitely recommend. Now strap in for a long one: Now that this story is over i can give a review with everything in account. This is an amazing story and one of the best hp fanfics ever. I can’t recommend this more defenitely take the time to read it if you can spare it, it is worth it! It has a few slow moments and it wasn’t the one I looked forward to most every week but every chapter hit, every story beat hit perfectly as well. I’m still fresh of the ending so the only thing I’m sad about is that I thought the ending was a bit fast but I’m hoping for an epilogue chapter to see what the results of the ending are. Amazing fanfic!
Awesome story. An amazing AU of Harry Potter of if Harry Potter died that night, and the development is impeccable with twists and turns. An OC that isn't too OP and has a character development as the story progressed.
I don't know why I waited so long to read this novel. It is a refreshing take on scenario that people seldom think when transmigration of oc happens in a popular world. Credit has to be given when credit is due. The way the author structured the world, used original and hp characters to create this what if scenario world is so good. The main character also has a learning arc and how he makes use of his prior knowledge in this new world is fascinating.Thankfully there was no cliches like system or something op that main character had from the start.Overall it is an amazing work that keeps a person hooked for a long time
I would recommend this book. it has a unique take on harry potter that i atleast haven't read before. i also like how it is one of the few complete novel since many remain unfinished. you will not waste your time reading it. one complaint I might have is that others characters are not developed much. the focus is completely on mc throughout the novel with Dumbledore being the only other character to make regular appearances. others just appear for their arc and then get a couple lines here and there. still this novel is worth a read.
Honestly, everything about the story except the ending was perfect. The MC was good, so was his growth, the subtle romance, the bits and pieces of comedy, etc. However the ending seemed a bit rushed as MC Avatar Aang'ed Voldemort. The writing quality is and has been superb throughout the whole novel. With the update being about 2 everyday. It is one of my top 3 HP fanfics along with 'Harry Potter and the Rise of the Protector' and 'HP: The Arcane Thief'. Would definitely recommend.
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This is about a guy having his reincarnation set on nightmare mode. But that's not all. The author put in recognizable effort so you can appreciate the differences in the world. It's a new and harder journey with the mc hitting many of story beats of Harry did. Having an epic heroes journey despite the difficulty mode. Also the story does some crazy things. Seriously, I haven't seen a lot of these ideas in fanfics ever. It really is great. You will see the early ones soon after starting the story, but some you will have to read to chapter 160 - 165 to get. - And about the top comment. Personally I say go ahead. It isn't a depressing story like some reads where the mc can never get a win. Or ones where many people are gutwrenchingly killed in a hopeless fashion. Or ones where you can just tell things end in tragedy. Etc. It has dark undertones, but it isn't a dark story to put it simply.
Surprisingly good. Contrary to the usual walk in the park, well- worn path that most fics take of going through Hogwarts , this novel flips the setting on its head, making it seem grimdark and depressing, while putting your favourite characters in it. Rather than make it depressing, this grimdark nature makes the novel more tense, as there seems to be real struggle and challenge, while the author also knows when to control himself and lets the protagonist gradually turn the situation around. Beyond that , characters are developed, action intense, and storyline logic al
Honest review up to chapter 45. I tried reading this 9 month ago, it was dark, it was slow, I gave up on chapter 3. I came back, I read to 45. tldr: Don't recommend if you like a competent MC with some ambition and can't tolerate one that was an adult but doesn't act or thinks like one. The "cheat" the MC got is original and built into the world, and makes you keep thinking: This is stupid, how is this an advantage? The premise is unique, first time I read no Harry Potter or variation or prophecy of some kind (as of chapter 45). Writing quality 4/5 - No typos. Grammar is not great, grammar alone is 3/5. Readable but you are constantly aware its not natural. Updates 5/5 - Wish every novel was like this. Story 2/5 Character 2/5 World 1/5 All three tie together. The progress is slow, bloated with description of everything, anything to add words. The story starts with a unique premise, it also builds some expectations: A transmigrator that is familiar with the original story, formerly an adult (allegedly), you expect that as an adult thrown into a dangerous world and finding he has magic he would be the definition of cliche MC and start is training montage and never stop? This MC can be described as: Takes if bloody fkcing time. He does NOT act like he was ever an adult, unless he was the delusional kind that has zero understanding how the real world is. Point, not one you would enjoy reading if you like a capable, competent MC. The author points out, mocks in a way, how the original story was riding the plot armor. It very much feels like the author created this twisted world then somehow tried to maintain the same plot line: The stone, the attacks (troll in the original, DE in this one), it does not work. To add to this, the characters have not changed at all due to their bad life, the same "light" faction and don't kill, the same: Teach them slowly over 7 years. The kids are the same, like the MC, none of them any sort of ambition to grow stronger, to be fighters, to get ready. You would expect hard training to be basically soldiers or fighters, nope, start with lumos. Point is, other than this world being darker, the premise of the story has zero impact on actions and thoughts of people. At times Dumby is shows as being... dumb, to a degree you have to ask: How did they survive so far? Plot armor, all the time and lots of it. The MC has no cheat, he is somewhat talented in magic. The author decided to make up some weird artifact that allows the MC to cast magic on himself, like the levitation charm which normally does not work, but its hard, the MC will spend the better part of 20 chapters to get it somewhat to work, its poorly explained and the comments are full with: this makes no sense. This could have been great, in fact, just making the MC better would have resolved most of the issues, but he is not better and its not great. The worse part: The translator spends so much time translating what I can only consider as a sub par story, its not really a fanfic with how much things were changed.
