Reviews of Lost Souls' Rendezvous [Will be republished] by Luminous_Arcadian - Webnovel

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SEP1A
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SEP1A

This author could write their to-do list and still manage to make it interesting to read. Everything, from characterisation to adjectives implored in this work of art, is magnificent. I cannot praise the writer enough. Marco’s story is heart-wrenching, whole-hearted and full of tears. The characters he meets along his journey to (fingers-crossed) find peace will send you on your own trip to agony land. It is so worth it. Give this book a read and a half - I guarantee you won’t be disappointed.
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Luminous_Arcadian
[Shameless Author] This story is my first novel, and I hope that people would find it enthralling and standardly enough. I'm a little worried about that, but I'll try to do my best. *** We're all lost souls in our own little world, and I hope that through this story, you may find something, anything, that would help lead you to your desired path.
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Happy_Person_8656
This was so sweet! My heart melted at many moments and Ayesha's enigmatic yet genuinely nice personality is a perfect example of commendable character writing. Marco's reactions to certain situations was highly relatable and realistic, making the reader feel connected to the MC, ultimately creating an enjoyable story. Obviously, the credit goes to the beautiful writing. The description was out of this world and the scene development was undeniably great; as a reader, I felt true fear, suspense and chills in many of the circumstances faced by the characters, and that goes to show just how good this was. Overall, I loved it ❤️ Summed up in one word (jk, it's two words): HIGHLY PRAISE-WORTHY
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HANA_4345
You know the story is a good one when you read the prologue, know it isn't fantasy so you need to close the novel just to see the tags and pray that the tragedy tag is not there because you were already shipping the characters for their happy ending. At least this is what happened to me. (sadly, the tragedy tag is in this story) I think my rating says it all. From the prologue I was captivated, and each chapter is developed and described so perfectly that there it leaves the reviewer with just one word: AWESOME! Keep writing! I hope to read more about Marcus and Ayesha in the future (even if the prologue broke my heart into tiny pieces)
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Brian_Hanes_117
Going off the first few chapters, this is top notch. Well done. The writing is great, the grammar is solid, the description is legitimate, and it is a smooth yet easy read. Well done author, I feel like I am experiencing a new universe when I am reading this.
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AuthorShizuka
attractive and interesting book❤❤ the plot seems very interesting🤗🤗🤗 I'm in love with this book and excited to read further chapters😎😎 all the best author
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Enivid
It's a very relatable story, especially to the people who suffer from confusion within thy self. It tells the adventure of a lost soul who wants to find the essence of life and living.
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Leigh_Green
Stunning writing. You pulled me in with the first chapter. I love how you make the story flow. It's like a smooth wave of the sea unlike the crashing waves where Marcus and Ayesha first met by the cliff. This is a lovely novel to start til finish. Though minor edits need to be done. And I haven't fully grasped yet the entirety of the setting. But, Marcus is a wonderful highly reflective young man while Ayesha appears to be a sweet charming young lady.
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Idyllic_Scribe
This is an amazing book. That's it, end of review no but seriously, this book in incrdible. ayesha's character is no nice, it's not relateable. However how marcus reacts to thingd, is how I would. almost to the dot. It's incredible! The world building a descriptiond are absolutely my fav part. The scenic description at the begining is literally amazing, and then as it goes on, the sutle yet needed descriptions aren't too wordy, nor to basic. i love this book!
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ric3cak3
I read a couple of chapters and I'm completely entranced by your writing style. The imagery is just *chefs kiss* It almost feels like I'm IN the book, experiencing everything Marco is going through. Great work author, definitely looking forward to future updates!!
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Ice_Princesss
Wow 🤧 the whole time I was reading this, I was literally pouting. The story is so sad and I love that it is relatable and portrays things that a person may face in their lives or things that their friends face. I believe that whoever reads this book may find solitude and be given hope of not giving up when life is hard, but instead persevering through the trials. Great story. Really really great
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Sweetdreamer20
This story is very interesting and captivating and I like it very much...Every scene well structured and characters playing their roles well.... ❤❤❤
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Darine_ALRAMMAH
This definitely needs a five star review! After reading the first chapter, i just couldn't stop until I've reached the last. The male lead can maneuver us from scene to scene through his thoughts! The writing is amazing and just * Chef's kiss*. The plot line is captivating. I have way many theories on what may happen the next chapter. Can't wait! Excellent work, you're a great author and keep going on!
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Tina_Boshoff
Interesting read and well written. Intrigued to see what happens with Marco and where he ends up. Seems like an adventure with a male lead… Not many chapters but good luck expanding for the future✌🏻✌🏻
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Book_Pen
I loved how the story was well paced and smooth. The description of the character and their emotions was well done. The explanation was vivid, relatable and also the words were efficient to imagine the situation. It is relatable and wonderful plot!!
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PrugnaKerai
This story progresses well, the only flaw which, I would say, needs improving was the author's writing quality. The author highlights the narrative with the use of many adjectives, this, in itself is fine, however these adjectives have not been used to their full capacity which in turn makes the read slightly cliche and annoying. This is aided with the use of 'pointing out the obvious'. For example, "it was a scene almost everyone had gotten used to as it happens quite often" - the reader already knows that it happening frequently is how everyone had gotten used to it, there is no need to clarify. The constant clarification and not leaving things to the reader's imagination takes the enjoyment and thrill out of reading such works of art, and thus makes them bored; and for the author, it is harder for them to create dramatic twists and turns in their plot. I would also suggest to go back and read through the grammar again to spot the small errors which need refining. I am aware that this may be a lot to take in for the author, and I do apologise if it is. The writing and plot were well, the author has potential, so please do not be disheartended, there were only very small corrections which need to be made.
