Reviews of Welcome to the Charlotte Family. (One Piece, BNHA) by Randomuser855 - Webnovel

I SAVE YOUR LIFE AND TIME DO NOT READ THIS NOVEL BECAUSE THEIR NO END TO THIS NOVEL STORY..THE STORY IS DUMB THE FEMALE LEAD IS DUMB, AND FIRST ACE AND THE FEMALE MC HAVE NO LOVE CHEMISTRY THEIR LOVE FEELS LIKE WEIRD PARAPHILIA AND ACE CHOSE HER OVER LUFFY. THE BROTHER ACE GREW UP WITH IT WIERD ACE NEVER QUESTIONED THAT PSYCHO MC BEHAVES LIKE KILLING KIDS. SECOND THE FEMALE MC IS SO DUMB SHE IS SCARED OF BIG MOM THAT SHE RUNS TO ANOTHER UNIVERSE WITH ACE TO THE HERO ACADEMY UNIVERSE AND SHE ACTS LIKE DUMB VILLIAN. CAN SHE NOT KILL BIG MOM WITH 2 DEVIL FRUITS? BUT THE MC NEVER THINK OF THAT...WEIRDLY, LUFFY HAS MORE BACKBONE THAN SPINELESS MC ..THE MC FEMALE IS SO DUMB AND THIS IS NOT A ONE-PIECE NOVEL BUT MULTIVERSE THAT MADE NO SENSE.SO DO NOT READ THIS NOVEL AND SAVE YOUR HEAD BLOW UP WITH RAGE AT THE END. I have never read another of this author's works because he those not finished the novel.

honestly one if my favorite fanfictions. Gotta love a good one piece/world domination story.________________________________________________

Ok so we finally have an ending so I feel like I can make a rather impartial review now I'll try to keep things concise here. This has some of the most fantastic writing quality I have seen in quite some time here on this site and I quite recomend reading the story for that alone. things I loved here was a female main character and a genuinely good romance subplot that felt quite realistic. If I had to pin down two things I rather detested was the original plot was taken as fate and any major turns away were resisted from on high, and the evangelionesque ending with the mc getting kicked in the face down a tunnel with ace as she no joke "did too much damage to the plot" which happened litterally out of nowhere just like evangelion. Either way if you can stomach the downsides I positively loved the characters in this and would still recomend it overall I do think it was worth the read just like eva was worth watching I'm really not sure I will come back for the sequel though after those events.

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This one's the one on wattpad right? It's pretty consistent and the grammar's not bad. Minor mistakes along the way but meh. I like the story as it goes past the Marineford war. It gets much better with the Dressrosa arc in my opinion. Hopefully this is the actual author and not some copy.