Reviews of Welcome To Terminus by Kandpalbhaskar010 - Webnovel

This is brandon gould I am sorry that it took me so long to get to review this book of the chapters that I read I enjoyed the book the story is going at a good pace and the world is desioned in a interesting and unqiue way. The story is written well I will make sure to contue to read to see where the story goes from here

The concept of the story is cool and the exaggerations of the characters make it hilarious to watch. I totally love the funny dialogues and the way they are put. It is weird and yet nice to be in a game. I could visualise the apocalypse and all the things described in the book. I only wish that I hadn't felt overwhelmed by the sudden physical descriptions of the characters. Otherwise, the story is going great and has wonderful ideas to make it seem like the next Hunger Games. I wish you good luck, Author!

I left a review on chapter 38 and thats my honest opinion. I lobe the ideas in this novel and hope it doesnt get dropped. Ill update my review if i see improvements.

The way of putting a 18 year old kid and a 9 year old man ooh just awesome concept, the humour was great too. An unique for for the genre, love to see where it goes

Dear Author, you had an intriguing concept for the story! The plot is interesting. I like the interactions between Matt and Ashton. I wonder who is a kid and who is an adult there... Well done!

This was an enjoyable read! Some of the scenes hold solid humour, and the story seems to be developing rather quickly. The relationship between the two main characters and their home life was established quickly, which made their reactions to their circumstances further on realistic to the matter at hand. The writing could use some work. Oftentimes, it swaps from present to past tense, especially in descriptions and dialogue tags. This can be read over though, and the writing is easy to read. I like how quick the story is developing, and the system seems interesting as well. This book looks open to opportunity!

What I love about this story is that it moves forward at a nice pace and not sluggishly, which really grips my interest. I love the characters, both the boys are so relatable and funny. Keep it up!

Review After CH8 I liked the dynamic pair of the MCs. For a second, I thought one was created only for character development but re-read the synopsis. It is refreshing to see two MCs in an apocalyptic world. Has a The Last Of Us bond vibe. Keep up the good work.

Interesting story. It hooked me from the start. Ashton is quite a character. At first I thought he was overly shameless but later he was just a crazy friend to little Matt. The story flows wonderfully also l liked the introduction to Terminus. The awakening was also portrayed nicely keep it up.

The novel is a really good one. The plot is nice and the characters are entertaining, if you can ignore the little grammatical errors you'll definitely enjoy it.

Interesting story. I recommend this book. You'll always want more of the next chapters. Surely adding this to my library. ................... 😍

I'm not done reading the entire chapters but I must say I love your choice of words. The saying '18-year-old child and 9-year-old adult' is so comical. The characters are built up very well that we got to see their addictions in the first chapter. Nice book author.

Great story. The story is about Ashton a 18 year old child and nine year old Matt a adult. Both of them lived a pretty normal life of orphans but one day everything chages just cause X wanted it to. And the inhuman game of destruction begins. Writing quality - Great, no grammar errors Story development - Doesn't let you down, I will rather say it was fast pace no time was wasted on dally-daling. Character design - On point, especially with Matt despite acting like adult we can clearly see his innocent side while being carefree Ashton shows the will to protect it. World background - It gives the me Maze Runner vibes (I don't know I might be wrong about it. only author can tell property) Should you read this novel? Of course, I will recommend it. Matt and Ashton's chemistry is on point. Though I am looking forward to Ashton's partner since I can't see Matt as someone to ship with anyone at this moment. May be my fujoshi self just need a time skip until Matt is older?

So far this is one of the better ones that I've read from this genre. I'm curious to see where the author takes the story. I like the main character, and I think the author has a good plot and so far it's been entertaining and enjoyable to read. The characters are interesting and the author does well portraying their thoughts and intentions while still hunting that more development for the future. I look forward to the rest of the story.

Give this one a chance! If you can overlook the grammatical and spelling errors, there's a fast paced, action packed storyline here and the character design is incredible! I fell in love with the characters by the end of the first chapter. Keep up the good work author!

It is an entertaining and action-packed story, I really recommend it as a read to relax a bit, it will not disappoint you as it has a good plot that will always keep you waiting for the next episode.

It was am amazing novel. Thanks for the good laugh. I admire the author’s effort on describing things generously. The find it somehow relaxing.

