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koshi_
Really good story! By reading this till the chapter 16, I can say that the author has done lots of research about vampires.
And our female lead, I like how bold she is. If she want something, she will just go for it.
side characters are also well designed, specifically Hana.
And the concept of mind link, soo awesome!
I totally recommend this to every vampire lover.
Keep up with the good work, dear author.
My best wishes!
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Dream_Catcher23
I am reviewed after reading your latest 19th chapter. The writer takes us to a roller-coaster ride of emotions. I was happy, sad and frustrated too. Being a fan of fantasy romance, this book is one of my best reads.The emotions of other characters were well illustrated along with the leads. Very intriguing plot.
Eagerly waiting for the rest chapters!!
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immortal_shizu322
mann this coverr really pretty
imma already a big fan of vampire stories
gonna wait for next chaps the story thus far is supeerrr good
keep it up author
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Brian_Hanes_117
It seems like a fantastic story. Wonderful description, solid characters, great formatting, good grammar, and the list goes on. I think the only thing I'd like to see is a bit more environmental description and a bit more description of what the characters look like. Other than that, it's everything I'd like to see in a story.
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Scarlet5ky
Amazing novel! Keep up the good work! Can't wait for more chapters to release! And don't keep us hanging, dear author! I read everything in one go, but can't wait now with this big gap in release!
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Junejunian
wahh this book is my current favorite, I really enjoyed reading this book, its really amazing, the author writing style is very good, I'm really addicted to the book
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Anthony_Galloway
Very nice, I really like the vibe of the story, it really matches the book cover, and that says a lot. Read a bit of it and it reminded me of my vampire book that is under works.
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NotBeatrix
Nabi is absolutely hilarious! She had me laughing and cackling since the first chapter! She's a real relateble chracter and I enjoyed reading about things through her perspective! The writing had a few grammatical errors here and there, but the writing still was well done and it does an awesome job of showing characterization and dialouge! Overall, I enjoyed reading and I think every reader needs to check this story out! :)
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Ice_Princesss
Ah I love Nabi! Honestly, I feel like I can relate to her cuz I be like in love with all these fantasy creatures and end up fantasizing over them 😂 Really love the story from the writing to the character development to the plot .I'm gonna keep an eye on this [img=recommend]
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Mi_de0110
Really amazing. I hardly read teen stories but this was really good. The author had really put a great effort into it. Totally worth reading!
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Darine_ALRAMMAH
I just got to the end of this and the way i see it is:
First, THE STYLE is so smooth and captivating like really how do you do that?
Second, THE EMOTIONS you stir in the FM is the most obsessing part of the story.
Third, I HIGHLY RECOMMEND this for anyone who is obsessed with romance. I can't wait for more. A great author with an amazing masterpiece!
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MayDreamer
The story is kinda sweet and romantic, and vampire has always been one of my favorite theme. plus, the description, feeling are well organized and are kind of simple so it won't give you a headache to understand.
Good work Author!!!
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Kara_wish_writes
It has great story for people who love stories about vampire 's just like the female lead. Also it has one of the most unique names for characters
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Luminous_Arcadian
It's a good story. The plotline was interesting, and the characterization was well done. I especially like the female lead's character. Its world background and story development were nicely executed. The writing quality was good as the author's writing style was direct and minimal. There were just a few grammatical errors and typos, but those could be edited and revised. I think that it'll be better as it goes on and with good proofreading. Overall, it was a good story. I wish the author the best of luck!
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cookiez_tiffe
This story has a touch of reality that we often forgot about. When we are confronted with what we had dreams our entire life of, it may not be as smooth as we think it would be. A very great and compelling story. A light and heart-warming romance with a tinge of reality. Kudos to the author and keep up the good work.
Cheers.
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Devanshi_Rathod
5/5
first of all, I really loved the pfp of this novel.
secondly, The start of the story was amusing and captivating !!
The story is amazing enough to keep readers engaged.
loved it !!
KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK !!
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Yairy
Exciting characters, fun premise. A nice read on the weekend! I can't wait to see more. This story has so much potential from the little I've read so far. Keep up the great work, writer!
