I like where the story is going and how it's progressing. There were countless stories that I have read that did not get you as immersed as this one is. I hope to see where this story goes as I continue on this journey with main character of this novel.
This is amazing. Truly brilliant, with the perfect amount of imagination and creativity required to write a fantasy novel with elves and fairies. The writing is impressive and each character holds a certain level of relatability with the reader. The plot is really intriguing and every scene is so well-written, you can't help reading more. Overall, really awesome.
Overall : the story was great and captivating! The story was all well thought of and planned out by the author, they know where they would want to take the story as it progresses!
Writing quality : it was good and there wasnβt any grammar mistakes so itβs great!
Updating : its stable and consistent with its updates!
Characters : I was intrigued by the characters that seemed interesting and unique! They each have their own personalities and traits that have been written out well by the author which makes it easier to visualise how the character would be/look like.
World background : the world background was interesting which brings out the adventure feels to the story.
My thought : This story is definitely one of a kind and I would really recommend it to be read! I really want to see where this story of adventures would bring me, good job to the author and hope you keep writing!! Donβt give up! β¨
Its not your typical isekai book coz of the unique plot. i am intrigued what happen in chapters 10 onward cozi havenβt read it yet. but by judging it so far , the world building was amazing. i had a feeling all ideas was set in place before you write this book. i was totally immerse. thereβs some minor grammatical error but it was unnoticeable .
Great Story Man. Is takes a while to get to the good stuff but the author makes the pacing work. The personality of each character shows early on And. i canβt Wait to see more Keep it up.
Extremely promising and well written story so far. The characters are explored deeply and you feel a lot of attachment towards the main character as the story keeps progressing. Keep up the good work, Author. ππ
Honestly, a very well thought out story. I can tell that you planned the plot before you started writing. I like how fleshed out the main character is. It makes him much more relatable than the average protaganist.
What angst for the first chapter and I'm loving it! I don't see any problem with grammar or stuff, it executes well, in my opinion. The synopsis is good and it has a mystery on it! Keep up the work, author! ^_^
So far I really donβt have any complaints when it comes to this novel. You can that the author has been writing for a while because his grammar is very solid and has very few mistakes. Itβs a very dialogue heavy novel so you can find solid character development based on what the characters say. So far my favorite character is Kira Jane who serves as almost like a mother figure to our main cast. Based on these early chapters her back story in the one I am most interested in founding out about. Besides her our main four(or five counting Layla) all seem to have very realized personalities. Crow is like a slick talking street guy who observes people(no pun Intended) like a crow would. Mari is the positive force of the cast who is equally as fiesty. Jack does annoy me, however beneath his stupid decisions he has a heart of gold. Sach is the quietest of the group, but comes through for them when it comes to battle strategies and overall is probably the smartest person out of all of them. Lastly, we have Layla who doesnβt really fit into a particular box. Sheβs strong, always ahead of the game, and clearly cares quite a lot about her new friends. Overall, this story has a lot of potential and it updates very consistently! Keep an eye out on it?
Okay, so overall, I feel like this is a great novel. The writing quality is superb, though there might be some places which can have use a more coherent style, and others where some words are repetitive (try using synonyms), but other than that, the english is excellent and the writing is very understandable.
judging by the dates when the novel was released, i have nothing to say other than that your consistency is amazing!
okay next is story development, and to be honest, even though it's a tiny tiny bit cliche (which is good), it has many unique parts to it, like how when he was transported he wasnt the only one. World background and character design are also good, but i would have giving them 4.5/5 rather than 5 if i could. i cant give 4 because its better than 4 though.
good luck, im interested in how this will progress
This is a really nice start with an intriguing world, a clear goal in mind and the plot is looking solid so far. Unique story and characters, had me wanting more!! Excited to see where this goes. I can see the adventure-filled novel here, Keep it up.
This story gets more interesting the more i read it. Isekais usually tick me off because there really isnβt any depth and some authors barelY think about how being in a new world might affect the characters. Thankfully this book is trying to something very unique.
Pros:
- Back and forth snappy dialgoue
- Interesting world building
- Strong characters
- Good pacing
Cons:
- Sometimes it could a little slow
- The world doesnβt seem fully realized quite yet(hopefully this changes as the story continues)
- There arenβt more chapters yet!
Seriously if youβre looking for quality writing and good characters give this one a shot!
I haven't across such a story yet on this platform so it was a new experience. I believe more people should give this novel a try it's really worth the while. I liked the story and the narration of it. I liked the MC a lot and his courage at taking on brave decisions in young age, decision that was going to change his life. So such quality makes you root for him. I am looking forward to the upcoming chapters, keep up the good work :-)
Interesting concept. As reincarnation is the topic going famous these days, if you keep on posting chapters with constant stability this will be one of the top ranked novels in the future.
This reincarnation story is unique becase it aims to buck some of its sterotypes and actually flesh out its world and characters. So many reincarnation stories just skip the world building in favor of the protagonist just getting stronger. While it is obvious the protagonist will get stronger, its moving at a steady pace that doesnβt feel rushed. Each of the main characters are unique and have a lot of intrigue and mystery surrounding them. The story really makes you want to know more! Keep An eye out on this story it has a lot of potential!
The story is very entertaining, and the way that the author writes has some flow in it! I really love the way the first few chpaters go by! It's very immersive! Kudos for the author!
Finally an isekai that has taken the time to flush out and develop its world building and characters, and considering the few that have taken the time to actually do so, my expectations couldnt be any higher. Nothing less tham high expectations for this series amd the events to come
Really a good and interesting read, I got hooked up while reading it, Really liked the interactions and the main character's thoughts. I can see the adventure-filled novel here, Keep it up.
Well, there was no truck sama the classic, but the story is still good and with a unique premise, no doubt it is highly recommended to read at least three chapters before judging such work.
Great story so far I am intrigued on how the author will build the characters. The author is consistent And uploads new chapters which keeps me excided.
Honestly I have to say I absolutely fell in love with this story. The main protagonist really gives you the case of the goosies for the situations he goes through. In a way the author makes you want to just jump into the world heβs created because it gives you that feeling of escaping reality as you would feel going to the movies. I would love to revist this again in the near future!
This book has quite an interesting start and I think the author does a great job of making us feel for the main character. Itβs still early in the game, but I belive this story has a lot of potential! Give it a try!
This story world inspires a creative imagination. It makes you want to immerse more and more into the story to see whatβll happen next. Canβt wait to see what the author has instore for me next.
Amazing read with unique characters and interesting settings. The author does an amazing job of using descriptive language that will make the reader feel as though they are in the book. Iβm really looking forward to see how the story plays out!
Unique story and characters, had me wanting more!! Excited to see where this goes. Author really draws you in with his distinct detailed explanation of the scene. Really helpful with picturing what is going on in your head!
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