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MayDreamer
First writer you are great you don't need to worry about anything, beacuse what you are doing or writing right now is just the best and how do I express this in words. Just now I read about 2 to 3 chapter and I was able to relate to them as if it was own story. And the way you described the surrounding is just so so so beautiful and fascinating. Keep writing this world needs author like you!
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Proteety_Promi
The writing quality is great and the story flows swiftly. And the story is also very hooking. I'm not a fan of this genre, but I've enjoyed it a lot. Good luck, author. Keep it up!
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Dark_Scholars
What struck me first was your writing ability, one of the good ones here. Keep it up. Just started the book and it seems really good, nice plot, interesting characters. I will add it to my library, it looks like a book I will enjoy.
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Williane_M_P
Sorry for the delay in reviewing your story. The description of the settings made me picture the whole scene quite clearly. It's a very engaging read that surprises in every chapter.
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ClaisiceLouice
First of all, the story's writing style was fantastic! There are almost no noticeable errors. Second, the story's plot to far is amazing and heart-felt. Third, I love how the author created the characters and the relationships between them. I personally like Marco! This story is definitely a good read!
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WhiteVest
I love the beginning of this book, At first, I thought it was a fantasy but turns of to be a thrilling story about mental health and heartbreak that gets me all it my feels. great novel. love it
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Megana4
Interesting, well-written, and catchy synopsis. The author has done an amazing job of keeping the reader interested from the beginning. The characters are well portrayed, especially Marco's. I loved the small details and the suspense in the story. Can't wait to read more...Highly recommended!! Keep up the good work, author!
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bezalel
It feels like a wonderful poem written in a novel-like fashion. It tugs at your heartstrings with its characters, and really encapsulates the feelings the author is trying to convey.
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Aaliyah_Stark_
I love how the story is unwinding. I love how realistic it is and descriptions we written that one can actually picture everything read in the novel. Especially the way the moments with nature is explained. The language is good and proper but the chapters are too long. The theme and genre is justified. We all are indeed the lost souls searching for our own meaning and purpose in life. Let's hope we find then and let this novel be a guide to many [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=update][img=update] Keep doing well authors.
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JJ_Prakoso
Here are my honest thoughts about this novel based on what I have read so far: I do really like the concept for this story and the author writing style in this novel. The story was about a young man Marco who wanted to find peace with horrible households and the build up from him going out to the house is well done. While the writing style feels very smooth and the description in this story is quite vivid. Marco also as a character is quite fine for now, but I believe the author will give a further development about his character when he entered the new world and I also believe the author will give a consequence of his action to make the story much more exciting. As for the side character, they are so far fine for now and personalities are distinct too with another. However, I also hopefully do want to see Marco parent development too after their son left them. Overall that's all I have to say about this novel and this novel has a great potential. Thank you very much and keep up the good work
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Devanshi_Rathod
Amazing plot !! descriptions are crisp and clear, besides that , characters are well set. KEEP UP !! upload more chapters and keep writing !! [img=recommend]
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AarnaReddy
Marco... I feel your pain. Auth..man the story description the scenarios, the feel, the situations everything is infront of my eyes. You really did a marvellous job. I really wonder how marco journey goes and his love Ayesha will change him for better. I just want Marco to find his peace. I literally want to bury his stepmother. I dont know why they all are like that😶 Auth your story has good potential. keep writing. All the very best🔥😍
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Yairy

Exciting characters, fun premise. A nice read on the weekend! I can't wait to see more. This story has so much potential from the little I've read so far. Keep up the great work, writer!
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Saint_Grey
It's a nice story, with captivating plot. I like the way the author explains every scene in detail, making it easy for readers to get the images flying in. My only flaw is the updating stability, I think, the story will definitely be a block buster if it is updated regularly. Great work!
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Hellohworldd
We're going on this little journey with Marco and I can't wait to see where it leads .I'm really curious about Ayesha and him as well, that's going to be interesting . I'm really enjoying reading this book.The way the author describes everything makes it really easy for me to envision it all.I generally love learning random stuff so I'm also enjoying the little words and meanings at the end of most chapters .I've got high hopes for the story so good luck to you
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Mia_McGreen
Amazing... the writing is smooth!! how the author Discription is well written and easy to understand. I was hook at the first chapter. The is pacing is good. I could feel Marco pain.
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Akira_Monadelle
This novel is very poetic. The wording is so smooth and intricate, this writer clearly takes great pride in her use of literary devices. Tremendous work author, I'm looking forward to more updates 😊
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