Reviewed up to chapter 8. The writing quality is on the rough side. The POV switches mid-scene - however, this does seem to be a trend on Webnovel in general -, the pros don't quite flow, and there are grammar errors peppered throughout. However, the writing quality improves dramatically after the first two chapters. The story is paced well. While fast, it allows time to set up the relationship between the main characters, their situation, and their initial goals before getting thrown into the plot. While the character descriptions are in "blocks" the characters themselves have personalities. Beyond some of the dialogue being on the janky side, the characters have unique voices. And I do appreciate the relationship between the leads. It's obvious they care about each other. The world has some unique qualities to it. It's obvious that the writer is well versed in a range of anime and pop culture, and that shows in the world-building. :)

interesting concept. The suspense is really good. Wishing the author well wishes for a good writing experience. I highly recommend this book to whoever sees this review.

Interesting concept. the charachters are interesting to read about, waiting to see what happens to them. The suspense, really cool. Nice work.

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I always end up gravitating towards apocalyptic stories and I certainly enjoy how this one is going! Ashton and Matty are quite the characters and I did laugh at times with how they interact with each other! The first chapter is a great example of setting scene, character dynamic, and using cliffhangers to make you want to read more!

I recommend this book to everyone who loves to read about romance, suspense, etc... Basically what I'm saying is that this book has it all. The story is so good. I love all the characters and their personalities. The plot twist and suspense cliff hanger make us want more.The author is really doing her best to make it so good. Thank you for this beautiful masterpiece it is worth reading.

I personally dont read much into this kind of books but for this, the first few chapters was enough to let me keep reading on. The description of the characters were good and detailed while their interaction with each other was funny! The plot wise was interesting that it intrigued me! I hope to see more from it and keep up the good work author! [img=recommend]

Reviewing a flawed gem is never a fun process. On the one hand, you see potential in the work and you don't want to discourage the author from continuing their art, on the other hand, because you see the work has potential, you want to see that potential manifest and not remain in the realm of "what it could be" as opposed to "what it is". So I'll give my honest review, hope for the best and let the chips fall where they will. I'll start with the good, two stars and a wish as the teachers say... I mean they didn't say that in my day, but that's neither here nor there. The premise is interesting. It's very promising, a battle royale conducted by a snarky superbeing? What's not to be excited about? Furthermore, both main characters, Ashton and Matt are likeable. I enjoy the dynamic of their relationship. So that's the two stars, I might have more than one wish, but they all relate to the same thing, and that's the writing quality and style. The grammar is appalling, I mean truly appalling. But for my mind reconstructing sentences as I read, large sections would be unreadable. The novel shifts between past and present tense, and words necessary to make sense of certain sentences are just absent. As for the writing style. It's best described as simple, that's not a bad thing, it aids in understanding, but it's often so simple that certain sections come off as a little immature. Some of the dialogue comes off that way too, it breaks engagement with the narrative when every so often I have to stop and think "No person, reasonable or unreasonable would say something like this or do something like this." And then there are the descriptions. Descriptions aren't a bad thing, but you can go too far with them. The reader doesn't need to know everything about a character or a monster right off the bat. Details can be doled out on an as-needed basis. Front-loading so many details is really quite distracting. Overall, this webnovel is fun, the characters are charming and the premise is hooking, but it's majorly let down by the quality of the writing. Time spent in editing, reviewing everything from syntax to grammar to dialogue to word choices, would really move this webnovel from a middle of the road (for this platform) time killer, to a book people would be eager and willing to wait for.

Good writing style. Need background. A flow that is good but could be improved. Characters are great tho. Not my really my type of book, but I'd recommend it anyway.

This is my honest opinion after reading few chapters. The concept is good. Not the best but surely good because of the pair ~ Ashton and Matt. The conversations are funny between them and one can enjoy while reading. Parallelly, the author also tries to induce the world details in between and the character's growth too as the chapters proceeds. The author has a nice way to show interactions. They are flowy, engaging, and are filled with enough humor. Overall, it was a nice read. Cons (According to me): I couldn't read the synopsis. It was preventing me from reading your work. A synopsis must contain vital details and should be very intriguing cause this is the deciding factor that will make readers whether they want to read or not. And, when I saw the synopsis, I almost dropped your work. Secondly, grammatical errors. I found many of them. I can ignore the punctuations but errors in grammar are a bit too much. So, those need to be fixed. Keep up the good work!! This work has potential. You just need to fix some things and you are good to go.

Synopsis had me intrigued. It's a well narrated story. Characters and their dynamics make this story even more interesting. The world building of this novel is really well done. I enjoyed my time reading this novel. I would like to recommend this to others. And keep up the good work!

The communication and emotions of the characters give you a nice feeling while reading. The author has an unusual writing style, which makes you feel like you are reading something different when reading the novel. It is a novel with a bright future and very open to development. You can try.