The beginning was good, but it could've been better. However, the story simply gets better and better the further you read. Watching Chaus grow in power is amazing and I don't think you'll be disappointed.
First webnovel ever. Thoughts and suggestions are greatly appreciated. This was inspired by Eragon and other revenge fantasies. I always enjoyed reading fantasies so I thought I'd give writing one a go.
This is a great and enticing story. Although only four chapters in, I can tell that there is a whole new world out there to explore. There are so many secrets and room to expand the plot and I believe it would be an amazing reveal.
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