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Akira_Monadelle
I so related with Nabi, I'm a vampire fanatic too 😫😫. Author put me in the story, Nabi and I shall binge Originals, Vampire Diaries, Vampire Academy and so much moreee!!! This novel is DEFINITELY my type lol as you can probably see. Keep up the wonderful work author 😊
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Mia_Evergreen
Amazing!! not a Vampire Fan but this one hook me from Start. such an amazing story development. the characters are funny and amazing also. Nabi and B are perfect match
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JJ_Prakoso
Here is my thoughts about this novel based from what I read so far:
World Building: So far the world-building in most parts is quite fine especially with the character keep referencing the story about the vampire and the shaman. However, I am sorry to say this when introduce a place such as Cafetaria or even the main character room, I think you should give more description, imagery and elaboration about the place to the location memorable for the readers.
Character: So far the main character Hana is actually quite decent especiallly she is actually a vampire fan which is quite exciting with the thematic of this stories. I mean this is the story about vampire romance and the author has done an unique thing about this kind of romance which is the Mc is A Vampire fan. As for the character, they are all fine for now, but I can't wait to see them more develop as well as the MC and the love interest when the romance begin.
Overall, it's a good read nonetheless even though there is a little bit of grammartical error and thank you very much. Keep up the good work!!!
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ClaisiceLouice
First, the story's vibe and writing quality were light and easy to digest. Second, the writing quality was great. There are a number of technical and grammatical errors especially in the first few chapters, but those are something that could be easily fixed without hurting the story or the plot. Third, the character design was amazing and cool - from the MC's to the other characters. I personally like the relationship between Hana and Nabi. Overall, this is an amazing story. Keep it up!
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SabergKeys
This is fantastic, at first I thought this would just be the normal cliché vampire novel, but I didn't expect it to be written really well.
The development of the characters are fantastic, I can see that you took time writing and thinking this is impressive.
Keely
up the good work bud and can't wait for more.
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Florence_Foli
I have been reading works of authors and most of them write without research. I can tell the author is a true vampire fan because it looks like she did a pretty thorough job researching for her work. A world of sharmans and vampires. If you are a lover of adventure and fantasy then this is for you.
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miu_hozuki
I had a constant smile as I read this. Story is really well executed and has a decent pace to it, but I do feel author can do even better than this. I loved all the MLs and especially the MC(Nabi).
There isn't really much grammatical errors so reading it becomes really easy. There isn't too much suspense and everything is kept in front of you and I personally liked it!
This a really good novel if you are a fan of romance and especially vampires! I'll be eagerly waiting for the upcoming chapters, keep up the good work author! ;)
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IrisSky
A great book for Vampire Lovers.
The book starts off on a good note giving a sneak peek between the friendship and character of Nabi and Hana. The character development is strong and the protagonists are fun to read.
With all the animal and human blood going on. It did give a little insight into the vampire world.
The writing keeps you engaged in the book and makes you want to read more.
It is a light-hearted fun read. A must for a Vampire fan.
All the best author. And keep writing.
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Aravind_S
A good read so far, Characters of the novel including Nabi makes the novel interesting to read, with a good outline of the story plot and well-built world background. All more reasons to read.
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ViciousPepper
The author has done a good job of projecting the complex thoughts running inside every character. The progression of the story and the emotions feel natural and not forced. The character design and story development is a great plus for this novel. Though there are few grammatical mistakes in the first few chapters, the quality of the writing improve significantly after. A great novel... Keep up the good work.
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Samcrowned00
If i will be completely honest, i have not seen a book with this short synopsis before. Even so, the use of the rhetorical question made it single out in a outstanding way. The world building and author's choice of world is superb. But, the author can really find a good cover for this book. Aside this, this book is worth a trial.
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Pixiepiu
I can say it is an intriguing and well detailed plot , Nabi is cute and obsseesd in vampires just like me , well written author ,I love it . I read up to the last chapters.. update more
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Pryges
Okay first of all I must say that I have fun reading those first chapters!!
Nabi is really funny and it makes you want to know what faith had prepared for her!
The writing is good, and the description of the background too. the chapter could be maybe a little bit longer.
There are a few grammatical errors too.
I a little curious about the development of Hana, hope you will also write about it!!
Keep going!
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ohremi19
It's really enjoyable to read and Nabi's reaction to everything was just very amusing there was a constant smile on my face as I read. She is a very lively MC and I somehow could relate with Hana having a friend like that. The vampire described in the story was well written and I would also probably be like Nabi in their first encounter. The author should be careful with the quotation mark because it involved internal conversations. Keep up the good work!
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