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I'm in love with this story ❤️❤️❤️ The Characters, the course of the story, the fighting scenes, and solving the puzzles, everything's is perfect
I tried to give it more chances, but now I'm wondering, if you're translating books, why don't you go and choose only the best ones to translate, you too will have realized that this is not a good book, so why continue?
101 stone.......shubh hota hai...................................................................................................................................
Just......really good. Almost feels like a Harry Potter book series in a What if scenario. Good writing and fight scenes, the characters aren't dumb.
I’ve read a lot of these types of books. I can say without a shadow of a doubt, this is by far the best one I have ever read. Very good job :)
This is genuinely one of the best FF's I've read and I didn't realize it was a TL until halfway through it. It has a very satisfying ending with lots of build-up. Would recommend 11/10!
This fanfiction is exceptional, the beginning is dark and melancholic, but little by little the fanfiction teaches us to value friendship and hope. There are exciting moments and battles. I judge a book to be good when it brings me an emotion and this book did a lot of good.
Well, that's a good read. It has a great concept with a great execution. The story explored a completely different Hogwarts, one where Voldemort killed Harry and he was able to rule over Britain's Magic Ministry. The only thing that I thought was lacking about this novel was probably the character interaction. I wish there would be more interaction outside the plot, where they could relax or something. The story is darker than canon, so a little bit of heartwarming moments would be good.
Worth this review at chapter 30. This story has a very interesting and unique approach to the Harry Potter fanfics, and it filled me with quite an anticipation to read it. Unfortunately I couldn't help but find it a little boring as the author goes on and on with quite the many chapters filled with literally nothing but boring to death stuff with no interesting happening... Also I couldn't help but find the MC behavior to be illogical since he didn't quite consider his situation and there wasn't much hunger for power you would expect from a reincarnator in a magical world and in his perilous situation. In all the chapters he is frankly wasting his time... This is why it will only give this config of three star review since while the idea was good the execution was less...
It really was a fun read with great twists and turns. Really different from generic fanfic but fun to read.
BEST BOOK EVER!!!!!!!!This is once in a lifetime artwork, what else can I say.
Una buena historia -------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
Haven't read this yet... Just thought I could leave my complain.... With the summary/synopsis or whatever. I actually thought it's gonna be a harem fic.. I'll still read, though maybe not much as others I've searched at this point in time.. Still, more power to you author... May you and the others have more positive lives so you can write more works for us to read..
This is gonna be long so here’s a quick overview. Amazing world building an amazing story, 10/10 fanfic, defenitely recommend. Now strap in for a long one: Now that this story is over i can give a review with everything in account. This is an amazing story and one of the best hp fanfics ever. I can’t recommend this more defenitely take the time to read it if you can spare it, it is worth it! It has a few slow moments and it wasn’t the one I looked forward to most every week but every chapter hit, every story beat hit perfectly as well. I’m still fresh of the ending so the only thing I’m sad about is that I thought the ending was a bit fast but I’m hoping for an epilogue chapter to see what the results of the ending are. Amazing fanfic!
Awesome story. An amazing AU of Harry Potter of if Harry Potter died that night, and the development is impeccable with twists and turns. An OC that isn't too OP and has a character development as the story progressed.
I don't know why I waited so long to read this novel. It is a refreshing take on scenario that people seldom think when transmigration of oc happens in a popular world. Credit has to be given when credit is due. The way the author structured the world, used original and hp characters to create this what if scenario world is so good. The main character also has a learning arc and how he makes use of his prior knowledge in this new world is fascinating.Thankfully there was no cliches like system or something op that main character had from the start.Overall it is an amazing work that keeps a person hooked for a long time
I would recommend this book. it has a unique take on harry potter that i atleast haven't read before. i also like how it is one of the few complete novel since many remain unfinished. you will not waste your time reading it. one complaint I might have is that others characters are not developed much. the focus is completely on mc throughout the novel with Dumbledore being the only other character to make regular appearances. others just appear for their arc and then get a couple lines here and there. still this novel is worth a read.
