This is the most confusing novel I'd ever read chap 60 under i can understand but above what a waste of tim suggestion do not read xciegehkwkwuwhwhhwhwjwjwwiiwowkwwjwhjwjwkwowowiwiwwiejejwjjejieiejeueuueueueeieieieieiieiee
such great potential but every sentence is overly dramatic and ruins the novel. Could have been amazing but it's unreadable.
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the design is very monke and the plot is very chinese all in all adds up to caveman author........................................ hmmmmm i recommend this books for snek country
I hate when the translators change eastern names to western names especially if it's only a singular person who's name is changed ( the MC ) 0/10 don't read. even if the story is OK the name throws the whole thing off
Me encanta la historia la recomiendo, al principio lo leà por pasatiempo me gustó mas, además tengo una duda que si el prota va a tener harem o no? Ya que me tiene intrigado esa vaina a demás noce si va a ver de especie humana o de vestidas con forma humana.
Webnovel ought to start doing quality checks on translated novels, especially when they are charging people to read them. The fact that poorly translated content like this is allowed to remain on the site, behind a paywall at that, speaks volumes about their credibility and recent money grabbing rhetoric.
A good start, found it interesting. Then the author got hit on the head by a flying pig. We get Beasts attracted to the MC. Then we get MC becoming a body cultivator. Then we get MC. All the while, losing the Attractiveness System.
It's like playing a MOBA game then suddenly you're playing a Music game, then it changes to a text-based novel game even before completing a level.
The shift in story lore Nd background is very disturbing. Very hard to keep track of what is happening. The author might have been going for Inception style of writing, or something like Dr. Strange. Just doesn't go well in writing.
I do not mind an OP character/plot armor/system ect... Often times those are the selling points of the story and are often in the title. This story reminds me of the "spell is in english" story, in that we start out with the character with his plot armor/system and he goes about doing what those types of protagonists do. But then maybe the author ran out of things to write about and completely watered down his ability or maybe it is almost always off an and he does not want to use it even to save his life and the life of his companions/lovers. Sometime after he gets to the academy he enters a training camp that is rip whole out of some other story and then takes it into some other confusing weird direction. He gets drawn into some trial space with all his classmates where his instructors can not rescue them at all and then it really gets weird. I cant even comprehend a narrative of the events from this point.
I am fine with all the garbage novels being published on this site recently, but there has to be a limit somewhere. The leaps of logic and sheer stupidity of this book is astounding. What kind of novel is already contradicting itself the first few chapters?! The character design is also not just juvenile, but practicly extraterrestrial! Humans don't think or behave like this!
the star of the is kinda great but qfter 100chapter they change the theme from monster taming and cultivqation to purely cultivation, the story didnt even tell what happen to his monster
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the novel could have been good but the repeated use of cliches young masters made it bad it also did not help that the mc has a brain the size of a peanut
Honest Review (Read 43 Chapters):
It's a story that combines transmigration+system+ pet monster+human strength story with a kid from a poor background who trains and gets stronger.
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How I feel:
The System: Super confusing, not really explained much, there are some details given but it's very rudimentary. I feel like the author likes the concept of a system holder and just added it half-heartedly.
Transmigration: Not really much in there, other than the fact that the main character just randomly glosses over the fact that he's a transmigrator. But you don't really feel that way at all. He doesn't talk, act or have the emotions of a transmigrator. Again I feel like the author either like's transmigration/ reincarnation stories and just added it without much thought.
Monster: The monsters in the story aren't bad, the author explains the power rankings in a good way.
The main problems I found other than the above were also the lack of consistency, in one chapter a character has a name, and in the other, he has a different name. The same goes with the monsters, the character is linked to a "Green-eyed Dragon" but in chapters 42-43 he starts calling the dragon blue-eyed???? Also, he gave the dragon a name, yet never doesn't use it?
The book feels like a bad version of Monster Integration and any random system-themed novel.
The quality of this story is just straight up horrible. I'm not sure if this is a original or translation but you can truly tell that author/editor did not put any effort into this. I barely made it to chap 46 but now I got to just give this up[img=faceslap]
This was a disappointing read, throughout the entire story, the MC, Miles, literally has no character development, and he makes dumb choices that either injure his pets and himself, for example, besides the beginning, he does not ever use his Attractiveness Value again, if he would just use it, so many problems could have been avoided, he is literally refusing to use his Golden Finger/his cheat. There are so many useful things he could've done with his system that he just ignores. And the villains, side characters, love interests are all as generic as they come, the villains are a group of people that he somehow offends and manages to encounter every time. The side characters are mostly all arrogant, constantly changing sides whenever someone says something dumb about the MC, the love interests are overall annoying as usual, constantly hindering the MC's development. Lastly, he always causes the problem that he puts himself in, and honestly, I could go on and on, but overall, just a bad read, slightly decent in the beginning, but just continues to degrade as the story continues since the Author obviously has no idea what to do next.
bro, your copying another comic, but with a different system, altho its still good, but reading the same "training" in the school is really annoying, but you still got a 3.6 from me
Honestly, the story is wayy too inconsistent. The mc has high attractivness to the monsters and beast but some beasts keep attacking him despite that, He was even able to control an owned beast before so why are weaker beast even thinkig of atckinghim this story is wayy tooo inconsistent
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