With an intriguing story centred around the relationship of one boy and his demon attendant, a vast, neigh, boundless world to explore and some genuinely clever and funny moments, there’s a lot to enjoy in The Tale of the Strongest. It’s a shame that despite all of its merits, it’s mired down by poor characterisation and suboptimal writing. Still, if you’re looking for something to occupy your time on a slow weekend or while you’re riding on your train, there’s a lot to enjoy in this story as long as you go in expecting a fun ride sans depth of character as opposed to an exploration of the nature of man. Oh, and you had better have some thick skin to boot.
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I got so confused at the beginning, I honestly thought the character was crazy from the get-go until he spoke about the fourth wall, I feel like this confusing is an intriguing one that gets the reader immediately hooked, it's not every day you read something like this lol👍
Overall awesome job
Amazing story so far. Interesting plots and we'll established characters. I would love to see more and what's to come in future. Keep up the great work Author. 👍
hmm... definitely an interesting read. The confusion in the start had me hooked and what follows was quite an interesting premise. I guess some paragraphs could be rephrased to sound better, but the writing is clean. some paragraphs were a bit too long, but not enough to ruin the great story. Definitely will add this to my library!
The book has an interesting start and the change of scenery inside the chapter(middle of nowhere- school) gives birth to a variety of different emotions. Although I cant say the main character is likeable from the start.
The story and characters are well written the thing I liked in the start was the main character's personality and that 4th wall breaking 🤣, the story is fresh and unique there are various possibilities of story to move into there were no grammatical mistakes and that made it readable I'll say it's a good read. Good work author
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