Honestly, everything about the story except the ending was perfect. The MC was good, so was his growth, the subtle romance, the bits and pieces of comedy, etc. However the ending seemed a bit rushed as MC Avatar Aang'ed Voldemort. The writing quality is and has been superb throughout the whole novel. With the update being about 2 everyday. It is one of my top 3 HP fanfics along with 'Harry Potter and the Rise of the Protector' and 'HP: The Arcane Thief'. Would definitely recommend.
Reveal Spoiler This is about a guy having his reincarnation set on nightmare mode. But that's not all. The author put in recognizable effort so you can appreciate the differences in the world. It's a new and harder journey with the mc hitting many of story beats of Harry did. Having an epic heroes journey despite the difficulty mode. Also the story does some crazy things. Seriously, I haven't seen a lot of these ideas in fanfics ever. It really is great. You will see the early ones soon after starting the story, but some you will have to read to chapter 160 - 165 to get. - And about the top comment. Personally I say go ahead. It isn't a depressing story like some reads where the mc can never get a win. Or ones where many people are gutwrenchingly killed in a hopeless fashion. Or ones where you can just tell things end in tragedy. Etc. It has dark undertones, but it isn't a dark story to put it simply.
Surprisingly good. Contrary to the usual walk in the park, well- worn path that most fics take of going through Hogwarts , this novel flips the setting on its head, making it seem grimdark and depressing, while putting your favourite characters in it. Rather than make it depressing, this grimdark nature makes the novel more tense, as there seems to be real struggle and challenge, while the author also knows when to control himself and lets the protagonist gradually turn the situation around. Beyond that , characters are developed, action intense, and storyline logic al
Honest review up to chapter 45. I tried reading this 9 month ago, it was dark, it was slow, I gave up on chapter 3. I came back, I read to 45. tldr: Don't recommend if you like a competent MC with some ambition and can't tolerate one that was an adult but doesn't act or thinks like one. The "cheat" the MC got is original and built into the world, and makes you keep thinking: This is stupid, how is this an advantage? The premise is unique, first time I read no Harry Potter or variation or prophecy of some kind (as of chapter 45). Writing quality 4/5 - No typos. Grammar is not great, grammar alone is 3/5. Readable but you are constantly aware its not natural. Updates 5/5 - Wish every novel was like this. Story 2/5 Character 2/5 World 1/5 All three tie together. The progress is slow, bloated with description of everything, anything to add words. The story starts with a unique premise, it also builds some expectations: A transmigrator that is familiar with the original story, formerly an adult (allegedly), you expect that as an adult thrown into a dangerous world and finding he has magic he would be the definition of cliche MC and start is training montage and never stop? This MC can be described as: Takes if bloody fkcing time. He does NOT act like he was ever an adult, unless he was the delusional kind that has zero understanding how the real world is. Point, not one you would enjoy reading if you like a capable, competent MC. The author points out, mocks in a way, how the original story was riding the plot armor. It very much feels like the author created this twisted world then somehow tried to maintain the same plot line: The stone, the attacks (troll in the original, DE in this one), it does not work. To add to this, the characters have not changed at all due to their bad life, the same "light" faction and don't kill, the same: Teach them slowly over 7 years. The kids are the same, like the MC, none of them any sort of ambition to grow stronger, to be fighters, to get ready. You would expect hard training to be basically soldiers or fighters, nope, start with lumos. Point is, other than this world being darker, the premise of the story has zero impact on actions and thoughts of people. At times Dumby is shows as being... dumb, to a degree you have to ask: How did they survive so far? Plot armor, all the time and lots of it. The MC has no cheat, he is somewhat talented in magic. The author decided to make up some weird artifact that allows the MC to cast magic on himself, like the levitation charm which normally does not work, but its hard, the MC will spend the better part of 20 chapters to get it somewhat to work, its poorly explained and the comments are full with: this makes no sense. This could have been great, in fact, just making the MC better would have resolved most of the issues, but he is not better and its not great. The worse part: The translator spends so much time translating what I can only consider as a sub par story, its not really a fanfic with how much things were changed.
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Goood ,this novel need more 1000 cap at least!!! Goood ,this novel need more 1000 cap at least!!! Goood ,this novel need more 1000 cap at least!!! Goood ,this novel need more 1000 cap at least!!!
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This story is amazing to read [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
I'm in love with this story ❤️❤️❤️ The Characters, the course of the story, the fighting scenes, and solving the puzzles, everything's is perfect
I tried to give it more chances, but now I'm wondering, if you're translating books, why don't you go and choose only the best ones to translate, you too will have realized that this is not a good book, so why continue?
101 stone.......shubh hota hai...................................................................................................................................
Just......really good. Almost feels like a Harry Potter book series in a What if scenario. Good writing and fight scenes, the characters aren't dumb.